A recent experience

[BentSecrets]

That is always the risk you take when you tell a story on a public space.

You would get the same reaction if you'd posted it to the stories section. Someone might show up at your blog and ask the same questions that I've asked.

yes, the woman has just as much responsibility as you do-- but she isn't the one telling the story. Even if you made it clear that she, or you, sluffed off, at least that would provide an explanation. Just make sure you tie the loose ends, that's all. Readers hate loose ends. They hate loose ends worse than they hate unhappy endings.

I understand that, but the fact of the matter is that there *are* loose ends, none of which do I have any power to affect. It's a bummer if readers are disappointed, but I'm not willing to sacrifice the integrity of what's true just so people can feel comfortable . If it were a fictional story I'd make the adjustments and not look back. Since it's not, I have to let the truth stand as it is, and not pretend it's something it isn't. I hope you can understand that I think the truth is more important than a pretty bow, even though I do understand how it's frustrating

 

[Stella_Omega]

Actually the only person in this thread who's pissy and foot stompy is you. If you have any sort of decency whatsoever, you'll leave it alone and walk away.

Meet Amy, who talks like a man, but says things women say.

It's fun watching people try to figure out what is making them so angry.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I understand that, but the fact of the matter is that there *are* loose ends, none of which do I have any power to affect. It's a bummer if readers are disappointed, but I'm not willing to sacrifice the integrity of what's true just so people can feel comfortable . If it were a fictional story I'd make the adjustments and not look back. Since it's not, I have to let the truth stand as it is, and not pretend it's something it isn't. I hope you can understand that I think the truth is more important than a pretty bow, even though I do understand how it's frustrating

You don't have to make a pretty bow. I'm not talking about happy-ever-afters, not every story has to end with kittens and rainbows.

The loose ends in this story are still the same things I've mentioned; you played unsafely, and you barely acknowledge that-- within the story. The reader-- or at least, the female readers, or the ones who have lost someone to AIDs-- immediately want to know why you made that choice. That's a loose end. You don't have to pretend you wrapped your peen if you didn't.

And of course, the second one is that she disappeared quite suddenly under what might have been bad circumstances. You are powerless to do anything about that, it's understood. So the loose end is; do you care? Did you worry even for a minute for her? Might be yes, might be no: But the readers want to know how you felt about that. Again, you don't have to pretend that she dropped in the next day all hunky dory. And I HOPE the answer to how you felt would be a little bit romantic- like; "Of course I wonder and worry, and i wish I could see her again. I'll never forget her divine presence" etcetera

But again-- bunnies and unicorns are not necessary. Not really.

Does that make sense?

 

[Safe_Bet]

Actually the only person in this thread who's pissy and foot stompy is you. If you have any sort of decency whatsoever, you'll leave it alone and walk away.

The guy who has unprotected, unsafe sex and endangers both himself and all of his sexual partners is telling me that "if I had any decency"... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Meet Amy, who talks like a man, but says things women say.

It's fun watching people try to figure out what is making them so angry.

Yeah, well, you know how well I deal with guys telling me what I HAVE to do, now don't ya...

P.S. "Meet Amy, who talks like a man" = Did you have to go there? You've GOT to know how insulting I'd think that sounds, right?

 

[Stella_Omega]

Of course I knew. But some things have to be said regardless.

 

[BentSecrets]

You don't have to make a pretty bow. I'm not talking about happy-ever-afters, not every story has to end with kittens and rainbows.

The loose ends in this story are still the same things I've mentioned; you played unsafely, and you barely acknowledge that-- within the story. The reader-- or at least, the female readers, or the ones who have lost someone to AIDs-- immediately want to know why you made that choice. That's a loose end. You don't have to pretend you wrapped your peen if you didn't.

And of course, the second one is that she disappeared quite suddenly under what might have been bad circumstances. You are powerless to do anything about that, it's understood. So the loose end is; do you care? Did you worry even for a minute for her? Might be yes, might be no: But the readers want to know how you felt about that. Again, you don't have to pretend that she dropped in the next day all hunky dory. And I HOPE the answer to how you felt would be a little bit romantic- like; "Of course I wonder and worry, and i wish I could see her again. I'll never forget her divine presence" etcetera

But again-- bunnies and unicorns are not necessary. Not really.

