A World Torn Asunder (Closed)

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Nadya 'Nadi' Hal'lima
Age: 21
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The markets of Gammond were a dangerous place for anyone to peddle their wares. It was not that it was violent. Well, not particularly so. It was the shrewd businessmen, who had no moral qualms about swindling your every last gold piece from your pockets. It was the pickpockets that roamed the bustling crowds. It was the robbers that prowled after the sun had set. As the biggest port city on the coast, it was an economic hub that was vital to the region. the Cities governors were rigidly individualistic, refusing to side with any of the many nations that crowded its borders. Economic pressure kept aggressors away. The patrons of the market began to disperse as the sun neared the end of its journey, and Nadya spared barely a moment of real consideration as she gazed at the mans palm with faux-intent.

"Hmmm, your lifeline is strong. You will live for many years, and your children will be wealthy." She looked at his haggard features, and his threadbare clothing. The fool man was spending his money on something as trivial as a fortune telling. His children and wife should not have to suffer for his stupidity. A flash of memory coursed through her mind. Yes... She thought, I can help this one. Nadya wasn't one of those do-gooder types. The world did not permit such people among the less than well-off. But it wasn't any coin out of her pocket. "You will go to the west gate, where you will find work with the ditch diggers tomorrow morning. Now go, I am tired."

"The ditch diggers! There must be more..."

The long day had made her irritable and short tempered, and the young wanderer turned to him, a snarl marring smooth tanned features, flowing midnight tresses whirling about her neck. "No one gives anybody anything in this world, sir. Now off with you." Only children and imbeciles believed in magic. To Nadya, there was just cause and effect. That... thing... that resided in Gammond's inner sanctum, certainly seemed to defy the common man's (or woman's) understanding of reality. The citizens, and the world at large, called it 'the Spire.'

He stiffened indignantly, though where he mustered such pride, Nadya could not fathom. Without another word, he turned and left Nadya alone with her small wagon and horses. Although she was not prosperous, Nadya was getting by living in the thing. The horses were not such great conversationalists, however. Feminine hands patted the two horses heads affectionately, and pulled oat-bags over their muzzles. "There ya go." Her accent was the abbreviated common vernacular, much harsher than her gentle voice.

A sigh escaped her lips as she looked toward the inner city, at the towering spike of metal and eery blue light. Cults had arisen around its mystery in the past. A myriad of movements had rose and fell. Now, it was the Order. The Order dominated the spiritual life of the people, and no ruler was legitimate without their approval. But none of them had any concrete knowledge of the Spire's purpose. At approximately five-hundred feet tall, it occupied the skyline with unquestioned dominance. It has a reasonable purpose... It has too, even if I don't understand. That recitation had reassured her for many years. Countless times she had attempted to forget that day, that terrible day. But it was too late. The young woman had already been swept away by memory. Her black cat, Teddi, kneaded her skirts with his paws, looking for attention that was not offered.

*

The adults were arguing. Nadi didn't know why, but it hardly concerned her. They always found their way again. "Peter, lets play!" She tugged the older boy's arm, as they stood amidst the wagon circle in the green fields.

"We can't, Nadi. Something big is happening."

The markers. Like the famous Spire, they towered over the small wagon train. Only these spires were made of stone, and many times smaller. Granite obelisks marked the land of the Godhead, the places forbidden by the Immortal Chosen himself. He was said to be the conduit by which the spirits spoke to the people. Death came to those who violated his law. Nadi looked over at the arguing men, and the women tugging their braids in frustration at them.

"We owe him. If we do not get him the money, he will put a price on our head-"

"Piss on him! The Order is a far greater enemy than that criminal."

She turned back to peter. "This is going to take awhile. Lets go." They argued for a few seconds.

"Fine. Come on."

She smiled widely. "Lets go see the kittens."

"I have something better. You like old things, you'll love this."

Her eyes sparkled with rankled curiosity. "Okay." He hopped down from the wagon and Nadi followed close behind as he rummaged through the cargo. "Look."

He handed her a long, rusty tube with a bracket on one end, as if it had been bolted to something wooden. He also produced a wire frame triangle, with small, exotic components dangling in a loosely connected chain. A flaking engravement near the bottom held strange symbols.

"KALISHNAKOV-47"

It was a heavy thing. "I do love it!"


*

With the horses fed and a with fresh pastry from the baker in her stomach, it was time to check on the blacksmith. She had given him plenty of time to finish fixing her cooking knives. The the crowd thinned as the light became golden, as pinks and violets burst like broken cans of paint over the clouds. Finally, the calming roar or the ocean overwhelmed the busy chatter of the multitudes. Through the intermittent palm fronds that dotted the market of the docks, she watched the scene with a vague smile. This was her favorite time of day.

The blacksmith appeared to be closing up. "Hey! Where are my knives!"

He shook his head. "Busy day today. Come back tomorrow."

