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Sensing her urgency, he changes the position of his hand. He moves his fingers down her wet lips and never once breaking contact, they find her aching hole. His thumb now firmly presses into her swollen clitoris. She pushes her cunt into his hand, her body aching and moaning where her mouth cannot voice. His free hand moves one of hers to his trouser zip. She can feel how keenly the heat radiates from his groin but to open his zip makes her pause. It might be easy to hide his exploring her but once his cock is out, this can’t be hidden if they’re caught. She doesn’t realise that what she is doing is very visible and neither realise her body is becoming increasingly visible as he explores and gently exposes more. There are now a number of eyes concentrating on them.
Thus, it takes very little encouragement and reassurance from him to get her to slide that zip down. She is surprised how assertively his cock breaks through that gap with very little guidance from her at all. His husky groan sends a shiver of arousal right through her body; particularly her swollen nipples and clit. She inwardly groans at the thought of what they would do together if they could both be alone. Her hand tries to push down his eager shaft but her hand cannot immediately reach. He takes a step forward and his cock now stands proudly and dangerously close to her dripping pussy. They both appear to notice it at the same time and both throb at the thought of it, her muscles squeezing his fingers tightly and his cock bouncing against her palm. She responds to his urging by gripping more tightly and sliding her hand down his shaft, smearing his wetness down with it. It’s the first time she’s felt that happen and her hand releases his cock.
Thus, it takes very little encouragement and reassurance from him to get her to slide that zip down. She is surprised how assertively his cock breaks through that gap with very little guidance from her at all. His husky groan sends a shiver of arousal right through her body; particularly her swollen nipples and clit. She inwardly groans at the thought of what they would do together if they could both be alone. Her hand tries to push down his eager shaft but her hand cannot immediately reach. He takes a step forward and his cock now stands proudly and dangerously close to her dripping pussy. They both appear to notice it at the same time and both throb at the thought of it, her muscles squeezing his fingers tightly and his cock bouncing against her palm. She responds to his urging by gripping more tightly and sliding her hand down his shaft, smearing his wetness down with it. It’s the first time she’s felt that happen and her hand releases his cock.
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A “Fuck, don’t stop,” clearly and rather loudly reassures her that she hasn’t actually hurt him. She picks his cock back up at the base and pulls her hand towards her. She had heard about a technique and she wanted to try it. Her hand reaches the head and she pulls it over the edge, twisting her wrist slightly so her fingers slide down the opposite side of his shaft.
As her hand reaches the head again, this time she keeps it there and moves her hand slightly back and forth. She can feel his breathing get shallower and his hand pauses in its exploration of her body. The sticky wetness of him covers her entire hand. He makes a guttural sound shes not heard before and pushes his cock up between her thumb and finger.
“I can’t wait,” he growls into her ear. He abruptly pulls her to the very edge of the shelf. Her bum now half resting and half balancing on the pole. She grabs his arm to prevent her slipping off.
“Don’t move. I won’t drop you.”
As her hand reaches the head again, this time she keeps it there and moves her hand slightly back and forth. She can feel his breathing get shallower and his hand pauses in its exploration of her body. The sticky wetness of him covers her entire hand. He makes a guttural sound shes not heard before and pushes his cock up between her thumb and finger.
“I can’t wait,” he growls into her ear. He abruptly pulls her to the very edge of the shelf. Her bum now half resting and half balancing on the pole. She grabs his arm to prevent her slipping off.
“Don’t move. I won’t drop you.”
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With barely any movement at all his penis finds the edge of her cunt and presses into it. At first it seems to hit resistance even though she desperately wants him. She apologises, embarrassed. He doesn’t respond, he just tilts her back slightly and she half falls, half gets thrust deeply into. The move and the depth of it takes her breath away. She feels as his hands move under her cheeks to stop her slipping.
But the combination of his thrusts and her angle make her very prone. She drops with every pull towards him, she rocks with every thrust up. His cock feels like it is hitting every inch of her and then some. Intermittently, her clit is brushed by his thickness and the sensation sends a ripple through her body that she sends right back to this cock as she squeezes him.
