Mastered_again
Another Wordy Bitch
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- Feb 9, 2022
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Struggling with installment 16 of my Proclivities series. It's my first venture into Group (mff) and proving more difficult than I'd anticipated. Dialog for 3 is a challenge, trying to minimize the I/he/she said, hoping the reader will know who's speaking because what's being said.
When writing the sex, I feel I'm over-writing for clarity's sake, then simplify it, only to leave out critical details.
Although I'm determined to finish it (I think the storyline is pretty good), it will probably mark my only foray into this category.
When writing the sex, I feel I'm over-writing for clarity's sake, then simplify it, only to leave out critical details.
Although I'm determined to finish it (I think the storyline is pretty good), it will probably mark my only foray into this category.