Could/Would ANyone Use These Story Ideas?

Shendude said:
70. The planet Nocha has an odd caste system, in which a man's status is based on the size of his dick & a woman's is based on the size of her tits. For 5 years out of each decade, those w/ large dicks & tits rule over all others. For the other five, those w/ small dicks & tits rule over all others.


and the middle class is disappearing on that Planet too?
 
What if you are a big breasted woman with a small cock?

I could get into a story like this...
 
GratefulFred said:
What if you are a big breasted woman with a small cock?

I could get into a story like this...


I raise you one small breasted woman with a monster cock.
 
Both mutations seem plausible in story form. Perhaps a bit of Ayn Rand mixed in with my warped persona and I could see the beginning of a classic.
 
GratefulFred said:
Both mutations seem plausible in story form. Perhaps a bit of Ayn Rand mixed in with my warped persona and I could see the beginning of a classic.


not quite seeing the Ayn Rand angle
 
Well think about this perfect "large & big" society whereupon one guy decides that size doesn't really matter and perhaps a woman who feels the same. In this futuristic world they decide to head out of civilized society to be on their own in some rural place but the society still wants them dead all on of account of a heart felled post they once put up on the internet.

The cops confront the girl and give her an operation to have big tits and surround the guy. They take down his pants and see he has a 16 inch cock. He cries that he is so small and asks that they just leave him alone. The guys all know they have smaller cocks but they decide to not tell him the truth about size and walk away.

How's that for a story? I'll come up with some warped cross gender alien ideas the next time I decide to think.
 
GratefulFred said:
Well think about this perfect "large & big" society whereupon one guy decides that size doesn't really matter and perhaps a woman who feels the same. In this futuristic world they decide to head out of civilized society to be on their own in some rural place but the society still wants them dead all on of account of a heart felled post they once put up on the internet.

The cops confront the girl and give her an operation to have big tits and surround the guy. They take down his pants and see he has a 16 inch cock. He cries that he is so small and asks that they just leave him alone. The guys all know they have smaller cocks but they decide to not tell him the truth about size and walk away.

How's that for a story? I'll come up with some warped cross gender alien ideas the next time I decide to think.

how naive of them.

do they flee to another galaxy, or just the dessert?
 
I say they flee to Ontario where no doubt they can measure up?

Ah shit I am half Canadian...

Where's the edit button when you need it?

Let's work on the title for the story now...
 
GratefulFred said:
I say they flee to Ontario where no doubt they can measure up?

Ah shit I am half Canadian...

Where's the edit button when you need it?

Let's work on the title for the story now...

"Jo Canadian Meets Bigfoot"?
 
sirhugs said:
and the middle class is disappearing on that Planet too?
Why would that be?

It's not like being on top is a good thing, since you'll be on the bottom after, at most, 5 years.

Just realized that I miswrote it. It's big cocks & small tits, then small cocks & big tits.
 
I already polished off 10,000 words for that story with big cocks and big tits and now I am royally fucked.

Thanks Shendude :p
 
GratefulFred said:
I already polished off 10,000 words for that story with big cocks and big tits and now I am royally fucked.

Thanks Shendude :p

lol

just write em as YOU see em
 
But what if I make Shendude mad? He's already after me to post my "Jismism" philosophical piece.

He claims he can have me banned from using emoticons in my posts. There's just so much a man can take.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :D
 
71. The Ritual of Twelve is a magical ceremony perfprmed by twelve people. WHen it is done, one is dead, two are immortal, and the other 8 can reality to suit themselves, thought they must act in concert. What results when the ritual is performed silmutaneously by an incestous family, a group of horny college-guys, a group of BDSM fetishists, and members of a Gay/Lesbian Rights organization?
 
Before anyone comments, I believe this is sufficiently weird and fantastic to not be covered by the "18+ rule"

72. Sally Hobun is a very unsual little girl. She was born with breasts. A-cups, yes, but breasts nonetheless. And as she got older they gre, about half a cup-size a year. She was also born with a highly developed and omnivorous sex drive, viz the time she seduced her parents and older siblings when she was two, seducing every teacher and many classmates since nursery school, and seducing her. When she reached eight, and her breasts reached E-cup, she decided that it was time to take her amorous adventures outside of the family and the classroom and into the world at large.
 
