Film Noir ...

[cookiejar]

Wow Ammo...I better get writing today...that was great!

 

[cookiejar]

His eyes were cold as ice, and Bunkie knew that he was serious. She had no other options left. Only the truth would get her out of this mess. Maybe. “If I tell you what I know, will you let us go?”

“Doll, you don’t have any say in the matter. Tell me what you know right now, or all bets are off.” He had put his pants back on, but still held the belt in his hand, gripping it tightly.

“I need to be certain you’ll let us go. Release Cookie, and I’ll tell you everything I know. Otherwise,” Bunkie said before Lt. Head could interrupt, “we stay chained in this room, you lose what little self-respect you have left, and the biggest crime in the history of this city goes unsolved because you let the suspect slip right through your fingers.” He continued to stare at her, trying to judge whether or not she was telling the truth, or just pulling his leg. He’d much rather have her pull on something else, but she had a point. Whoever was behind all of this had also tried to kill him, and that made it personal. He wasn’t going to rest until he saw justice. Or revenge. He walked over to Cookie. He took the key out of his pocket, and released her from the cuffs. Cookie simply stood there, rubbing her wrists. Lt. Head walked back and stood inches in front of Bunkie. “Spill it, Sweets.”

“Do you remember the note I gave you at the hospital?” she asked. Lt. Head merely stared at her, not giving her any indication he knew what she was talking about. His patience was wearing thin. “The note mentioned the Astroglide shipment, and when it was going to be on the docks. I figure whoever has it is getting rid of it quickly before someone catches on.”

“You’ve got about 5 seconds to tell me something I don’t already know,” Lt. Head said quietly, his patience hanging by a thread.

“I found that note at the diner where I work. Whoever is behind this came to the diner today, so it’s likely I’ll be able to identify them. I happen to know that none of my customers wore gloves while they were eating. Being a waitress, I notice little things like that. So whoever wrote that note left their fingerprints on it. Your lab guys should be able to lift a clean set of prints off the note.”

“The lab guys already have it,” Lt. Head said. “They’ve lifted a set of prints off the note, and are checking them against our files. Thanks for wasting my time, Sweets.” He turned around and walked towards the door.

“Wait! We had an agreement,” Bunkie called after him. “You said you’d let me go if I told you everything I know. You don’t need to keep me here. It’s only a matter of time before you catch her.”

Head took two more steps before he stopped. Slowly, he turned around. “Her?”

“The writing on the note,” Bunkie replied. “It clearly belongs to a woman.”

Head stared for a few more seconds, then turned back and walked out. “I’ll be back later,” he called back.

Bunkie simply stared at the door that closed behind him. “I did the right thing, didn’t I?” Cookie simply nodded, and wiped the tear that fell down Bunkie’s cheek.

After Head left I comforted Bunkie the best I could, the problem was the bastard had left her cuffed. I was in a dilemma ... I had to leave her to get help. How could I do that? She had saved me from the Lt., now I was just gonna take off and leave her?

She read my mind, "Go get Sterling, he's our only hope." I hesitated, the thought of leaving her...She shook her head. "Go!!"

Moving quietly to the door I gingerly opened it and checked out in the hall. It was all clear and I looked back at Bunkie, "I'll hurry." She nodded as I closed the door and tiptoed down the hall. So far so good, that was until I got outside. The car pulled up quickly and I found myself staring down the barrel of a 38.

It was Billy, my old bodyguard. A piece of shit if I ever saw one. He'd cut his own mother's throat if there was a buck in it. "Get in," he growled.

I sat in the back with the piece trained on me. "What in hell is going on?"

"Just shut up Cookie ," the dame driving the car bit out. The way she said my name made my blood boil and I realized I knew her. Her daddy owned "Av's R Us," one of the biggest store chains in the state. Her name was Lunar, a spoiled, rich bitch from Author who hung with the "elite" of Lit City. Word was she liked it rough.

"Well, well," I sneered. "Slumming it Lunar?"

Her answer was to pull to the side of the road and toss Billy a scarf. "Gag her, tie her up and put her in the trunk."

As Billy bound me he muttered, "Sorry bosslady but this is too good an opportunity to pass up. Your my ticket out of this dump."

I was tossed unceremoniously in the trunk, my head hit something. I saw stars and then nothing...

 

[biggbear8]

After Head left I comforted Bunkie the best I could, the problem was the bastard had left her cuffed. I was in a dilemma ... I had to leave her to get help. How could I do that? She had saved me from the Lt., now I was just gonna take off and leave her?

She read my mind, "Go get Sterling, he's our only hope." I hesitated, the thought of leaving her...She shook her head. "Go!!"

Moving quietly to the door I gingerly opened it and checked out in the hall. It was all clear and I looked back at Bunkie, "I'll hurry." She nodded as I closed the door and tiptoed down the hall. So far so good, that was until I got outside. The car pulled up quickly and I found myself staring down the barrel of a 38.

It was Billy, my old bodyguard. A piece of shit if I ever saw one. He'd cut his own mother's throat if there was a buck in it. "Get in," he growled.

