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[scouries]

I’m james r scouries esq. and everyone eventually comes into my world!

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[size=+2]james r scouries esq.[/size]
Multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner, MILLION SELLER,
Author of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story on LITEROTICA

 

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[SIZE=+4]Welcome to ScouriesFantasyWorld[/SIZE]

Home of LITEROTICA’S GREATEST FRAUD

Where Scouries ego is the one and only thing that counts.

 

[Guest]

the scourian readers comment:

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Congratulations!

I want to encourage you and yet give you some advice to think about. For all your spectacular skills (far beyond my abilities) you really should do one of two things; either find a really competent editor or get some additional education in English grammar, usage, and vocabulary. You most certainly do not need help in imagining beautiful and colorful plots, developing attention grabbing hooks, or creating satisfying conclusions - except when you want us to be frustrated!

To be sure, finding a competent editor shouldn’t be difficult for you considering the large royalties I understand you earn for your submissions. I have noticed many, if not most, of the Literotica volunteer editors have some of the same problems you have, and so I suggest you go the professional route....

...Whatever you decide to do, please let me suggest areas you may consider more carefully in your current writing.

1. You have some unfortunate ways for constructing plurals. Once you used baby’s for babies. There will not ever be a situation where “ xxx’s ” will create a plural. You will use a lot of the letter “s” or the letters “ies” to create plurals, and there will be no apostrophes in sight. Apostrophes in this configuration will only be uses to create a possessive or a contraction.

2. Use “they’re” only as a contraction for they are and never as a substitute for their (possessive for ownership of something).

3. To create a possessive use “ ’s”. For example: use parent’s car or Janet’s boyfriend to show ownership.

4. Probably the most frequent and unfortunate grammatical error you make is the following one:

Writers, including you and dozens of others including many Literotica writers and volunteer editors, have difficulty when using a compound with a proper noun and a personal pronoun separated by the word "and". For example: "She gave John and I/me" ... should be - "she gave John and me ..." (direct object); or, "Don and I/me went to the movies" should be "Don and I..." (subject of the sentence); or, "The problem with Pete and I/me..." should be "Pete and me" (object of the preposition with). A simple test to check what form of the personal pronoun to use is to delete the proper noun and the word "and" and try the sentence. For example, say you are writing, "She is going with Jack and I/me"; if you leave out the "Jack and" and write the sentence, "She is going with I/me", you can tell immediately that "me" is correct; it is the object of the preposition, “with”. This test will work with better than 90 percent of the proper noun/and/personal pronoun combinations you write.

I certainly hope what I have said is helpful - it certainly isn’t meant to be critical, only constructive. You are definitely my favorite author on the site.


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Comments:

you're stories are so good. they make me so wet. i wish you lived in CA.

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This will alwys be a five rated story.

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[size=+2]Gabrielle L.[/size]
President, A.I.R.
Secretery of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story clubs
and 2011 Survivor Contest Director
Miami Beach, Florida

 

[lovecraft68]

As promised back to report that I read 'Oh Mommy'. To me it was better than the 'daddy' story. At first I though it was because honestly daddy/Daughter incest is not my cup of tea. Course pregnancy kink is not either so in the end they balanced out. So in general I thought it was all around a better read.

One suggestion? I feel your dialogue is a little stiff, for some reason they sound clunky when they speak but otherwise pretty enjoyable.

 

[scouries]

To me, and this is hard to believe given the brilliance of “Daddy”, I Whispered, “Ohhh Mommy” was an even better read than the 'daddy' story.

Thank you my friend lovey-dovey. Your comments are appreciated.

I think now though that it would be appropriate for you to go back and read them both again. This time as a student, as someone who’d like to learn what the LITEROTICA reading public likes.

For these are arguably the two greatest stories ever submitted to the site as decided by our readers.

"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned He deflowers sister, impregnates mom.
4.58 17764 3412429 Incest/Taboo (English) 12/17/06
Public Comments: 461

Daddy?" I Whispered Stephanie seduces her handsome father.
4.52 30726 2388410 Incest/Taboo (English) 02/19/06
Public Comments: 826



FYI: You preferred “Ohhh Mommy” and it’s hard to fault you for that. Millions of others have too.

However, “Daddy” in many ways has to claim the top spot. It has received almost double the votes, comments an emails that “Mommy” has. Of course “Mommy” hasn’t been a slouch either given that it has the second highest number of votes and comments on the site.