Shendude said:
Before anyone comments, I believe this is sufficiently weird and fantastic to not be covered by the "18+ rule"

72. Sally Hobun is a very unsual little girl. She was born with breasts. A-cups, yes, but breasts nonetheless. And as she got older they gre, about half a cup-size a year. She was also born with a highly developed and omnivorous sex drive, viz the time she seduced her parents and older siblings when she was two, seducing every teacher and many classmates since nursery school, and seducing her. When she reached eight, and her breasts reached E-cup, she decided that it was time to take her amorous adventures outside of the family and the classroom and into the world at large.

perhaps if she were a faerie or alien, but not as a human....

wonder if it would be accepted if she were an alien in human form. Her precocious appearance might be great conflict, but likely not allowed on Lit.
 
sirhugs said:
perhaps if she were a faerie or alien, but not as a human....

wonder if it would be accepted if she were an alien in human form. Her precocious appearance might be great conflict, but likely not allowed on Lit.
Well, one thing I was thinking of would be to make her one of the first members of a new, sexually evolved breed of homonid, Homo Eroticus (which means "Sexual Man", the way "Homo Erectus" means "Upright Man", and "Homo Sapien" means "Clever Man").

A goodly portion of her quest would be to find other members of her species.
 
Shendude said:
Well, one thing I was thinking of would be to make her one of the first members of a new, sexually evolved breed of homonid, Homo Eroticus (which means "Sexual Man", the way "Homo Erectus" means "Upright Man", and "Homo Sapien" means "Clever Man").

A goodly portion of her quest would be to find other members of her species.

I suggest if you are writing this, that first you email or PM Laurel re clarification of the guidelines.
 
73. A cabal of nerds arrange for a catastrophe to destroy civilization and leave the reigns of power in their hands. Only those who agree to submit to them are allowed to survive. In the aftermath a New World Order is born, consisting of three castes: The ruling Nerds, their Bimbo concubines, and Jock slave-laborers.
 
Hi there Shendue, I really like some of your ideas, being a fanatical eater of my own cum pussy cream myself I was naturally drawn to 2 particular ideas of yours:

- the one where people were genetically altered such that their cum became a source of sustenance, with extremely heightened libido and sexdrive.

- the one where slaves were brainwashed with constant bombardment of sexual images and sounds from a visor and earplug, with vibrating dildoes in every hole and medically enchanced capability to produce flooding pussy cream.

I am thinking I am going to try and write a story based loosely on the above 2 ideas, those who have read my ideas before should know what kinks I am into and it pretty much fits nicely with Shendue's ideas above. Here is what I am thinking, set somewhere in the near future, an elderly nobel prize winning scientist with a dark and secret fetish has found a way to genetically recreate a human being according to his physical specifications. Think Fifth Element style the way Milla Jovovich was created in that tube. A few years after creating the genetically engineered woman and 'teaching' her all sorts of wrong morals and values (those of being a mindless sex slave), he passes away due to a heart attack and she is left all alone, and she stumbles her way into the real world where all sorts of sexual mishaps happen. Think of the 2nd part as 'Edward Scissorshands'.

So anyway, he had always wanted a sex slave but never had the courage to go into such a relationship for fear of tarnishing his world renowned reputation. Now that he is able to do so, he went about to create a mindless physical specimen of his wildest fantasies. In his notepad he wrote down the traits he would like his creation to have, and how he would code the dna to bring about such a physical characteristic.

1. Her pussy cream and squirt fluids would become a very rich source of sustenance that is enough to sustain an adult or a child, but she can also sustain on food like regular people if she chooses to.

2. She will have genetically altered vaginal functions, and be able to produce insane amounts of pussy cream when aroused, such that she is constantly and literally leaking thick pussy juices. Not only that, her natural 'rest state' will be that of an aroused woman who has a vibrating dildo inside her, which means she is constantly on the edge of cumming 24 hours a day no matter what she is doing. Due to the nature of her sexual capabilities, she will have problems going out in public, because she will pretty much leave a trail of pussy cum leaking down and between her legs wherever she goes.

3. However, due to the nature of her excessive production of pussy cream, she would dehydrate as fast as a sweating marathon runner, which is why she will need to drink lots of water (although she does ingest a lot of her cum back anyway).

4. She will be physically created as a 18 yr old young adult by the scientist, but her mind will be identical to that of a newborn baby. She won't even know how to crawl and will be drooling and unaware of her bodily functions initially. She will be kept in a secret room in the scientist's home since 'birth'. The room will have a few large screen TVs built into the walls and 4 speakers around the top corners of the room, 24 hours a day extreme porn will be played of women fisting and fingering themselves, to register her brain into becoming a nonstop masturbation machine.

