I've been rejected :(

[RogueLurker]

Edited to add: I don't know about you, but I tend to miss suddle sexy movements when I'm pissed.

Hell, I tend to miss those when I'm in a good mood! When I'm in a pissy mood, I just miss the point.

 

[BlackSnake]

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[BlackSnake]

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[FallingToFly]

I managed to pants Rayford and we played keep away with his shorts. Rayford was able grab hold of my panties. I kicked away from him before Burt and Steven could get over to help him, but he got my panties off before I could get away.

Anyone want to try? Shit, I'm twice her age and I still laugh and giggle at bare ass around the pool.

I wiggled around as Steven tried to guide his thing in me and I laughed and joked with Rayford and Burt about it. Steven had a good sized thing, about six inches or so and it curved down. They were all circumcised, which I liked. Rayford had the longest thing, about an inch longer than Steven’s and Burt’s and it curve up. Burt’s thing was thicker and looked like a much older man’s thing.

Thingie! LOL...trash mouth. So, when you are describing sex to your friends you say: I wiggled around while Steven tried to drive his 13 inch monster cock into my pulsating hot little cunt. I traunted and teased him in front of the other men who were waiting their turn at my juicy pussy.

That sound fucking stupid, or is that how you like for Lit author's to sound.

Fuck, if you didn't take the story out of context, you'd see descriptions relative to the ages of the characters...."Burt’s thing was thicker and looked like a much older man’s thing."

It sounds like my 13 year old cousin bragging about how much sex she's having in an effort to be "grown-up." It is neither cute, nor mature, nor is it in anyway believable as an adult persona.

Perhaps the author wasn't thinking they were underaged when she wrote it, but I say again: there is no way that Lit would post this as is. In addition to the childish narrative, there are NUMEROUS grammar/spelling/etc/etc mistakes. The whole thing is difficult on the eye, unwieldy, and uncomfortable to read, unless you're into children, which I'm not.

Your arguments, BlackSnake, may have had more weight if you didn't have multiple errors in your own words, including spelling, grammar, etc. Your attempt at trying to make us out to be filthy-mouthed and dirty-minded fails, if you've ever read even one of the stories posted by most of the editors who have responded. I have yet to write, or approve of, the usage of " 13 inch monster cock into my pulsating hot little cunt. "

Something as simple as "tried to guide himself into me" is both very clear, very mature, and tasteful.

You say you sent Coochie here for help from the editors. She's gotten it, repeatedly, and the only person being POMPOUS, arrogant, asinine or low here is you.

((Edited to repair the damage hydrocodone is doing to my typing.))

 

[BlackSnake]

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[BlackSnake]

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[LadyCibelle]

Stop doing drugs and try to be helpful, or is that too much for your self important ass. If you want to drag your 13 cousin into this, then be my guest.

Other than being a jackass, what do you have to add? Nothing, still nothing but shit.

Edited to add: You know what? You need to just shut the fuck up! Don't say a damn thing about writing or editing.

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[FallingToFly]

Oh dear, I hit a nerve. My apologies, LC, for apparently evoking BS into a flaming spew.

And BlackSnake, darling, you go right ahead and do the manly thing of having teeth out with no drugs to deal with the pain. Please, please do. I'll leave that to you though, as I don't do well as a rule when in agony.

I still stand by my earlier opinion. Welcome to ignore.

 

[BlackSnake]

Oh dear, I hit a nerve. My apologies, LC, for apparently evoking BS into a flaming spew.

And BlackSnake, darling, you go right ahead and do the manly thing of having teeth out with no drugs to deal with the pain. Please, please do. I'll leave that to you though, as I don't do well as a rule when in agony.

I still stand by my earlier opinion. Welcome to ignore.

I hide my tears of pain in my pillow, but I don't do even asprin. FallingToFly, my apologies for attacking you here. I don't ignore anyone, ever.

 

[RogueLurker]

BlackSnake removed the inflamatory posts and I appreciate what he has done.

There were two disparate conversations going on, both at cross purposes. His perception of what this thread was discussing and other people's perceptions were not aligned. Things were said that probably shouldn't have been said and he has removed himself from the conversation like a gentleman. Let's respect his decision to not discuss this anymore.



So why don't we let this thread settle down a bit and move our attention over the the EF Word Association thread? Damn you all ... how can you let my favourite thread collapse and do nothing about it ... *sniff sniff

 

[LadyCibelle]

Thank you Snakey...I knew you were a nice person and it would show in the end.

Lets all cool our heads and let this thread cool down for a while.
As Rogue said....lets all converge on the Free association thread and lets make it something memorable.

Come on you...yes YOU....come on....drinks on me.

 

[snooper]

Replace "Steven, Rayford, Burt and I had been friends forever, but they were still boys." with "Steven, Rayford, Burt and I had been friends since first grade, fifteen years ago, but they still behaved like boys." and resubmit with a note in the notes box that first grade plus fifteen years makes them all at least twenty years old.

I have watched the fireworks on here with wonder and awe.

May I reiterate my first posting (above) and put in, as clarification, the comment that I did not read this as a story of underage sex, just as the use of rather less lurid words than is normal among Lit "authors".

Come on you...yes YOU....come on....drinks on me.

Diolch yn fawr. Mon chois - un p'tit trou Normand, stp.

 

[BlackSnake]

Hmmmm.......

 

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[BlackSnake]

There....

 

[BlackSnake]

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[Selena_Kitt]

May I reiterate my first posting (above) and put in, as clarification, the comment that I did not read this as a story of underage sex, just as the use of rather less lurid words than is normal among Lit "authors".

Lurid! You said lurid!

Sorry... inside joke

 

[coochie]

Hmmmm.......

I think it is a wonderful cover. You have a lot of talent.

Thanks Darling

 

[RogueLurker]

Lurid! You said lurid!

Sorry... inside joke

And he used it in the correct context ....