Copyediting, or, how did I miss that?

[TheWritingGroup]

So this isn't copyediting exactly, but in my current WIP I have Liz, my heroine, meet a man. She notices his clothes. (He's dressed too fancy for the situation, and she's a very analytical person). They stand up and hug, she notices the feel of his silk shirt against her cheek.

Glancing back at the following sex scene before moving on to write the next one, I realized that they fall into bed and fuck ... and Jack's clothes just disappear. He's instantly naked as soon as he lies down.

Oops.

 

[designatedvictim]

Glancing back at the following sex scene before moving on to write the next one, I realized that they fall into bed and fuck ... and Jack's clothes just disappear. He's instantly naked as soon as he lies down.

Oops.

You make that sound like a bad thing!

Isn't that how it always works?