They’re both close and they can both sense it. She whispers for him to fuck her harder and the throb of his cock sends her over the edge. She barely feels his urgent thrusts as an orgasm overwhelms her entire body. They are both fortunate the song playing in the background this a few decibels higher and mostly drowns out her long moan. He cums in her just as she reaches the edge of her own wave. Coming back to him enough to feel every last drop shoot into her and his penis bounce as it offloads.
They stay frozen for a moment, taking in the enormity of it. A tap on his shoulder abruptly ends the connection and pulls out and away. She closes her legs and is sat demurely as a bouncer asserts his way to her. He clearly expects to see her compromised so he falters as he tells her to get down. She just smiles at him and gets down. When he tells her to keep down for her own safety, she tells him, “thank you, Sir.” He falters yet again before stepping away.
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But the combination of his thrusts and her angle make her very prone. She drops with every pull towards him, she rocks with every thrust up. His cock feels like it is hitting every inch of her and then some. Intermittently, her clit is brushed by his thickness and the sensation sends a ripple through her body that she sends right back to this cock as she squeezes him.
They’re both close and they can both sense it. She whispers for him to fuck her harder and the throb of his cock sends her over the edge. She barely feels his urgent thrusts as an orgasm overwhelms her entire body. They are both fortunate the song playing in the background this a few decibels higher and mostly drowns out her long moan. He cums in her just as she reaches the edge of her own wave. Coming back to him enough to feel every last drop shoot into her and his penis bounce as it offloads.
They stay frozen for a moment, taking in the enormity of it. A tap on his shoulder abruptly ends the connection and pulls out and away. She closes her legs and is sat demurely as a bouncer asserts his way to her. He clearly expects to see her compromised so he falters as he tells her to get down. She just smiles at him and gets down. When he tells her to keep down for her own safety, she tells him, “thank you, Sir.” He falters yet again before stepping away.
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Thank you x it would need some editing before i did that tho. its a good foundation but i can definitely improve. especially to slow down the bits i rushed to get to sex lolWonderful story.. you should put it all together and publish it on Lit...
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TY x i am an editor in current role but not for adult content so i always appreciate good feedback. especially if i were to write more male perspective too
dont let my poor grammar here fool you
im a jack of all trades atm..scripts, books, media materials, legal docs ...none of it particularly my trained career. next month i have a book coming out that i contributed to. Just in time for my birthday
dont let my poor grammar here fool you
im a jack of all trades atm..scripts, books, media materials, legal docs ...none of it particularly my trained career. next month i have a book coming out that i contributed to. Just in time for my birthday
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TY x i am an editor in current role but not for adult content so i always appreciate good feedback. especially if i were to write more male perspective too
dont let my poor grammar here fool you
I find it always good to get another opinion on a story, and like you said, I especially need to know if I am getting the female point of view right. Congrats on the book.
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thanks
I value your opinion for sure. just thought id update how ive grown up since i joined here and met you
We all keep growing... in many ways... finding new things, new ideas. One should never stop growing and learning until they stop breathing...
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Loved the story.
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Thank you
been a while since ive written without writing to anyone else’s desiresPiercedfreak
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You’re looking a little flushed.
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thank you
yeah ive had a few suggestions sent to me and one in particular i would probably explore in more depth. Was funny reading back though because i was reading to try and get back into the mindset to continue and all i could hear myself doing was critiquing... "somehow" who knows how, maybe magical beings descended and whispered in her ear so she now understood what was happening. show not tell show not tell but generic wank bank stuff...i hope people liked it as much as i did
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and oh wow hi everyone
thank youas always for you xooh! So much loveliness on offer.
ha yes..
its a mystery
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Proof of ache
Very nice beth.. A very excited thank you.
Proof of ache
Yeah im still wearing a bra and its pulling my boobs a little.
Holy Moly, you could use those as weapons
They are truly awesome.
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Proof of ache
Yeah im still wearing a bra and its pulling my boobs a little.
Have mercy
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thank you; a very grateful a throbbing reply x
dunno about weaponising them..it is easy to lose a cock between them thoHoly Moly, you could use those as weapons
They are truly awesome.
only if you beg well enoughHave mercy
the only thing that would improve that pic is if i'd smiled
should have checked before the upload
