My Erotic Tale
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My Erotic Tale said:ZMP ~
I saw some clouds
there were five
slowing floating
they drifted by
all these clouds
seem the same
one by one
softly sails
in the distance
saw them go //dropped the "I"//
then I watched
new ones grow.
LeBroz said:Been so busy
battling with ©
Looked for Art
he's so serene.
Okay - a bit over the top - did like your clouds - hope my suggestions help it flow.
My Erotic Tale said:ZMP ~ thinking clouds
I saw some clouds
there were five
slowing floating
they drifted by.
All these clouds
were not the same
one by one
softly sailing.
In the distance
I saw them go
then I watched
new ones grow.
I had a thought
or two of this
they slowly grew
into a cloud adrift.
hey leon,
always glad to see your insight, this was what was submitted...a tad different and hoipefully better...<grin>
wildsweetone said:i have an expectation that the word 'sailing' should rhyme with the word 'same'.
wildsweetone said:do you mean 'acceptance'...?
wildsweetone said:~~~
ac·cep·tance
n.
1. The act or process of accepting.
2. The state of being accepted or acceptable.
3. Favorable reception; approval.
4. Belief in something; agreement.
5. Abbr. acpt.
1. A formal indication by a debtor of willingness to pay a time draft or bill of exchange.
2. A written instrument so accepted.
6. Law. Compliance by one party with the terms and conditions of another's offer so that a contract becomes legally binding between them.
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ex·cept
prep.
With the exclusion of; other than; but: everyone except me.
conj.
1. If it were not for the fact that; only. Often used with that: I would buy the suit, except that it costs too much.
2. Otherwise than: They didn't open their mouths except to complain.
3. Unless: “And ne'er throughout the year to church thou go'st/Except it be to pray against thy foes” (Shakespeare).
v. ex·cept·ed, ex·cept·ing, ex·cepts
v. tr.
To leave out; exclude: An admission fee is charged, but children are excepted.
v. intr.
To object: Counsel excepted to the court's ruling.
Idiom:
except for
Were it not for: I would join you except for my cold.
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-ance
suff.
1. State or condition: absorptance.
2. Action: continuance.
[Middle English, from Old French, from Latin -antia, n. suff. (-ant, -ant + -ia, n. suff.), and from Latin -entia(-ent, -ent + -ia, n. suff.).]
~~~
how are they the same?
wildsweetone said:some people have difficulty accepting that change can be an improvement and take exception to new ways.
My Erotic Tale said:ZMP~ misty morning
light filters the morning sun
over dew rising
a mist that hovers over
grass blades sparkling
lingering mist that trails
and floats away
the sun's rays chasing
misty morning haze
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My Erotic Tale said:ZMP~ misty morning
light filters the morning sun
over dew rising
a mist that hovers over
grass blades sparkling
lingering mist that trails
and floats away
the sun's rays chasing
misty morning haze
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quasar said:If I might ask,
I read several of your lovely Zen Poems and was curious about the ZMP, What is its meaning? Could or should others use this title that seems to draw readers like the flags of Asian Temples that signify that the Zen Master is in for consultation? I will make an attempt to create a work worthy and await your reply.
Q
Du Lac said:Passing Thoughts
Do not believe
because you read it in a book
Do not believe
because you saw it on television
Do not believe
because science says so
Do not believe
because a famous person says so
Do not believe
because a wise person believes in it
Do not believe
because your best friend believes it
Do not believe
because everyone else believes it
Do not believe
because others have believed in it for thousands of years
Do not believe
because you've heard it so many times before
Do not believe
because you are told, you must
Do not believe
because others expect you to
Do not believe
because it gets you accepted
Do not believe
because it will make your parents happy
Do not believe
because it will get you noticed
Do not believe
because you want to believe
Do not believe
because you can't afford not to
Do not believe
because it helps you to cope
Do not believe
because you must believe in something
Do not believe
because it makes sense
Do not believe
any of this......
Believe only that, ''you are''
and do not even believe that
for that is,
beyond belief~
(Author Unknown)
Adrienne Barnathan