I sat in the back with the piece trained on me. "What in hell is going on?"

"Just shut up Cookie ," the dame driving the car bit out. The way she said my name made my blood boil and I realized I knew her. Her daddy owned "Av's R Us," one of the biggest store chains in the state. Her name was Lunar, a spoiled, rich bitch from Author who hung with the "elite" of Lit City. Word was she liked it rough.

"Well, well," I sneered. "Slumming it Lunar?"

Her answer was to pull to the side of the road and toss Billy a scarf. "Gag her, tie her up and put her in the trunk."

As Billy bound me he muttered, "Sorry bosslady but this is too good an opportunity to pass up. Your my ticket out of this dump."

I was tossed unceremoniously in the trunk, my head hit something. I saw stars and then nothing...

Standing in the shadows of the alley I watch as Lt Head comes out alone and then a few minutes later Cookie comeout and seems to be in a hurried then a car slammed on its brakes and Cookie was forced into the back of the car then it sped away as fast as it stopped
I got curious as to what bunkie was still doing inside it was unusaul for bunkie not to be with cookie. So I slip in quietly looking up and down the halls as i move slowly listening for any sounds thats when I hear bunkie shout out "IS THAT YOU COOKIE YOU GOT BACK HERE FAST"following the sound of her voice I slowly open the door and see that bunkie it cuffed to a chair, walking over to bunkie I whisper to her that in here to save her and that cookie was forced into a car with a man and women

searching around on the desk looking for the key to the cuffs but its not there so I pick up bunkie chair and all and slowly start to carry her to the back work room where all the saws and pick and things were so I could get her out of the cuffs. I finally cut the arm off the chair and have bunkie's arms free now to work on the cuffs, i found a couple paper clips and jimmied the cuffs open, after rubbing her wrists bunkie jumped up and gave me a bigg kiss, then I said we better go and find Cookie and make sure she 's alright. looking up and down the hal way we head to the back door and to my car

Bunkie said give me the keys I know exactually where they have taken her after giving he rthe keys we were speeding away going to try to save cookie

 

[sueanninct]

After Head left I comforted Bunkie the best I could, the problem was the bastard had left her cuffed. I was in a dilemma ... I had to leave her to get help. How could I do that? She had saved me from the Lt., now I was just gonna take off and leave her?

She read my mind, "Go get Sterling, he's our only hope." I hesitated, the thought of leaving her...She shook her head. "Go!!"

Moving quietly to the door I gingerly opened it and checked out in the hall. It was all clear and I looked back at Bunkie, "I'll hurry." She nodded as I closed the door and tiptoed down the hall. So far so good, that was until I got outside. The car pulled up quickly and I found myself staring down the barrel of a 38.

It was Billy, my old bodyguard. A piece of shit if I ever saw one. He'd cut his own mother's throat if there was a buck in it. "Get in," he growled.

I sat in the back with the piece trained on me. "What in hell is going on?"

"Just shut up Cookie ," the dame driving the car bit out. The way she said my name made my blood boil and I realized I knew her. Her daddy owned "Av's R Us," one of the biggest store chains in the state. Her name was Lunar, a spoiled, rich bitch from Author who hung with the "elite" of Lit City. Word was she liked it rough.

"Well, well," I sneered. "Slumming it Lunar?"

Her answer was to pull to the side of the road and toss Billy a scarf. "Gag her, tie her up and put her in the trunk."

As Billy bound me he muttered, "Sorry bosslady but this is too good an opportunity to pass up. Your my ticket out of this dump."

I was tossed unceremoniously in the trunk, my head hit something. I saw stars and then nothing...

OH NO!! Who will save Cookie?!?

 

[sueanninct]

Standing in the shadows of the alley I watch as Lt Head comes out alone and then a few minutes later Cookie comeout and seems to be in a hurried then a car slammed on its brakes and Cookie was forced into the back of the car then it sped away as fast as it stopped
I got curious as to what bunkie was still doing inside it was unusaul for bunkie not to be with cookie. So I slip in quietly looking up and down the halls as i move slowly listening for any sounds thats when I hear bunkie shout out "IS THAT YOU COOKIE YOU GOT BACK HERE FAST"following the sound of her voice I slowly open the door and see that bunkie it cuffed to a chair, walking over to bunkie I whisper to her that in here to save her and that cookie was forced into a car with a man and women

searching around on the desk looking for the key to the cuffs but its not there so I pick up bunkie chair and all and slowly start to carry her to the back work room where all the saws and pick and things were so I could get her out of the cuffs. I finally cut the arm off the chair and have bunkie's arms free now to work on the cuffs, i found a couple paper clips and jimmied the cuffs open, after rubbing her wrists bunkie jumped up and gave me a bigg kiss, then I said we better go and find Cookie and make sure she 's alright. looking up and down the hal way we head to the back door and to my car

Bunkie said give me the keys I know exactually where they have taken her after giving he rthe keys we were speeding away going to try to save cookie

Bear - MY HERO!!!

