we need an october challenge

[butters]

swallow my heart
it lurches, erratically
run! run for cover!
don't stumble between those blue steel rails
heroes, ghosts
there's no forever
the bridge is falling! falling!
train's hot and mournsome breath
seeks some newer way
on my neck
break sweat
alarm bells ring
eyes break on day

 

[UnderYourSpell]

swallow my heart
it lurches, erratically
run! run for cover!
don't stumble between those blue steel rails
heroes, ghosts
there's no forever
the bridge is falling! falling!
train's hot and mournsome breath
seeks some newer way
on my neck
break sweat
alarm bells ring
eyes break on day

I get dreams like that!

 

[butters]

I get dreams like that!

bloody hell, i don't envy you them

 

[Angeline]

This is quite a batch of poems. All effective in communicating urgency though each takes a different approach.

 

[todski28]

Zack, yearning
xenoglossia wanton voice
urges, take succoured release,
quivering pride obtained,
need moist liquid kisses,
jousted inner heat
garners flaming embers,

drinking carnality before
abstinence