2'nd ooc: High school blues
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hybirdx said:
*Marks Hy's paper 85%*
Hi is Fire / Flame ... not Ho or Ka
In the Dictionary ... Hokage is a light ...
But it does use the Kanji meaning Flame (hi) & Shadow (kage) ...
Tenkage does not exist in the Dictionary ... Well at lease the one I have ... Sanseido's New Concise Japanese-English Dictionary ...
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Okay on the second page of HSB, I already have a peace of for shadowing between Rikku and Lee's conection.
(I began to walk home beint tailed by the cat. Damn even the cat seems to recanize me. But that probably be cause of my scent.) I quote myself.
This piece takes place when Lee is walking home as a girl, note that when he first met the cat he was a guy. And ofcoarse the cat is Rikku in full cat form.
I'm thinking were the problem in forshadowing is, well actully two problems, one we don't pick it up very well, and two we don't keep the hints going long enough. Prehpas I should be mroe bold with out telling you, then be even more bold, then finally tell you, that way you have plenty of time to think about it.
(I began to walk home beint tailed by the cat. Damn even the cat seems to recanize me. But that probably be cause of my scent.) I quote myself.
This piece takes place when Lee is walking home as a girl, note that when he first met the cat he was a guy. And ofcoarse the cat is Rikku in full cat form.
I'm thinking were the problem in forshadowing is, well actully two problems, one we don't pick it up very well, and two we don't keep the hints going long enough. Prehpas I should be mroe bold with out telling you, then be even more bold, then finally tell you, that way you have plenty of time to think about it.
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Yeah but practice makes perfect. Also I like the idea of building the back ground of a character slowly besaides if your completely forwad it takes out alot of the mystery and thats one of the best parts of role playing with you to. I really would like to know exactly is up with Eiji and Mai's past. Same with Yoshiro and Tetsuru. We have many great characters with exciteing pasts. But aslong as the story may be continued I'd be upset to know.
Still once it's on the next page I may ask because things don't seem likely to recover at that point. Allthough I still have hope of this one comeing back, we just need JC. Prehaps when she comes back we can wrap up things with her father, honestly I think your the only one who seems capable of manageing the flow at this point. (JC if you read this, I simply mean I don't think you and I work very well udner the stress.)
Still once it's on the next page I may ask because things don't seem likely to recover at that point. Allthough I still have hope of this one comeing back, we just need JC. Prehaps when she comes back we can wrap up things with her father, honestly I think your the only one who seems capable of manageing the flow at this point. (JC if you read this, I simply mean I don't think you and I work very well udner the stress.)
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I lack the skill to create new characters on a scale needed for new enviorments. JC, I feel is quite capable, but with school right now I doubt she can, even if she does come back. (God I hope she does.) Also you always seem to have some sort of plot in mind, something I fail to do beyond my characters.
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Yes we definitely do. But I feel you should still manage the flow of time and the main plot. Despite having control of Katala for his first fight, his second appearance as a villain, and even now I simply am not in touch with who he truly is, because you made him. Granted while he is in Lee's body I would never allow any one else to control him.
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*watches from the rafters*