So I can live with your preference.

One oddity of your analyses was your inability to appreciate my dialogue. Of all my writing strengths (and I have many) my command of dialogue is one of the things my correspondents invariably highlight. Again it simply proves that everyone looks at things differently.

Read on… and I’d happily suggest others from my best selling list if you’d like.
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[size=+2]james r scouries esq.[/size]
Multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner, MILLION SELLER,
Author of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story on LITEROTICA

 

[lovecraft68]

To me, and this is hard to believe given the brilliance of “Daddy”, I Whispered, “Ohhh Mommy” was an even better read than the 'daddy' story.

Thank you my friend lovey-dovey. Your comments are appreciated.

I think now though that it would be appropriate for you to go back and read them both again. This time as a student, as someone who’d like to learn what the LITEROTICA reading public likes.

For these are arguably the two greatest stories ever submitted to the site as decided by our readers.

"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned He deflowers sister, impregnates mom.
4.58 17764 3412429 Incest/Taboo (English) 12/17/06
Public Comments: 461

Daddy?" I Whispered Stephanie seduces her handsome father.
4.52 30726 2388410 Incest/Taboo (English) 02/19/06
Public Comments: 826



FYI: You preferred “Ohhh Mommy” and it’s hard to fault you for that. Millions of others have too.

However, “Daddy” in many ways has to claim the top spot. It has received almost double the votes, comments an emails that “Mommy” has. Of course “Mommy” hasn’t been a slouch either given that it has the second highest number of votes and comments on the site.

So I can live with your preference.

One oddity of your analyses was your inability to appreciate my dialogue. Of all my writing strengths (and I have many) my command of dialogue is one of the things my correspondents invariably highlight. Again it simply proves that everyone looks at things differently.

Read on… and I’d happily suggest others from my best selling list if you’d like.
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[size=+2]james r scouries esq.[/size]
Multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner, MILLION SELLER,
Author of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story on LITEROTICA

Okay ummm James,

That's not what I said and everyone can see that. Now this is where you start to look a little silly. I did say the story was better than Daddy, and not bad at all. Let's not go putting words in my mouth.

Now setting myself up for it here, but what the hell? Quid pro quo James go check out one of mine. Don't care which although obviously if it is from the series go to #1. I'll ask that you avoid Allison scores first as well.... it sucks. I posted it for a friend who for some weird reason liked it. Anything else is fair game.

 

[Guest]

This is like soooo gross!

Wait till the boss gets home and I show him this! The first picture is gross and like who are these "grab bag boys" all about?

little ralphie is the first AHer tto show up. As if thats a big surprise.

Hey! The famed MANU Award is there too. And of course miss omega and her friends... even jenny jackson showed up to give him the finger - good for her...

darkboy of course ... and that babe I had to put on ignore...

fortunately the boss is nowhere to be seen...

sr71plt ... and his friends...​

gabby

 

[lovecraft68]

This is like soooo gross!

Wait till the boss gets home and I show him this! The first picture is gross and like who are these "grab bag boys" all about?

little ralphie is the first AHer tto show up. As if thats a big surprise.

Hey! The famed MANU Award is there too. And of course miss omega and her friends... even jenny jackson showed up to give him the finger - good for her...

darkboy of course ... and that babe I had to put on ignore...

fortunately the boss is nowhere to be seen...

sr71plt ... and his friends...​

gabby

Absolutely fucking hilarious!

 

[michchick98]

This is like soooo gross!

Wait till the boss gets home and I show him this! The first picture is gross and like who are these "grab bag boys" all about?

little ralphie is the first AHer tto show up. As if thats a big surprise.

Hey! The famed MANU Award is there too. And of course miss omega and her friends... even jenny jackson showed up to give him the finger - good for her...

darkboy of course ... and that babe I had to put on ignore...

fortunately the boss is nowhere to be seen...

sr71plt ... and his friends...​

gabby

Keep laughing, schmuck. You're shown in there too.

Yeah, not quite so funny now is it?

 

[YoursSINSerely]

This is like soooo gross!

Wait till the boss gets home and I show him this! The first picture is gross and like who are these "grab bag boys" all about?

little ralphie is the first AHer tto show up. As if thats a big surprise.