Her eyes darkened. "I was going to leave tonight."

"I'm not askin' ya." He shrugged uncaringly and finished closing shop, leaving Nadya with nothing to do but clench her teeth. The scenery was different, but nothing really changed. Holy city or not. I can't very well leave them behind. The wanderlust had taken her, and this was inconvenient to her satisfaction of that need. She would have to stay the night in the market, hoping no guards came to ask her for her commercial permit. She couldn't afford a room at an inn. Fate or chance would have to find favor with her.

Despite her disappointment, she enjoyed the walk back to her wagon. It really was beautiful country down here. And she did love the southern fashion. They were a colorful people. She climbed into the back, petting the large feline dozing on the floor. "Hello Teddi."

Barrels, crates, tools, and colorful geometrically patterned blankets lined the walls of her confined home. She moved a pile of blankets, and stared wistfully at the ancient jumble of iron. It had been the last thing Peter had given her. Nadya was in the woods at the time. Peter had always been slower. Thats when she heard the explosion. When she turned, all that was left was a smoking crater. When she had finished crying, when a few years had passed, she had decided that the Spire and the Markers were the engineers of her family's destruction. She didn't know how it was possible... but it was them. Nowadays, her desire for revenge was drowned out by the curiosity of one who had been denied information. Curiosity.

Although, she thought, revenge may one day reenter into her mind. With another sigh, she grabbed her violin, and tuned it softly amidst the twilight. Slowly, the sky darkened, and Nadya played a lilting, playful melody with the gulls and the ocean as her accompaniment.
 
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Rajinn Hajah
Age: 28
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Rajinn burst through the window with all the power his legs could give him, and even then he wasn't sure if it would be enough. Reaching, as if he could grasp the hand of fate itself, he saw the edge of the next roof growing close but still wondering if he could truly make it safely.
*OofF!*
His chest slammed into the side of the short tower and the scream of a guard, followed by the sound of a body breaking a wooden fence below, reminded Rajinn that he had no time to celebrate his victory as more guards shouted. This better be worth it! he thought as he hoisted himself up to hook one leg on the tower's edge and use it pull himself over and behind the low wall. He lay there, not caring that the guards were likely trying to head him off, and allowed his muscles one moment of peace.

But that moment would not last long, and soon Rajinn was running again. This time a glance told him where a lower point in the wall existed and a quick leap put him on one roof lower. He landed hard, but rolled and was on his feet with the grace of a cat. A short hop put him on a window ledge and a jump put him another window ledge closer to the ground.

There was now way the nobleman's house guards would have been able to follow as quickly and Rajinn thought he was home free. He paused just long enough to look at his wrist and make sure the small leather pouch was still tied to it, but that wasn't enough for him. After glancing around he opened the pouch and to be sure the relic was still inside and unbroken.

"There he is!"

Rajinn tugged the bag closed when he realized he'd taken too long, and a quick curs to his own overconfidence was followed by a jump that put half his body over the wall. A strong hand slapped the stone perimeter and he pushed to swing the other half of his body the rest of the way. Ahead of him was the sanctuary of the city, where he could blend in and vanish. At least that was the hope, the first thing he'd have to do is find a place to turn his garb inside out to avoid future inspections.
 
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Hours passed, and slowly, the stars showed their luminous faces to the mere humans beneath them. Nadi floated softly amidst her music, lost in the artistic expression of her melody. Time meant nothing. Her bow left the strings of her violin at a disturbance in the stillness of the closed market. It was the Order guards. Bloody hell... They were searching the various carts that lined the street, with very little subtlety. A woman screamed at them in a strange language as they tossed her belongings out in the middle of the road. Time to go.

Hurriedly, she hitched up the horses and threw her things into the cart. The gates would be open for another hour or so. Hopefully, she could reach it in time.

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Her path had brought her near to the edge of the inner city, a walled off place where only nobles and academics resided. She had managed to avoid the guards attention for the most part. Hazel eyes still darted nervously about the increasingly dark road. This was a nicer part of the city, and most Guards wouldn't think twice about seeing a woman coming home, especially one dressed as she was. It was relatively expensive (stolen) attire. It would be reasonable to assume that she was simply a young merchants daughter returning from a tavern.

Without warning, a guard stumbled from the small gate in the wall of the inner sanctum. He held a bottle of brown liqueur in his hands. His armor was fancier than the others. Trimmed in gold. That would explain why he could get away with being on duty under the influence.

"You there! Halt!" He slurred his words, pausing to take another swig from the bottle as Nadi slowed down, doing her best to conceal her fear.

"Can I help you, sir?"

"I don't like the look of you. Whats your business in the city."

"I'm just a merchant, sir."

He laughed. "Yeah! Thats real interesting." He looked around her, into the back of the wagon. He took one look at her decorations, before turning to her, pointing an accusatory finger in her face. "You're a gypsy, ain't you! Bloody blight on our good nation. Politicians are too soft on you thieving types."

