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Hecate
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You are welcome!
Well - assuming you wouldn't like to learn it too "first hand" from me *grinning* .. maybe we can talk Merelan into "modelling" for us (what do you think Merelan-sweet?)??
Or maybe would you rather test your skills on some male "guinea pig", Nicole? I am sure there will be heaps of volunteers for you!
Hmmm - sounds like some nice RP idea -
Take a lesson at Mistress Hecate's Dungeon
Well - assuming you wouldn't like to learn it too "first hand" from me *grinning* .. maybe we can talk Merelan into "modelling" for us (what do you think Merelan-sweet?)??
Or maybe would you rather test your skills on some male "guinea pig", Nicole? I am sure there will be heaps of volunteers for you!
Hmmm - sounds like some nice RP idea - Take a lesson at Mistress Hecate's Dungeon
Earthgoddess
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being a snitty goddess
Is it just me or is the poster redpowerborg a tad unusual...maybe even dare I say it -young...not young like a good Reisling but young like a preteen...a Brittany Spears fan even-I am trying to resist poking fun at the posts but I need help...please help me to resist correcting the posts...please prevent me from OOC-ing this poor person...save me from myself-AAARRRGGHHH
Is it just me or is the poster redpowerborg a tad unusual...maybe even dare I say it -young...not young like a good Reisling but young like a preteen...a Brittany Spears fan even-I am trying to resist poking fun at the posts but I need help...please help me to resist correcting the posts...please prevent me from OOC-ing this poor person...save me from myself-AAARRRGGHHH
Hecate
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Hold on Eartgoddess
*lol* or would you rather have me tie you down?
Just for safety reasons and your (and in this case his?) own good of course (I need to check out some more of those posts first to get a clearer picture about your "feeling" in this case which I will share with you asap)
*lol* or would you rather have me tie you down?
Just for safety reasons and your (and in this case his?) own good of course
(I need to check out some more of those posts first to get a clearer picture about your "feeling" in this case which I will share with you asap)
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Oh, I just had the strangest dream. Must've fallen asleep at my post again. Nicole and Svedish Chef were chasing after me with that big terrifying whip that Mistresses M & H keep in their locked display cabinet.AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, SHITTTTTTTT!!!!!! That was no dream.
RUNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!
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Oh come ON rog you know you want all of us down under, now Will you just sit there!
Note to Earthgoddess
Your intuitions are most likely right on target. In reading his/her postings, I, too, have discerned a quite young tenor to this poster, Redpowerborg. I also wonder as to his actual age. And, like you, I have this overpowering urge to pull out each of his posts and edit it to death. God, his/her spelling is atrocious!!!
I am delighted you made mention of it, Ms. Goddess; I no longer think I am the only one here who is bothered by the "little things".....thank you.
Your intuitions are most likely right on target. In reading his/her postings, I, too, have discerned a quite young tenor to this poster, Redpowerborg. I also wonder as to his actual age. And, like you, I have this overpowering urge to pull out each of his posts and edit it to death. God, his/her spelling is atrocious!!!
I am delighted you made mention of it, Ms. Goddess; I no longer think I am the only one here who is bothered by the "little things".....thank you.
Hecate
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Trust me ,
you are not alone in this ...
But since it isn't the task of this BB to help with educational issues (and god knows I sometimes feel like getting out my red pen)I try to keep myself to the really hard cases only and am happy as long as I get the drift of some posts.
I do think grammar and spelling shouldn't be overly stressed, since it might discourage some really good writers (and it usually is the good ones that tend to take these things to heart and think too much about it)
...but for goodness sake - please have mercy with those players that may live in countries where english isn't the national language.. for us a phrase like: i c u 2(I see you too) ain't really something we can handle.
Thanks for listening to the Official Queen of Annoying Rambles on this section of Literotica
PS: Earthgoddess - did you get my mails??
you are not alone in this ...
But since it isn't the task of this BB to help with educational issues (and god knows I sometimes feel like getting out my red pen)I try to keep myself to the really hard cases only and am happy as long as I get the drift of some posts.
I do think grammar and spelling shouldn't be overly stressed, since it might discourage some really good writers (and it usually is the good ones that tend to take these things to heart and think too much about it)
...but for goodness sake - please have mercy with those players that may live in countries where english isn't the national language.. for us a phrase like: i c u 2(I see you too) ain't really something we can handle.
Thanks for listening to the Official Queen of Annoying Rambles on this section of Literotica
PS: Earthgoddess - did you get my mails??
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Help, Mistress Hecate - the Australians are trying to touch me "down under".
Hecate
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Come here Roger...
... now come here Roger, be a good puppy - here at my feet, SIT! ... nowwww .. that is a good boy!! *patting your head affectionately*
NOW!! to the two of you from over there down under *trying to sternly look at Nicole and Da Chef*..... Did I get that right?? You are trying to do anything to or with my little puppy Roger here?? Aaaand even DOWN Under?? Now that is strictly for the Mistress!! On the other hand though ... Roger sweet - did you say actually it was bothering you???
Was that a help me to avoid it - or a Help me to get it plea???
... now come here Roger, be a good puppy - here at my feet, SIT! ... nowwww .. that is a good boy!! *patting your head affectionately*
NOW!! to the two of you from over there down under *trying to sternly look at Nicole and Da Chef*..... Did I get that right?? You are trying to do anything to or with my little puppy Roger here?? Aaaand even DOWN Under?? Now that is strictly for the Mistress!! On the other hand though ... Roger sweet - did you say actually it was bothering you???
