I have occasionally written flashback scenes to where the main characters were underage, but those scenes have no sexual content whatsoever. A few other stories feature characters who have children, but again, those children are nowhere to be seen when things turn hot.
) be very appreciative towards any feedback, suggestions and further information that helps me to determine, whether or not I can even publish (as writing in itself is not the immediate problem) such a story here, independent on my resolve, not to write sexual interaction of minors.
Hi!Greetings. A new user with a couple of thoughts asking for feedback:
I used to be a reader of lit-stories many years ago. Inspired by some of them, I decided to start writing a series myself.
As I have chosen to go the rough way and write fictional incest (can it be tougher for starters?) I was already wondering, whether or not involving regular 'flashbacks' to younger days of the characters would be allowed.
Let me be very clear: there will not be any sexual interaction between characters under 18.
I would personally dislike that and intend not to bother myself, lit or any of its readers with that.
However, due to me wanting to write a longer, ongoing series of multiple chapters with defined and growing characters and setup, I have come to the conclusion that my story will need character development through a slow introductional chapter that excludes explicit erotic interaction among characters, yet include first seeds for motives. I have yet to decide, whether or not situations like "accidentally caught in the shower" are worthful utilities within the story.
Having that said, the chapters will always be starting by fictional dates (which I intend to use regularly within longer chapters as well), the fact that characters are 18+ will be determined within the story and in remarks before each chapter. I clearly intend to point out the "current" age of characters within the story, not at last because birthdays are briefly (or intentionally elaborated) means to progress the story.
Regardless, due to the vast amount of work and freetime that will be put into such an ongoing series of chapters, I, of course, would like the opinion of lit and it's users. Does my approach seem to be sensible?
I would seriously regret spending a lot of time and effort in writing my first story, just to see it never being published for others to enjoy (or criticize) due to potential lack of attention on lit's rules, my unawareness of content-guideline-customs or any such problem that ought to be avoided before even beginning to write.
Nonetheless, I believe my story would also/therefore benefit from the ongoing storytelling that, is it meant to be taken as something more than a plain hip-shaking-festival, lives and develops through memories and timelines before actual sexual encounters (which yes, will happen later in the timeline. It is lit after all) despite an ongoing timeline of the story (for everyones sake, naturally).
As one of the main characters in my story would point out:
I would therefore (yes, I sometimes conclude
Thankfully, Smiling Patience
Ultimately, it's up to Laurel and Manu (Literotica's admins) to decide on a case by case basis whether a situation passes muster. If they do reject your submission, don't take it personally. You can always make the appropriate changes and resubmit.
I don't think Manu has anything to do with the story submission contents.
The more you bang on about their teen years, the more you start pushing the line. One or two sentences, simple statements with no embroidery, will get you by; twenty-two sentences, not so much.I would therefore (yes, I sometimes conclude
Thankfully, Smiling Patience
You are being a bit coy about what exactly is going on, but 'fetish with 16 yo' isnt going to fly here whatever it is and however much it succeeded.
I disagree, but we'll see. I don't know how much problem the censor can find in a girl going home and having dinner with her family.
You disagree that a fetish with a 16 y.o. will be okay with Laurel? Why not just make the character 18? Going home and having dinner with her family is not a fetish. Spell it out, what is the fetish?
Disingenuous attempts to find and exploit gray areas in the underage rule is why the rest of us have to be nervous about including underage characters at all.
Defensive much? You should reread my post and understand that is not at all what I'm doing. Or not, you can just get outraged
This is a kink site, who am I to shame you for whatever rocks your boat.
You're the one talking about a fetish and 16-17yos. Sure, you've said the fetish is 'innocent', but seeing as a fetish is 'a form of sexual desire', the fetishiser will be seeing the person innocently portraying the fetish in a sexual light.Defensive much? You should reread my post and understand that is not at all what I'm doing. Or not, you can just get outraged
The last "victim" of my story: https://www.literotica.com/s/11-minutes-of-bliss
Highschool is its own subdivision of the underage topic.
Fucking clown weirdos.
I've stopped trying to make the point but that is my point. I write autobiographical stories. I'd like to be able to give context to my behaviour and not jusy have people assume that someone pressed 'slut' on my remote control then took out the batteries.
This always brings me back to that episode of CSI-not sure which series-where they found out a couple killed a clown and kept the costume so the husband could wear it when they had sex.You fuck clown weirdos?
