watching the bodybuilder eat

[Angeline]

No, you weren't fake. I was referring to something senna said...
Anyway, you'll have to do what I did. Once you get all this advice on your poem, step back for awhile, then it'll be easier to revise it. I spent about a month on my poem Bread and worried Ange to death during the process. lol But finally some of her suggestions (and fly's) sunk in and inspired me to write a better poem.

I worry about you anyway. I always worry about people I love. I think it's a Jewish thing. At least that's what my mother always claimed. Now I'd deeply appreciate it if you'd worry about me. Thank you.

 

[Senna Jawa]

I worry about you anyway. I always worry about people I love.

I see, when you love Eve then you are allowed to indulge in discussing her short e e cummings. I guess, I should fall in love with Eve too.

 

[WickedEve]

I see, when you love Eve then you are allowed to indulge in discussing her short e e cummings. I guess, I should fall in love with Eve too.

You may discuss them, just in another thread or via PM.

 

[Senna Jawa]

You may discuss them, just in another thread or via PM.

Yawn. (You used to have sense of humor).

 

[WickedEve]

Yawn. (You used to have sense of humor).

And I used to have sex. Hey, that must be my problem.
Don't mess with a divorced mom who doesn't get out much. Poetry, the secret box under my bed, and my kids are about all I have.

Borrowing this from my youngest, "Talk to the butt."

 

[Senna Jawa]

silver lining

And I used to have sex.

Now you write better poems .

 

[Cub4ucme]

Now you write better poems .

See what happens when you forget about the poetry.


It's inevitable and hardly worth it.


Just my take.


some little guy with a big mouth!