 

[LunarKitten]

Looks like I'd better get my slumming bumm in gear and write something

 

[cookiejar]

Looks like I'd better get my slumming bumm in gear and write something

That's right you cheap tramp lol...

I hope a man comes and saves me...

 

[cookiejar]

Looks like I'd better get my slumming bumm in gear and write something

That's right you cheap tramp lol...

I hope a man comes and saves me...

 

[cookiejar]

double damn post

 

[LunarKitten]

That's right you cheap tramp lol...

I hope a man comes and saves me...

Cheap??!! I'll have you know I have the most expensive taste in town *flings hair over shoulders in a huff*

And hey, we're the ones saving your butt

 

[cookiejar]

Cheap??!! I'll have you know I have the most expensive taste in town *flings hair over shoulders in a huff*

And hey, we're the ones saving your butt

That remains to be seen... hugsssss

 

[islander01]

That's right you cheap tramp lol...

I hope a man comes and saves me...

Maybe a man will cum and save you

 

[cookiejar]

Maybe a man will cum and save you

Sounds intriguing...

 

[Ammo44]

BUMP

No way am I letting this thread die.......I promise to write a new chapter in the very near future.

 

[cookiejar]

BUMP

No way am I letting this thread die.......I promise to write a new chapter in the very near future.

Damn Ammo...I'm still waiting for a man to save me...

 

[kayte]

Damn Ammo...I'm still waiting for a man to save me...

Hi Cookie!!!! Maybe a woman will do the honors!!!

 

[cookiejar]

Hi Cookie!!!! Maybe a woman will do the honors!!!

What's the song by Bonnie Tyler? "I Need A Hero?"

{{{{{{{{KAYTE}}}}}}}}

 

[kayte]

What's the song by Bonnie Tyler? "I Need A Hero?"

{{{{{{{{KAYTE}}}}}}}}

Hi {{{{{{{{{{{Cookie}}}}}}}

You mean this one darlin'?

Was I the only one to notice
That human nature doesn’t work that way
They tell me if I look deep inside me
That I can find my own way

I only find a rebel and a fool there
Who won’t admit that he’s afraid
I thought I was holdin’ on to freedom
But locked my soul up in chains

I need a hero
Who’ll dare to find me
Fly to my rescue
And crash through the wall
Announce my freedom
Bring me to my senses
Gather me into his strong arms
And carry me off. . . to safety

What is this talk about a Savior
Well does he listen, is he even there?
And should I be asking him directly?
But why should he consider my prayer?

Well, I don’t quite know how to do this
But Jesus, I can’t save myself
So here I go calling out for mercy
And crying out for your help
(So if you hear me. . .)

I need a hero
Please dare to find me
Fly to my rescue
And crash through the wall
Announce my freedom
Bring me to my senses
Gather me into your strong arms
And carry me off

 

[cookiejar]

Hi {{{{{{{{{{{Cookie}}}}}}}

You mean this one darlin'?

Was I the only one to notice
That human nature doesn’t work that way
They tell me if I look deep inside me
That I can find my own way

I only find a rebel and a fool there
Who won’t admit that he’s afraid
I thought I was holdin’ on to freedom
But locked my soul up in chains

I need a hero
Who’ll dare to find me
Fly to my rescue
And crash through the wall
Announce my freedom
Bring me to my senses
Gather me into his strong arms
And carry me off. . . to safety

What is this talk about a Savior
Well does he listen, is he even there?
And should I be asking him directly?
But why should he consider my prayer?

Well, I don’t quite know how to do this
But Jesus, I can’t save myself
So here I go calling out for mercy
And crying out for your help
(So if you hear me. . .)

I need a hero
Please dare to find me
Fly to my rescue
And crash through the wall
Announce my freedom
Bring me to my senses
Gather me into your strong arms
And carry me off

Sorry it was "Holding Out For A Hero"

Where have all the good men gone
And where are all the gods?
Where's the street-wise Hercules
To fight the rising odds?
Isn't there a white knight upon a fiery steed?
Late at night I toss and I turn and I dream of what I need

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

Somewhere after midnight
In my wildest fantasy
Somewhere just beyond my reach
There's someone reaching back for me
Racing on the thunder and rising with the heat
It's gonna take a superman to sweep me off *my* feet

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night

Up where the mountains meet the heavens above
Out where the lightning splits the sea
I could swear there is someone somewhere
Watching me
Through the wind and the chill and the rain
And the storm and the flood
I can feel his approach
Like a fire in my blood

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the end of the night
He's gotta be strong
And he's gotta be fast
And he's gotta be fresh from the fight
I need a hero
I'm holding out for a hero 'til the morning light
He's gotta be sure
And it's gotta be soon
And he's gotta be larger than life

 

[kayte]

I think I'd take either one!!!!

 

[cookiejar]

I think I'd take either one!!!!

Hell yes...I've been in that trunk so long...

 

[kayte]

Hell yes...I've been in that trunk so long...

{{{{{{{{{{{Cookie}}}}}}

People tell me it will happen again..... I just am losing patience......