Grandpa, wake up!

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Grandpa might have a favorite granddaughter, in that she just doesn't seem to look like his son, her mother's husband... (Still somewhat taboo, though) Especially if he told his know-it-all son that woman wasn't the one to marry.

in this story, this Grandpa is Mom's Dad.

 

[LupusDei]

That's to leave the possibility of the sequel - flashback to Mom doing her Dad, then Mom and Sally both doing grandpa. Will be tricky to make it different from Bad Grandpa.

Then Dad can get involved...or the school characters mentioned in this episode... and the other Grandpa...I could be good for life on this one.

It's great.

I can only hope if (when) you decide to write a sequel, you would start exactly where this cut off, with detailed description of Sally and her thoughts, as the only possible complaint I could have with this was that it ended a minute or two too soon (but that's design too, I reckon).

On that note, I would greatly enjoy another morning of Sally going knowingly and openly to fulfill her mission solo as well (before or after teaming up with mom). She also, or alternatively, could adorably naively suggest she could wake grandpa sooner if she slept with him... Maybe it's exactly after that when mom shows up to wake up them both.

 

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It's great.

I can only hope if (when) you decide to write a sequel, you would start exactly where this cut off, with detailed description of Sally and her thoughts, as the only possible complaint I could have with this was that it ended a minute or two too soon (but that's design too, I reckon).

On that note, I would greatly enjoy another morning of Sally going knowingly and openly to fulfill her mission solo as well (before or after teaming up with mom). She also, or alternatively, could adorably naively suggest she could wake grandpa sooner if she slept with him... Maybe it's exactly after that when mom shows up to wake up them both.

Hate to dash your hopes, but it made more sense to me to start the next morning. Will have Carney's classic three sex scenes (or at least, three mornings). Still room to decide what should go where, as am only 242 words into the intro so far...

 

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On Day Four, Sally learns about anal sex. Mom ends up watching from the doorway, and even helps out with some fingers and lips.

On Day Five, does Mom go up to wake grandpa up herself, or does she once again follow Sally upstairs?

I was thinking that Mom fucking Grandpa was Day Six to end this chapter, but need something fresh for Day Five.... ideas folks?

 

[Carnevil9]

On Day Five, Sally pegs Grandpa with a strapon.

On Day Six, Mom wears the strapon, and she and Grandpa give Sally the old DP (or a spit roast).

 

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On Day Five, Sally pegs Grandpa with a strapon.

On Day Six, Mom wears the strapon, and she and Grandpa give Sally the old DP (or a spit roast).

might be a bit too advanced...at least for Chapter 2...

 

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sigh...writing time, so trudge on I shall, saving Carney's idea for a potential much later chapter. Pegging not my thing, though there are a couple of despicable characters lingering off stage that might deserve it...

A DP is coming, if I keep on with future Chapters... likely Chapter 3, maybe 4.

 

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sigh...writing time, so trudge on I shall, saving Carney's idea for a potential much later chapter. Pegging not my thing, though there are a couple of despicable characters lingering off stage that might deserve it...

A DP is coming, if I keep on with future Chapters... likely Chapter 3, maybe 4.

so...700 words of foreplay this morning...Mom just came into the room..still time for ideas what happens next.

 

[LilSub69]

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If I may share my idea (love the story ) but a flashback story of the mom and Grampa would be amazing to read and then one where Sally and mom are being fucked by Grampa.

Another idea I had was Grampa tells Sally’s uncle(s) and they decide to get on the fun with their niece

 

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If I may share my idea (love the story ) but a flashback story of the mom and Grampa would be amazing to read and then one where Sally and mom are being fucked by Grampa.

Another idea I had was Grampa tells Sally’s uncle(s) and they decide to get on the fun with their niece

Interesting.

I do think Mom will tell more about her history with grandpa, though perhaps not in this chapter. Or maybe. No spoilers. This chapter is almost done.

Had not thought about uncles- I still have a stable of other characters lingering around the edges for future chapters if they get written, but uncles could be possible (I'm not sure if I have ever done an uncle story).

 

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first draft of Chapter 2 done.

Here's the Story Idea issue: as currently written, at the end (spoiler alert) Dad is leaning in the doorway, his hard cock in his palm. But I want chapter 3 , in which Dad does get to join in, to start with the usual Sally going upstairs and telling Grandpa to wake up.

Does the current ending box me into continuing right into Dad fucking Sally, or can I start with "Grandpa wake up", then use a flashback to explain what happened after the end of Chapter 2?

If you all think I'm in a box, I will rewrite the ending of chapter 2.

 

[Carnevil9]

first draft of Chapter 2 done.

Here's the Story Idea issue: as currently written, at the end (spoiler alert) Dad is leaning in the doorway, his hard cock in his palm. But I want chapter 3 , in which Dad does get to join in, to start with the usual Sally going upstairs and telling Grandpa to wake up.

Does the current ending box me into continuing right into Dad fucking Sally, or can I start with "Grandpa wake up", then use a flashback to explain what happened after the end of Chapter 2?

If you all think I'm in a box, I will rewrite the ending of chapter 2.