Hey! The famed MANU Award is there too. And of course miss omega and her friends... even jenny jackson showed up to give him the finger - good for her...

darkboy of course ... and that babe I had to put on ignore...

fortunately the boss is nowhere to be seen...

sr71plt ... and his friends...​

gabby

I miss Jenny. She was okay in my book. I'm still not talking to Scouries, though.

 

[sr71plt]

So, was it supposed to be insulting or something--or even hilarious (apparently Loveydovey is easily amused)? It's a collage--of all sorts of images--none of which seem to add up to insulting. What it apparently did, though, is take quite a bit of effort to put together. Using Jim's time that way is a little amusing, yes. Especially since the response of adults is a shrug.

It did, though, get in a few of my book titles (and at least one that isn't mine), so the wider it plays, the better publicity for me.

 

[lovecraft68]

So, was it supposed to be insulting or something--or even hilarious (apparently Loveydovey is easily amused)? It's a collage--of all sorts of images--none of which seem to add up to insulting. What it apparently did, though, is take quite a bit of effort to put together. Using Jim's time that way is a little amusing, yes. Especially since the response of adults is a shrug.

It did, though, get in a few of my book titles (and at least one that isn't mine), so the wider it plays, the better publicity for me.

I think your covers are hilarious, did they have an airbrushing seminar for abs that day?

talk about stereotypes. You know how they have the term lipstick lesbians, for those porn perfect women in the movies?

We have to come up with one for gay men, I know a few and their significant others and no one looks like that.

Shit I know life long gym rats don't look like that.

Sorry guess I am easily amused.

 

[Guest]

Sr71plt – getting ready to mount up…

So, was it supposed to be insulting or something--or even hilarious (apparently Loveydovey is easily amused)? It's a collage--of all sorts of images--none of which seem to add up to insulting… Especially since the response of adults is a shrug.

An adult? That’s a good one mr pilot.

Actually it was meant to be neither. You’re quite right – it is a collage. And a random assortment at that. And because the sr71plt name seems to be associated only with LITEROTICA the result is this random shuffling of LIT avatars and dirty/sexy gay/straight pictures combined with book covers and darkboy throwaways.

The end result is entertaining, amusing … but not insulting. Just enjjoy it.

And why did you have to take the cheap shot at loveydovey. It wasn’t needed.

Did you really write this book? Gay triplets?

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[size=+2]Gabrielle L.[/size]
President, A.I.R.
Secretery of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story clubs
and 2011 Survivor Contest Director
Miami Beach, Florida

 

[sr71plt]

I'm sure we all enjjoy it.

 

[YoursSINSerely]

You guys still make me laugh.

 

[YoursSINSerely]

I love it when I shut down a thread and leave everyone speechless.

 

[sr71plt]

So, we were saying about your chosen role as a "sweetie" as being to rev the Scouries nonsense up?

 

[scouries]

Integrity will always cum first in SCOURIES WORLD!!!!!!!!

* * * * OFFICIAL ANNOUNCEMENT * * * *

I’m sorry but I have to announce that I won’t be entering a story in this year’s NUDE DAY contest in spite of the contractual provisions of my ROYALTY contract.

It’s my own personal protest of what the LITEROTICA contest system has become.

This will be the first LITEROTICA themed contest in the last ten years that won’t have an entry from one of the TOP 40 “MOST FAVORITE” Authors on this site.

Maybe it’s time that the oggmans of our world start asking themselves why.

I felt it was my duty to stand with these titans and join the message that the LITEROTICA greats were sending:

It’s time to clean up the travesty the contest system has become.

james r scouries will stand with these men and women even if his ROYALTY receipts suffer.

And we’re not doing this for ourselves; instead we’ve taken this stand for the good of the vast LITEROTICA audience who has supported us all these years.

It’s time for change!

And time to

Aren’t we all lucky we have A.I.R.?​

[size=+2]james r scouries esq.[/size]
Multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner, MILLION SELLER,
Author of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story on LITEROTICA

 

[YoursSINSerely]

So, we were saying about your chosen role as a "sweetie" as being to rev the Scouries nonsense up?

I am a sweetie. Get over it.

I see it worked, too.

 

[sr71plt]

I am a sweetie. Get over it.

I see it worked, too.

Ah, just keeping it real for those you have duped.

 

[YoursSINSerely]

Ah, just keeping it real for those you have duped.