5 years pass during which the girl has never left the room, 5 years of not seeing any other soul other than the scientist, 5 years without any concept of morals, society and values. During this time, the scientist taught her how to eat her cum, taught her 5 and ONLY 5 words of the english language which were used as commands like he was training an animal. Each time he said a command word the girl would instantly assume a certain pose or do a certain action. (What the commands are will be fleshed out in the actual story)

She doesn't know how to speak, since the only sounds she hears are moans from the masturbation videos. Over time the scientist managed to train her to do a low purring moan to register a Yes, and a hysterical 'about to cum' moan to register a No. She has been trained not to mumble or speak anything else other than those 2 sexual moans.

She has never seen clothing before since the scientist always made it a point to be naked in her presence. Her natural 'standing' and various other postures are all abnormal in that she her legs are always spread slightly apart and bent because she is -always- fingering or fisting no matter what she is doing. If she had to walk from one end of the room to the other she would do so with at least 3 fingers furiously pumping her pussy as she does a hobble-walk, if she stands or sits she would start fisting or scooping out her copius cum to eat - it was all second nature to her just like breathing. Due to her nonstop leaking of pussy cream and constant squirting, her room is always slick and wet of pussy cum, which means she is always drenched (and dried) head to toe in her own cum. Thanks to the brain washing videos her mind was permanently twisted and consisted of only masturbation and cum eating, and the 5 command words. She would sleep for 7 hours on the floor, wake up and masturbate non-stop, squirting and creaming all over the place, eat cum whenever she is hungry, take a nap when she is tired, then wake up and fist again. In short, she was nothing more than an animal of cum whose world was a small room filled with images and sounds of masturbation, where she would walk and sleep in a pool of her own cum.

The Scientist had a history of heart problems, and sometime during the 5th year he collasped at home. Having no concept of death whatsover, she finds herself slowly exploring the house and ultimately manage to step outside the house and into the terrorfying real world, stark naked and slick with her own pussy cum, walking along the neighbourhood constantly fingering and shocking the world. What goes on after that is a bit like Edward Scissorshands trying to fit into society, but in a much much more bizzare and twisted manner.

What do you guys think, will a story like that be well accepted?
 
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lauracmk said:
Hi there Shendue, I really like some of your ideas, being a fanatical eater of my own cum pussy cream myself I was naturally drawn to 2 particular ideas of yours:

- the one where people were genetically altered such that their cum became a source of sustenance, with extremely heightened libido and sexdrive.

- the one where slaves were brainwashed with constant bombardment of sexual images and sounds from a visor and earplug, with vibrating dildoes in every hole and medically enchanced capability to produce flooding pussy cream.

I am thinking I am going to try and write a story based loosely on the above 2 ideas, those who have read my ideas before should know what kinks I am into and it pretty much fits nicely with Shendue's ideas above. Here is what I am thinking, set somewhere in the near future, an elderly nobel prize winning scientist with a dark and secret fetish has found a way to genetically recreate a human being according to his physical specifications. Think Fifth Element style the way Milla Jovovich was created in that tube. A few years after creating the genetically engineered woman and 'teaching' her all sorts of wrong morals and values (those of being a mindless sex slave), he passes away due to a heart attack and she is left all alone, and she stumbles her way into the real world where all sorts of sexual mishaps happen. Think of the 2nd part as 'Edward Scissorshands'.

So anyway, he had always wanted a sex slave but never had the courage to go into such a relationship for fear of tarnishing his world renowned reputation. Now that he is able to do so, he went about to create a mindless physical specimen of his wildest fantasies. In his notepad he wrote down the traits he would like his creation to have, and how he would code the dna to bring about such a physical characteristic.

1. Her pussy cream and squirt fluids would become a very rich source of sustenance that is enough to sustain an adult or a child, but she can also sustain on food like regular people if she chooses to.

2. She will have genetically altered vaginal functions, and be able to produce insane amounts of pussy cream when aroused, such that she is constantly and literally leaking thick pussy juices. Not only that, her natural 'rest state' will be that of an aroused woman who has a vibrating dildo inside her, which means she is constantly on the edge of cumming 24 hours a day no matter what she is doing. Due to the nature of her sexual capabilities, she will have problems going out in public, because she will pretty much leave a trail of pussy cum leaking down and between her legs wherever she goes.