He sounded very angry. Nadya recoiled, taking a step back. She did not want to start trouble with this one. "Wheres your commercial permit."

"Umm..."

"Where is it!" He took another threatening step towards her.

Wincing, she spoke quickly. "I don't have one..."

"I knew it!" Roughly, he grabbed a fistful of her raven curls, yanking it to the side and craning her neck. She gasped, fear suddenly coursing through her veins. He stared at the brand, burned into her flesh all those years ago, just behind her left ear. It was a small circle, with intersecting lines through the middle. "The thief's mark! I wish I had been the one to do it. You know what the second offense is, gypsy whore?"

She breathed heavily, her neck still uncomfortably strained. "Yes."

Nadi saw a man, behind them, creeping out from the gate the guard had left open. She pointed, hoping that it would be a suitable distraction for the drunken guard. "Look..."

A mailed hand backhanded her across the jaw, hard. She cried out as she fell into the canvas of her wagon. "I'm not falling for that, whore."

Nadya was still quite dazed when she saw arms seeming to grow out of the bastards neck, clamping tightly around his throat. It took her a moment to realize that it wasn't just the guard that was grunting...

Like a bolt of lightning, she grabbed a frying pan that was hanging from the top of the wagon, and brought it down upon his head with all the strength she could muster. She yelled at him, though he was already unconscious, spitting at his feet. "Pig!!"

The man who had helped her said nothing. He looked out of breath, like he was running from something. She would have to return his favor somehow.

"Thank you, stranger. Come, we must leave before the gates close. It is the least I can do." Adrenaline still coursed through her at such a close encounter. Her face was numb from where he had struck her. Hopefully, she thought, the bruising would not be too bad.
 
Rajinn, still unable to speak, let the guard slip from his choke hold. He was about to ask for assistance, from the beautiful woman but she was one step ahead of him by offering a ride which was what he was after, truth be told. A formal bow, and a moment to swipe the guards coin pouch, seemed mandatory for some reason.

Clumsily he rolled into the back of the cart and lay down, proving he was no stranger to remaining hidden. As he lay there, however, he spent what time he had stealing long glances at his rescuer and taking in her stunning beauty. But knowing that any attempt and doing more than looking like a collection of random cloth would be dangerous he waited patiently.

It wasn't until the cart had cleared the gates, and Rajinn had recovered his breath that he was able to sit up and look at the city walls slowly becoming a bad memory. "I knew the gods had sent an Angel of salvation the moment I saw that guard." He sat up more and looked about to see that the area was clear enough to stop hiding and thus it was time for introduction, "I am Rajinn." he offered a friendly hand, though not the one with the relic strapped to it.
 
Nadi exhaled heavily as they passed the Guards at the gate. This was an awful lot of trouble to escape a night in the city jail. It was strange how things worked out sometimes. Hopefully the guard would not remember her face. Gammond was a lucrative place for one such as her. They were a superstitious bunch.

"I knew the gods had sent an Angel of salvation the moment I saw that guard." Ahh yes, the man who had helped her escape. She had not gotten a good look at him in the darkness. His words made her laugh, turning to face him. He was halfway out from underneath one of her vibrant green blankets. "I am Rajinn."

She clasped his hand, feeling his strength despite his gentle grip. He was a striking one. And, She reminded herself, dangerous also. "My name is Nadya. And I am hardly an angel. And if I am, I'm not an angel of salvation." She was still whispering, though there was no reason to continue. Nadi shook her head suddenly, bells still ringing from when the guard had struck her. Dropping the whisper, she inquired, "There must be a reason you are running. If you are to stay in my camp tonight, then I must know how badly the Order Guard wants you, so I do not wake to a knife at my throat." He was still lying in the back of the wagon. Nadya gestured him to come forward. "Come sit with me. The danger is passed, for now."
 
"Nadya." He repeated, as if committing the name to memory. He'd already burned her image into his mind, and if truth were to be told he'd have to admit her beauty was the very reason he stopped to help her. Even if she were married and about to leave him at the road side, he felt the chance of a more desirable outcome was worth the effort.

"...And if I am, I'm not an angel of salvation."

Rajinn laughed and looked around as if weighing her offer to sit up front with the risk of others seeing him. Deciding it was safe enough, he nodded and climbed over to join Nadya. "In truth, it's not the Order Guards who were after me, but a nobleman's. By morning there will likely be a price on my head, but if I could find a way to collect all the bounties on myself I could retire a very wealthy man." He smiled at Nadya, as if the thought of being wanted by so many was a symbol of status. "I'm wanted for theft, so I think it's I who should be concerned for my safety. In all my travels I'v never met a master of the pan such as yourself." he laughed and continued the joke, "In fact there are legends of your fighting style spoke of around the camp fires of Auranna."
 
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