I'm glad of its under 18 rule

All you can do then, is remove that scene and resubmit. If it gets another rejection, that wasn't it.

Yep.... Went through and re edited the entire thing, removed any and all references to high school, cannot find anything that referred to underage sex, but it got rejected again for the same reason. I do not think there is a real person looking at it, I think they are either rejecting it without looking at my message to them or it's a 'bot that sees something it does not like and rejects it.
 
Yep.... Went through and re edited the entire thing, removed any and all references to high school, cannot find anything that referred to underage sex, but it got rejected again for the same reason. I do not think there is a real person looking at it, I think they are either rejecting it without looking at my message to them or it's a 'bot that sees something it does not like and rejects it.
We speculate the site uses a key word search, which might ping on numbers less than eighteen, words that might suggest under age depictions, etc. It might only be a phrase or a sentence - try thinking like a word finder, not a human being. Something's triggering something.
 
Look for a transposition of age that is acceptable one way and not the other. Like, 21 turned around 12. That's gotten my ass two times in the past.
 
Look for a transposition of age that is acceptable one way and not the other. Like, 21 turned around 12. That's gotten my ass two times in the past.
re-read it several times. Had a friend read it.

I cannot take the story line any further without this piece so I am pulling the first part too. Time to work on other things now.

Thanks for everyone's input. It would have been fun to see this go the distance, but it's been almost a month on just this one part, got more work to do on other stories.

:)
 
Look for a transposition of age that is acceptable one way and not the other. Like, 21 turned around 12. That's gotten my ass two times in the past.

Best I can figure... the story is about a big guy with a woman of diminutive stature with a small pussy. Maybe the 'bot that they are using sees that as a problem.
 
re-read it several times. Had a friend read it.

I cannot take the story line any further without this piece so I am pulling the first part too. Time to work on other things now.

Thanks for everyone's input. It would have been fun to see this go the distance, but it's been almost a month on just this one part, got more work to do on other stories.

:)
Well, there are other places to put it, so there's no loss.
 
One other thing to do is include a note to the moderators when you submit (after have somebody else read it) that all references to underage sex has been removed.
 
One other thing to do is include a note to the moderators when you submit (after have somebody else read it) that all references to underage sex has been removed.
Did that the last time I resubmitted. Gave a list of items I thought might have been the cause and that they had been removed or edited. The response was identical to the prior rejection.
 
How did you send her a message? Only messages sent via the "conversation" feature (envelope at top right of this page) reach her at all.
That is what I did. I have an open convo with her, but she has not responded, and nor do I expect her to. <shrugs> It is what it is.
 
FINALLY!!!

After resubmitting four or five times Part 2 was published.

Feels like I was trying to pass a kidney stone or something.
 
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