3. However, due to the nature of her excessive production of pussy cream, she would dehydrate as fast as a sweating marathon runner, which is why she will need to drink lots of water (although she does ingest a lot of her cum back anyway).

4. She will be physically created as a 18 yr old young adult by the scientist, but her mind will be identical to that of a newborn baby. She won't even know how to crawl and will be drooling and unaware of her bodily functions initially. She will be kept in a secret room in the scientist's home since 'birth'. The room will have a few large screen TVs built into the walls and 4 speakers around the top corners of the room, 24 hours a day extreme porn will be played of women fisting and fingering themselves, to register her brain into becoming a nonstop masturbation machine.

5 years pass during which the girl has never left the room, 5 years of not seeing any other soul other than the scientist, 5 years without any concept of morals, society and values. During this time, the scientist taught her how to eat her cum, taught her 5 and ONLY 5 words of the english language which were used as commands like he was training an animal. Each time he said a command word the girl would instantly assume a certain pose or do a certain action. (What the commands are will be fleshed out in the actual story)

She doesn't know how to speak, since the only sounds she hears are moans from the masturbation videos. Over time the scientist managed to train her to do a low purring moan to register a Yes, and a hysterical 'about to cum' moan to register a No. She has been trained not to mumble or speak anything else other than those 2 sexual moans.

She has never seen clothing before since the scientist always made it a point to be naked in her presence. Her natural 'standing' and various other postures are all abnormal in that she her legs are always spread slightly apart and bent because she is -always- fingering or fisting no matter what she is doing. If she had to walk from one end of the room to the other she would do so with at least 3 fingers furiously pumping her pussy as she does a hobble-walk, if she stands or sits she would start fisting or scooping out her copius cum to eat - it was all second nature to her just like breathing. Due to her nonstop leaking of pussy cream and constant squirting, her room is always slick and wet of pussy cum, which means she is always drenched (and dried) head to toe in her own cum. Thanks to the brain washing videos her mind was permanently twisted and consisted of only masturbation and cum eating, and the 5 command words. She would sleep for 7 hours on the floor, wake up and masturbate non-stop, squirting and creaming all over the place, eat cum whenever she is hungry, take a nap when she is tired, then wake up and fist again. In short, she was nothing more than an animal of cum whose world was a small room filled with images and sounds of masturbation, where she would walk and sleep in a pool of her own cum.

The Scientist had a history of heart problems, and sometime during the 5th year he collasped at home. Having no concept of death whatsover, she finds herself slowly exploring the house and ultimately manage to step outside the house and into the terrorfying real world, stark naked and slick with her own pussy cum, walking along the neighbourhood constantly fingering and shocking the world. What goes on after that is a bit like Edward Scissorshands trying to fit into society, but in a much much more bizzare and twisted manner.

What do you guys think, will a story like that be well accepted?
Interesting. Veeerrry Interesting.

Me like.
 
I must be a little stoggy. My scientific and educatonal background likely is at the root of MY rejection of the concept. But Edward Scissorhands was acceptable to me. I think that I would need for you to push the concept further and make clearer what the socitial points you were exploring with the SF vehicle.
 
This is from an idea for a civilization I invented for another purpose. I'm not giving all the details because there's no point.

74. The Itrusod are an interesting culture. From the outside, they seem to be as patriarchal as can be. All thier soldiers, artisans, diplomats, and merchants are men. Women spend all of their time either pregnant, or trying to become pregnant, and raising children. But the apparent male dominance is an illusion. You see, the Itrusod believe that women exist for the purpose of having and raising children, and men exist for the purpose of providing and protecting them so they can. Anything that affects the welfare of the children is under female control. Thus, the merchants and diplomats are mere mouthpieces. All decisions are actually made by women. A woman may "recquisition" any man she likes to try to father her children, and there is a whole caste of men who do nothing but serve as studs (this is not a pleasant job. Studs are given no edcuation and are killed when they're too old to perform.) During all sex, the woman, of course, dominates.
 
Shendude said:
43. The US Government covertly develops & launches a satellite based weapons system that can rewrite/alter the memories & personality of anyone on Earht, or even everyone on Earth, theoretically. It is controlled by a very powerful supercomputer, so that one just has to decide how you want someone programmed, & it'll figure out how to do it for you. So what happens when someone takes control of the system for their own ends?

Incidentally, is anyone ever going to use any of these?

that reminds me of serial expirements lain. of course, she was just trying to make her friend like her again because her other self told everyone about her crush on her teacher, but that's not really much to base a fan fic on. ::lesigh::
 
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