House Wives

[pointless]

it was a bit of a joke, but there are a couple of schizoids and about half of mom's family are alcoholics and drug addicts. my dads are more the depressed type.

you should have been at my grandmothers funeral, it was a blast! lots of hate spread nice and thick.

one of my cousins once actually called the police on her parents claiming they worked for the mob and had dead bodies buried in their back yard. last i heard of her,she was drug addicted whore.

it's a fun group. i avoid them as much as is polite.

 

[Screaming Grace]

all eyes are scary when they stare at you without blinking.

when i was a kid, i used to cover up pictures when i was left alone. felt like i was being watched all the time.

acute paranoid schizophrenia and bipolar disorder run in the family.

Interesting. How is this manifested. I have come across chronic paranoid schtzophrenia, but never acute.

Hello you two.

This is a thread that is helping me towards a story that is not from personal experience, that is hard enough for a new be like me.

I don’t mean to be rude but if you are just going to make non helpful comments please find another thread.

Thank You I hope Screaming Grace…

 

[pointless]

thank me for what?

 

[Screaming Grace]

I am working on my characters at the moment, I am trying not to have to many, but I would welcome some ideas on character traits that you might like incorporated.

Grace

 

[MsLinnet]

I am working on my characters at the moment, I am trying not to have to many, but I would welcome some ideas on character traits that you might like incorporated.

Grace

Hay you. Just look around you and see how others act, then elaborate on what you see make them fit your story.

Linnet

 

[Un-registered]

Hay you. Just look around you and see how others act, then elaborate on what you see make them fit your story.

Linnet

Yes, most of my characters are identifiable if you happen to know me well enough.

A word of caution though, don't put too many characters in early on, it confuses the readers.

A secret trick you might use; every character should have a name which cannot be confused with the others. (Example: if you have a character called Mary-Ann don't also have one called Marion.)

If your story is long and multi-chaptered don't introduce all of them at the beginning, add one or two per chapter. A good example of this is the Pastor Sarah story by mix and match.

In your story you could start with two or three bored women actually just talking and one suggests the brothel idea and those three start it up. The others join slowly.

 

[MsLinnet]

I have seen her first few characters for this story and I think she is doing very well on the development.

I do think this a great idea that could work very well but it needs to start slow and build up to something a lot bigger.

Linnet

 

[Screaming Grace]

Thanks Linnet but I know you are bias.

I think I am going to leave this for someone with a better understanding of how to work a complicated story’s


Grace

 

[ken philips]

HOUSEWIVES - WIVES CLUB

THIS IS AN INTERESTING THREAD.

I HAVE BEEN PONDERING DEVELOPING A SIMILAR STYLE OF STORY ABOUT A 'WIVES CLUB'.

MY CONCEPT WAS A COMMERCIAL CLUB WITH 2 WIFE OWNERS, WHICH ONLY EMPLOYS WIVES OVER 25 OR SO THRU TO MID-40S.

THE CLUB WOULD BE LIKE A STRIP CLUB, WITH THE WIVES PUTTING ON STRIP SHOWS AND SERVING THE CUSTOMERS IN SKIMPY G-STRING OUTFITS.

BUT IT ALSO WOULD BE MUCH MORE.

CUSTOMERS COULD ALSO CHOOSE TO FUCK THE WIVES AT THE CLUB.

ANY THOUGHTS?

KEN

 

[sirhugs]

I think you ought not to shout , Ken....you do know that all caps is shouting, don't you?

otherwise, I think your idea is interesting. It might need a bit of work. Like why the club exists. How they know their hubbies won't visit.....

 

[InsatiableMe]

I'm thinking that this "club" would have to be more like a social club (think of a gardener's club or lil' old ladies getting together for bridge - or a special interest club in high school) instead of a strip club/bar.

After all, it is not legal for strippers to give customers "more" for their money. (Though I am sure some are getting away with it somewhere...)

So, instead of some place that is open to the public it is a "private club" for various members/owners and their exclusive friends. As you said, Ken, the wives of the members can be the dancers/strippers, waitresses, etc. And since there would be no exchange of money (except for perhaps alcoholic beverages or something) nothing illegal would be going on when a dancer gives a member "something extra".

 

[snooper]

I love these old threads being revived. Where are the contributors now? Screaming Grace never posts these days, MsLinnett is rumoured to be publishing novels, BlessedBe has vanised from sight, Un-Registered almost never posts.

 

[InsatiableMe]

Well, I liked Ken's initial idea with the little bit I added to it.

 

[sirhugs]

Well, I liked Ken's initial idea with the little bit I added to it.

so do I! go for it!

 

[InsatiableMe]

I've been thinking about the idea, but it seems too time consuming. At least, for me it would be. I'd have to come up with a catchy name for the club (perhaps a "real" strip club the main character owns and when it's closed he "opens it up" for his "special" guests, etc.), develop at least half a dozen characters to have 3 couples, perhaps more characters, a plot, etc.

 

[InsatiableMe]

(I don't know why this double posted. Lit didn't even "quit responding" to me like it sometimes does!)

 

[MsLinnet]

I love these old threads being revived. Where are the contributors now? Screaming Grace never posts these days, MsLinnett is rumoured to be publishing novels, BlessedBe has vanised from sight, Un-Registered almost never posts.

I am still around and I often scan lit's forums. I liked this Idea it was always going to be a complicated idea that could work on many levels, I think it would have been easier if a few writers wrote it together as I think the number of characters Grace was planning to use needed different styles.

As regards Grace not posting. Grace and her boyfriend run a club in Toronto last time we spoke. They were doing very well for themselves, her boyfriend brutality to her always annoyed me but it seems now that he gets his kicks from watching others rather than beating up on Grace.

Blessed-Be well the loss of her is no great loss to me as there was no love lost between us. Un-Registered I miss this character but from all accounts the actions of Blessed-Be caused him to leave this forum.

Love Lin

 

[ken philips]

Wives Club

Insatiable

I think your thoughts are good.

I will have a go at a story as devleoped here over next few nights/week or so.

See what you think.

Ken

 

[InsatiableMe]

I'll keep an eye out for it Ken.

 

[Darby_]

I realize Im a little late to this thread, but I love the idea and would love to try it out as a SRP if anyone was interested.. maybe just 2 or 3 women.. to see how the dynamics play out



Darby

 

[ken philips]

Folks

I submitted a story roughly along the lines discussed at the weekend, altho I developed the concept a bit more.

While I am fairly happy with the story submitted, I am more than happy to revise it based on people's suggestions.

If one of the people in this thread want to pick it up & further develop it, i am happy with that too as long as you indicate you are picking up my story and reworking it at the start.

Ken