A story idea to run by y'all

[Chicklet]

anything


but i'm mostly struggling with "non erotic"

 

[sirhugs]

anything


but i'm mostly struggling with "non erotic"

I've never quite understood the rationale of the category, bu try these"


" A mother's true love- why incest is really weird"( Plot: mom looking at he beautiful new baby, counting toes etc...)

" My Squirrel: true love" ( the meeting, the falling in love, no sex)
" My secret crush"

" My creation myth" ( Adam and Eve, big bang...you pick)
" A sensuous guide to Oregon's finest wines"
" Why I write erotica"
"playing with my cats"

did you think up a " loving wives"- I'm surprised that troubles you. even a hack like me can plot those.

 

[sirhugs]

another non-erotic plot

not sure of the title but the plot summary is " waitress slaps fat middleaged married guy who grabs her ass"- I figure you can get 750 words by building it up like a standrad seduction- they arrive for dinner, he imagines he's attractive, he thinks her natural friendliness is flirting, he gradually gets bolder....

 

[Chicklet]

" A sensuous guide to Oregon's finest wines"

i'm not old enough to drink yet, silly!

 

[sirhugs]

i'm not old enough to drink yet, silly!

ynot?
I staerted at 15, the cheerleaders in the road trip were as young as 14

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I guess she means the legal age to drink. I think you have to be 21 in the USA, right ?

I think it is kinda strange. I mean, just look at the pictures that Chicklet posted in the past. She is older then 18, so this pictures are legal. She could also act in a porn movie if she wants to, but still, she can't buy herself a drink unless she is 21 ...

 

[cat20]

i like it. reminds me of a true experience....!

 

[Chicklet]

I guess she means the legal age to drink. I think you have to be 21 in the USA, right ?

Yeah...so stupid...I forget that a great deal of people aren't from USA on here...My comment was a little stupid = )

I think it is kinda strange. I mean, just look at the pictures that Chicklet posted in the past. She is older then 18, so this pictures are legal. She could also act in a porn movie if she wants to, but still, she can't buy herself a drink unless she is 21 ... [/B]

I can also go to war and die for my country (as if i would want to) as long as I did it sober

 

[Guest]

Surprise Guest

My suggestion will obviously expose a mispent youth of sneaking into adult movie houses watching really badly plotted skin flicks, so here goes; What if the two young ladies are attempting to pursue their attraction with one another and they are interupted repeatedly by a series of unscheduled visitors.
Maybe a wrong address pizza delivery by a girl who had attended their high school, a girl with a reputation for being bisexual if not a dedicated lesbian.
What about the arrivel of a women that was expecting either girl's parents, mother of course, to be there. That flies equaly well if it's a babysitter for a younger sibling or the friend of an older sister or brother come calling.
My particular favorite 'mystery' guest is the door-to-door roving missionaries who always arrive at a bad time. As with the real world, a pair of wide eyed enthusiastic women appear at the door, the possibilities are endless there as age, ethnicity and the relationship between the missionaries and/or the two girls allows many permutations of the theme.
My suggestion is to just turn on any situation-comedy and see what inspires you as sit-coms are little more than heavily edited skin flicks with the absence of the sex and nudity.....

Have fun with it.....

 

[sirhugs]

asking for advice

I should probably start a new thread for this, but I trust you guys to give good advice, so excuse my butting in.

Here's the scope: I've done 3 stories, all in a series. I originally planned to go on to another set of plots next, but accidentally ended the third story where it could lead to a fourth. Have I played out this series already, or does it justify a fourth installment, telling what Donna and Michelle do after hubby leaves for work the next day?

here are the links:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51341
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=53357
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=55594

thanks in advance

 

[NASCARaddicted]

What if the two young ladies are attempting to pursue their attraction with one another and they are interupted repeatedly by a series of unscheduled visitors.

This idea sounds cool.

Just think about it: This girls are already playing with each other, so they are either nude, or at least topless. Then, the door rings. They peak out through one of the windows. Let's say, before the door, there is someone like this roving missionaries. In that case, one (or both girls) could open the door ... totally naked. I guess that would really surprise the visitor.

Of course, this could also be "forced". I mean, the girls order a pizza. Then, when the door rings, one (or both) of the girls opens the door, naked. The person who delivers the pizza should be very surprised. So the girl wants to pay, but "accidently", she drops her purse. She turns around and bows down, so that her butt and her pussy is clearly visible ... but then, the "poor" girl "notices", that she has no money in the purse, so she offers an alternative payment - Sex

 

[penguindance]

 

[sirhugs]

Chicklet, are we the ones being interrupted?

well, now that I've interrupted, should I do it? Part IV that is, or move on to other characters....

 

[warpedntwisted]

"La Danse aux Dieu"

So tell us , already, the caractures, flesh them out. Is the one an opportunist, is she a kind soul, had there been a longing fom affar, is the the other curious or just vulnerable?

Speak, oh vixen of the "tush manifique", and bring these daughters of lesbos to a worldly existence for us.

Set the stage, I can almost smell the tension in the gym, the awkardness, the planning, the scheming of young and restless,,,,,, the pain of the broken hearts, so fatal 'till monday, the smiles of triumph, .............

Take us there, to a place we all can relate to, one mo' time.

 

[Chicklet]

Chicklet, are we the ones being interrupted?

once I get my hands on you nobody'd dare interrupt me!

 

[sirhugs]

once I get my hands on you nobody'd dare interrupt me!

how sweet
but it would be neat
to have some feedback on my story line
is it going fine?
or am i as bad as I think?
would Part 4 likely stink?

 

[Chicklet]

sirhugs

why don't you ask at the "feedback" section?

I've found that when you post questions there you get more of those kinds of answers.

Chicklet

 

[penguindance]

Re: sirhugs

 

[Chicklet]

of course <wink>

i'm having such a hard time with the second half of your story, stranger! i'm getting discouraged...i really want to finish it but every time i sit down i end up on lit! like NOW!

 

[penguindance]

 

[link7777]

Pretty_lil_Stranger and Chicklet.....
You girls are the most.... I always love new Girl/Girl stories and
yours are great. I don't want to intrude or offend but you both
have GREAT bodies.... Dare I say Kissable? Heh heh....
just a passing comment. You two brighten up any forum!

 

[Chicklet]

comin' along

okay i'm ALMOST done now! Just give me, say, seven more weeks...LOL

I'm still planning to post a link.

Okay, anyone out there want to read what I have so far and look for inconsistancies?

Chicklet

Ps - thanks about the body comment - check out my pics thread

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

Update!

Okay Megan And Julie, the other half, has been submitted! Hasn't been accepted quite yet, but just you wait! I'll have a link posted here in no time!

YIPEE!!! I DID IT!

Chicklet

 

[penguindance]