Erotic Haiku story thread

[ezwriter]

Erotic Haiku (No longer threaded, but still artistic)

Okay, lit-eroties, put on your poetry caps for some stimulating, high-brow fun. Your story/allusion/"word picture" must be in traditional haiku form: 3 lines - the first 5 syllables, the second 7, the third 5 again. No more. No less. "The discipline shall set you free."

I'll start:

Slender sash-bound wrists.
Kimono fallen open.
He raises her chin.

 

[Maid of Marvels]

Gasping, her lips part
Awaiting the unspoken
Pleasures he offers.

 

[TheScarletBlade]

He Touches Softly
Smooth Fingers Trace Her Figure
His Dream Forfilled Now

 

[Bacigalupo]

A plump full ripe fruit
Upon lips riper fuller
Playing and teasing.

 

[Elayne]

Kisses like fire fall,
Down a slender swan's pale neck,
Till she sighs sweetly.

 

[Maid of Marvels]

His touch electric
He watches her eyes, smiling
Twisting her nipple.

 

[Elayne]

A soft cry drawn out,
Soft lips twisted in dismay,
Both pleasure and pain.

 

[Bacigalupo]

She gasps like a sigh
The pain blending into need
Sets embers aglow

 

[Steiner]

Silk marks wrists barely
as limbs display sweet tension
breath susurration

 

[Elayne]

His strong hands stroke down,
Flanks of alabaster silk,
She begs for a kiss.

 

[Maid of Marvels]

Their lips brush lightly
Parting -- an invitation
She offers her "self".

 

[patrick1]

He maps her body,
his fingers the instruments
- his lips taste conquest.

 

[Elayne]

His fingers tease her,
Strumming her lines like a harp,
Her moans his music.

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Now plucking soft lips
bring taste forth of delicate
aroma, of love

 

[Steiner]

Tongues now contesting
In open battle matched
Surrender is sweet

 

[Maid of Marvels]

Intimate designs
Traced slowly, sensuously
Caress parted thighs.

 

[Elayne]

She succumbs to him,
A strong touch between weak knees,
Betrays her desire.

 

[Steiner]

Sibillant skin touch
flower blooms in mounting heat
will he answer need?

 

[Maid of Marvels]

Soft petals unfold
He breathes in the heady scent
Of the blood red rose.

 

[patrick1]

When he bites her sex
she screams - a lone bird wailing
in agonised joy

 

[Elayne]

Her cries rouse in him
A savage beast's primal lusts,
Hungry for her flesh.

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Lips enfolding deep
soft plethora of desire
summit peak to scale

 

[ezwriter]

OOC: Splendid work, people. I'm glad of the response and the quality.


Tongue tip tastes her sex.
Fingertips graze taut nipples
Eyelids close, open

 

[Bacigalupo]

Forgotten haiku
In nature erotic, hot
Post now, damn you, post

 

[Steiner]

Blank post screen blank mind
The seconds fill up eternity
Should I blame my muse?