Does that make sense?

Makes sense enough I suppose . I certainly hope she's alright (what sort of monster wouldn't?), and based on her replies, terse as they were, it seems she's at least not been beaten to death. I'd love it if she got free of her neglectful, jerkish hubby and went to stand on her own, whether or not she ever decided to play with us again . And suffice to say she is unforgettable--not too many women cum so easily as she did, and it was an extraordinary delight to be able to bring her off so many times and in so many ways (pleasing my partner is my #1 favorite thing

 

[BentSecrets]

The guy who has unprotected, unsafe sex and endangers both himself and all of his sexual partners is telling me that "if I had any decency"... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!




Yeah, well, you know how well I deal with guys telling me what I HAVE to do, now don't ya...

P.S. "Meet Amy, who talks like a man" = Did you have to go there? You've GOT to know how insulting I'd think that sounds, right?

Nobody said you "have" to do anything. I asked you politely to please step away since you've nothing positive to contribute. The deed is done, it's in the past--end of story.

And with that, I'm done here. It's clear that Lit isn't a good place to share experiences unless they're trite and utterly phony. Thanks for clarifying that, and adios.

 

[cockringerny]

The best head I ever got was in Queens in an alley by this Latina shemale. She had the face and body of J. Lo, no lie. That glossy lipstick ring she left around the base of my cock...gaddamn...she blew me as the sun was rising in Jackson Heights. We were standing in someones driveway against their house in the shadow. Her friend waited on the corner nearby. I felt her up as she squatted in her heeled boots sucking my cock and mouthing my balls. I came down her throat and she kissed me goodbye.

Amazing

 

[BentSecrets]

The best head I ever got was in Queens in an alley by this Latina shemale. She had the face and body of J. Lo, no lie. That glossy lipstick ring she left around the base of my cock...gaddamn...she blew me as the sun was rising in Jackson Heights. We were standing in someones driveway against their house in the shadow. Her friend waited on the corner nearby. I felt her up as she squatted in her heeled boots sucking my cock and mouthing my balls. I came down her throat and she kissed me goodbye.

Amazing

W00t for TS's, and MEGA W00t for Buffy quotes

 

[cockringerny]

Recently let some married guy lick and suck my balls through a gloryhole while I stroked to some porn. I found a 'bookstore' in my area with booths and real gloryholes. not the slots under the glass, but nice fist sized holes drilled between the booths.

yay

 

[avrgblkgrl]

Ooops!

I went to a wedding and at the Baccalaureate Party I was seriously inebriated.
We were at a bar and I pulled up my shirt, letting a very cute guy (old enough
to be my son) suck on my nipples. In exchange he let me look a the piercing he
had on his cock. It apparrently seems that everyone captured the experience on
their cell phones. But at least everyone said I have beautiful tits--and they are real too.
Now I just want to show my tits to everyone before they start sagging!

 

[BentSecrets]

So, I guess there's a relatively happy ending after all. Yesterday I received an email from her, saying she'd left her husband and moved out on her own. She's not in a place to have a relationship (just as well, I'm not looking for one anyway) but she wanted to get laid with just one regular FWB, possibly joining my buddy on occasion for a three way. So I had her over this morning, one on one, and had a great time. She's looking pretty good, and cumming very hard

 

[warl0ck1]

good story but I also agree with others here you were really stupid this time. you say she has not been with others because "she" said so. well I'm a trust but verify for everything but this. no latex no play or your just going to end up dead and taking others with you.

 

[Stella_Omega]

So, I guess there's a relatively happy ending after all. Yesterday I received an email from her, saying she'd left her husband and moved out on her own. She's not in a place to have a relationship (just as well, I'm not looking for one anyway) but she wanted to get laid with just one regular FWB, possibly joining my buddy on occasion for a three way. So I had her over this morning, one on one, and had a great time. She's looking pretty good, and cumming very hard

Glad to hear it-- all of it!