Was that a help me to avoid it - or a Help me to get it plea???
Earthgoddess
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He typed bugle for bulge???then when I corrected him he typed bluge-really I can not help myself please tie me down and keep me from following this poor person and being snitty-either that or help me start a thread in which all posters have to pass a written exam...please make the errors stop....
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I don't know Hecate... but if all else fails... Help me, save me spank me slave me...
OooooH I did not say that!
Da Chef
OooooH I did not say that!
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Comfy on your booties.... ooh mistress I was supposed to get comfy not you!
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Merelan... I'm not even hers so how can she hire me?..... youch! OK I know why now
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Back on point, folks.
When I look at the post I've made it says virgin under my name. I'm assuming that means my writing status. I am one of those people who will probably make spelling and writing errors but I would like some feedback from you more experienced writers as to how I'm doing and what I need to improve on. Please be honest, but without the snide comments if possible. I started a thread called "on-line sluts" and have posted to another called "the grand plan".
I look forward to your comments and help. Thank you in advance.
When I look at the post I've made it says virgin under my name. I'm assuming that means my writing status. I am one of those people who will probably make spelling and writing errors but I would like some feedback from you more experienced writers as to how I'm doing and what I need to improve on. Please be honest, but without the snide comments if possible. I started a thread called "on-line sluts" and have posted to another called "the grand plan".
I look forward to your comments and help. Thank you in advance.
Hecate
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Two things to tell ...
First - willywanker: You are writing quite well - and yes, the "virgin" tag does depend on the amount of writing - or rather posting - you have done .. but some time soon (around 30 posts) you will be "loosing your cherry" *g*
As for your writing - I do think you are doing quite well (read your posts on the on-line sluts and was tempted to respond actually - but lack of time *sighs*) and trust me - if you are doing anything wrond someone will gladly point it out for you ... in a more or less subtle way. Sorry, but some people do have a rather direct way of saying this (and add a slightly sarcastic and slightly disappointed undertone to this) but I hope you won't let yourself be bothered should this happen.
I for one try to be direct but not offensive (as are most people here at literotica I like to think) in my feedback... and just as I feel free to be open and honest I ask you to be the same in return.
Now - on a lighter note...
Did you really need to ask THAT chef darling?? Did you think I'd let such a juicy bite slip through my teeth?? *chuckles* now .. down under starts to get a completely new meaning thinking about it
Whit00EK - sorry to be such a delusion for you, but ... if Merelan wants to play I am the one to decide *weg* what and with whom... so if you ask me nicely *g* I might consider letting her ... isn't she such a sweet girl to even think about new .. pets .. for me??
Ohhh and Earthgoddess - *lol* I just cant get over the bluge. Sounds like ... Ohhh no, I better not get started here *weg*.... just let me know if you need to be restrained from further .. actions*nonchalantly playing with the cuffs dangling from my belt*
First - willywanker: You are writing quite well - and yes, the "virgin" tag does depend on the amount of writing - or rather posting - you have done .. but some time soon (around 30 posts) you will be "loosing your cherry" *g*
As for your writing - I do think you are doing quite well (read your posts on the on-line sluts and was tempted to respond actually - but lack of time *sighs*) and trust me - if you are doing anything wrond someone will gladly point it out for you ... in a more or less subtle way. Sorry, but some people do have a rather direct way of saying this (and add a slightly sarcastic and slightly disappointed undertone to this) but I hope you won't let yourself be bothered should this happen.
I for one try to be direct but not offensive (as are most people here at literotica I like to think) in my feedback... and just as I feel free to be open and honest I ask you to be the same in return.
Now - on a lighter note...
Svedish_Chef said:
Did you really need to ask THAT chef darling?? Did you think I'd let such a juicy bite slip through my teeth?? *chuckles* now .. down under starts to get a completely new meaning thinking about it
Merelan said:
Whit00EK - sorry to be such a delusion for you, but ... if Merelan wants to play I am the one to decide *weg* what and with whom... so if you ask me nicely *g* I might consider letting her ... isn't she such a sweet girl to even think about new .. pets .. for me
??Ohhh and Earthgoddess - *lol* I just cant get over the bluge. Sounds like ... Ohhh no, I better not get started here *weg*.... just let me know if you need to be restrained from further .. actions
*nonchalantly playing with the cuffs dangling from my belt*Speaking of quality and/or style of writing, I've noticed the lacking quality in alot of the posts lately. I'm not going to say any names, but some of the people here actually make me question thier age. No punctuation, spelling mistakes every second word, only sentance long posts, etc... I've wanted to say that for a while, but I never wanted to come off as an ass. Does any one agree or is it just me?
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Re: Two things to tell ...
So Hecate you decide over merelan?? Hmmm I thought I was the Master of both of you!!!
James Earl
Hecate said:Whit00EK - sorry to be such a delusion for you, but ... if Merelan wants to play I am the one to decide *weg* what and with whom... so if you ask me nicely *g* I might consider letting her ... isn't she such a sweet girl to even think about new .. pets .. for me
So Hecate you decide over merelan?? Hmmm I thought I was the Master of both of you!!!
James Earl
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