Angelus
Wrapped up in Shadow
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- Aug 15, 2000
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EHawkins said:It's so malevolent... it looks like it's staring right at me--it gives me chills!
(I think I like the other one better--it's easier on the eyes)
If you cut 10 pages from your MS, and they really needed to go, then it's no big deal, if it's stuff you know you can do better![]()
I know.... it is a freaky picture. What is worse is that if you move it is like its eyes move with you.
It could have been worse. I could have put it on in the middle of the night. That would have chilled any one to the bone.
Yeah, they did need to go. It was getting so.... blah blah blah that I thought. Do I need him to say this.
That is one major big thing that I did with this novel, well hopefully novels. I am doing them all in the first person. Argh!
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