getting feedback on story so far...

[simon1138]

hello,
i have started writing a story for this site, about son and his mother having sex with his bully. yes, weird.
anyway, that is the story, there are many like it but this one is mine. i have a basic draft that would require a lot of filling in, more sequences described, how they got together etc.
would anyone be interested in reading it and if so, how would i do that?
thanks

 

[pantalaimonlyra]

Check in the Authors' Hangout. I think there's a volunteer story editor thingy on Lit.