Who the Hell did I dupe? I've been nothing but honest, open, and fun on these boards. It's you who can't believe anything.

 

[Guest]

have you heard the wonderful news about our THREADMASTER???

[size=+2]ASSOCIATION of INDEPENDENT READERS (A.I.R.)[/size]


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LITEROTICA’S LIFETIME ACHIEVMENT AWARD

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The Board of Directors of the ASSOCIATION of INDEPENDENT READERS (A.I.R.) decided last year that it would be appropriate to honor one of the giants of LITEROTICA fiction at the end of each of the Special Themed A.I.R. Contests.

They decided to call this new prize, one they believe will soon become emblematic of erotic fiction excellence and the most respected author’s award in the genre, the MANU. This name of course honors the first PRINCE of erotic fiction, a man who’s become a giant in the field of erotic publishing.

the [size=+2] MANU [/size] award

These prizes will be awarded based on the author’s complete body of work. This is the seventh MANU to be awarded.

He’s the author of some of LITEROTICA’S greatest stories (“Ohhh Mommy”, I Groaned, “Daddy”, I Whispered, Allison’s Ankle, A Nun Falls, Swimming With the Dolphins, etc., etc.) while also THREADMASTERING some of LITEROTICA’S most famous threads AND he’s a member of the 100+ COMMENT club, the 1000+ VOTE club as well as being one of LITEROTICA’S “FAVORITEST” authors AND a multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner. LITEROTICA’S renaissance man, he’s the one and only:

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james r scouries

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Joining ManyFeathers, rgjohn, SamuelX, sarahhh, Slickman and Try Anything as the only holders of the coveted MANU!​

Well done boss.

[size=+2]Gabrielle L.[/size]
President, A.I.R.
Secretery of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story clubs
Miami Beach, Florida

 

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[size=+2]ASSOCIATION of INDEPENDENT READERS (A.I.R.)[/size]


[size=+2]

LITEROTICA’S LIFETIME ACHIEVMENT AWARD

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The Board of Directors of the ASSOCIATION of INDEPENDENT READERS (A.I.R.) decided last year that it would be appropriate to honor one of the giants of LITEROTICA fiction at the end of each of the Special Themed A.I.R. Contests.

They decided to call this new prize, one they believe will soon become emblematic of erotic fiction excellence and the most respected author’s award in the genre, the MANU. This name of course honors the first PRINCE of erotic fiction, a man who’s become a giant in the field of erotic publishing.

How can anyone supposedly running an award anoint himself (he does it most nights apparently before enjoying the blow-up doll - Gabby) a winner in his own contest. Credibility - - zero.

the [size=+2] MANU [/size] award

These prizes will be awarded based on the author’s complete body of work. This is the seventh MANU to be awarded.

He’s the author of some of LITEROTICA’S greatest stories (“Ohhh Mommy”, I Groaned, “Daddy”, I Whispered, Allison’s Ankle, A Nun Falls, Swimming With the Dolphins, etc., etc.) while also THREADMASTERING some of LITEROTICA’S most famous threads AND he’s a member of the 100+ COMMENT club, the 1000+ VOTE club as well as being one of LITEROTICA’S “FAVORITEST” authors AND a multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner. LITEROTICA’S renaissance man, he’s the one and only:

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james r scouries

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Joining ManyFeathers, rgjohn, SamuelX, sarahhh, Slickman and Try Anything as the only holders of the coveted MANU!​

Well done boss.

[size=+2]Gabrielle L.[/size]
President, A.I.R.
Secretery of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story clubs
Miami Beach, Florida

I knew it was coming. The biggest ass on the site has been itching to stick his donkey dong up his mule ass. Just more evidence for TE that this is a fake thread without morals or integrity.

No newcomer should give any credence to the deranged outpourings of scouries. He is a one-man band, with little talent and stitled dialogue, trying to close down Literotica because he knows he is unpublishable.

 

[scouries]

now this has been a darn good day!

[size=+2]james r scouries esq.[/size]
MANU Award Winner
Multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner, MILLION SELLER,
Author of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story on LITEROTICA

 

[scouries]

guess how may posts have now been made on the SCOURIES thread?

[SIZE=+4]ScouriesWorld[/SIZE]​

[size=+2]james r scouries esq.[/size]
MANU Award Winner
Multiple A.I.R. AWARD winner, MILLION SELLER,
Author of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story on LITEROTICA