Not in a box. I think your flashback idea would work fine. Or just use dialog to explain what happened between the chapters. ("Okay, Daddy; this time I'm going to blow you, not just watch you wank while Grandpa and I get it on.") Or you can just ignore it; continuity is overrated.

Question: Do either Sally or Grandpa interact with Dad at the end of Chapter 2? If they don't notice him stroking along to the action, the whole issue can just be ignored.

 

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Not in a box. I think your flashback idea would work fine. Or just use dialog to explain what happened between the chapters. ("Okay, Daddy; this time I'm going to blow you, not just watch you wank while Grandpa and I get it on.") Or you can just ignore it; continuity is overrated.

Question: Do either Sally or Grandpa interact with Dad at the end of Chapter 2? If they don't notice him stroking along to the action, the whole issue can just be ignored.

sorry. My description was unclear. In the draft, Dad has the last line- just like Mom at the end of Chapter One

 

[Carnevil9]

sorry. My description was unclear. In the draft, Dad has the last line- just like Mom at the end of Chapter One

I think my suggestions still apply.

Does Chapter 2 start with the usual Sally going upstairs to wake Grandpa? If so, you managed to bridge the gap between Chapters 1 and 2. Wouldn't it be the same between Chapters 2 and 3?

 

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I think my suggestions still apply.

Does Chapter 2 start with the usual Sally going upstairs to wake Grandpa? If so, you managed to bridge the gap between Chapters 1 and 2. Wouldn't it be the same between Chapters 2 and 3?

That is my thought.

 

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Chapter 2 is up!

But this is the Story Ideas forum, not Story Promotion, so I am looking for ideas for Chapter 3: Dad joins in Sally's sex awakening.

format is set : three more mornings.

Morning one will start with Sally recreating in her mind how Dad got off (or did he?) after the end of Chapter 2, but that does not count as Day One's sex scene. I'm thinking day one, Dad still mainly watches, but Sally swallows his cum? Or too tame? Or does Dad fuck Mom day one while Sally fucks grandpa? then day two they could swap? Or is it just Dad, Sally and Grandpa while Mom makes breakfast, but Dad fucks Sally too? If so, how? Straight to DP?

What is left for Day Two then?

Day three is definitely a fourway orgy, but room for suggestions on sex acts and combos.

Can't promise to use all ideas- Grandpa has a mind of his own, even while asleep,( or faking it), but interested to know what you suggest.

 

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...or maybe if there is no interest, and the score is off a bit, I should just not bother...

 

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..... hearing crickets...

 

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Writing seems to be therapeutic. Have started Grandpa and Sally's third chapter, which will be days seven, eight, nine. So far, 600 words in, still a flashback to fill in what happened with Dad on Day Six, so though I have ideas for the next adventures, will consider suggestions.

Parenthetically, this is weird for me, because I seldom write more than one story at a time, but had two on the go - the shemale babysitter and another not related to a thread. So now have three going , though the mystery story is out for a beta read to see if it is done.

Hopefully writing two longish tales will provide ample distraction from the evils that befoul me.

 

[Carnevil9]

......Hopefully writing two longish tales will provide ample distraction from the evils that befoul me.

That could be the most HP Lovecraft line I've read in a long time!

 

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That could be the most HP Lovecraft line I've read in a long time!

ummm...not sure if I ought to say "thanks" or "ohmigawd".

NOT alts. Not even close.

I just watch too much Supernatural.

 

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On the second morning of Chapter 3.

The she-male babysitter story is close to done but not quite- I think one sex scene to add, then the conclusion.

Since World's Best Blowjob? was accepted as a non-incest story, wondering whether I focus on finishing Grandpa Wake Up ch. 3 first , to keep up the sequencing.

stay tuned.

Will be accenting suggestions for ch 4 soon. In that chapter, Sally's nemesis Beatrice joins in, and perhaps shy Esther Primm as well?

 

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Find myself veering off here.

Day 8 Dad about to get his turn fucking Sally. Grandpa so far has no clear role.

Day 9, final day in this chapter, planned to have the two progenitors spit roast sally as I think somebody suggested above.

As day 8 is unfolding, a DP in vagina and anus suggests itself. But I tend to think Dad and Sally need one on one first.

Do I do the spit roast in day 8, the DP in day 9? Or the reverse?

Or do I leave day 8 as just sally and Dad (with Sally waking up Grandpa separately)? If so, which MFM variation occurs on Day 9?

 

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sounds like a soliloquy...

Today's writing took me up to where day 8 either ends or the threesome starts.

Quite undecided.
If anybody has input, would be happy t hear in the next 22 hours or so...

 

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Chapter 3 (Dad joins in) drafted. Is about twice as long as Chapter One, so editing might take a while.

Meanwhile, thinking Chapter 4 . Beatrice, Sally's nemesis joins in. i know it starts with Beatrice eating a double cream pie, but open to suggestions as to combinations/activity. With more characters, not everyone can join in. Despite that, wondering whether Esther, the shy fall from the school bus show up in Chapter 4 or 5. Doing another chapter with a classmate might be overkill.

If you make suggestions, remember that this will follow the three morning wake up call template.