Just one Line.

[JaxRhapsody]

Should do one more line…

Drugs are bad.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

So the other stuff is from a fantasy novel I've been working on. This is from the untitled new [for Lit] story.
“What are you doing later, before you struggle to make ends meet?”
“Why?”
“I figure we could have a bit of fun, I could take you out for dinner.”
“What is this; Pretty Woman,” she laughed.
“Huh? I don’t get it.”
“It’s an old- n-never mind,” she waved a hand, “what is this about, you want to take an old hooker out on a date?”

 

[AchtungNight]

Two lines from an upcoming release of mine called “Pathfinder: Union of the Righteous”-

“I’m glad I am useful to you!”

“No glory… without… risk!”

 

[MargotPayge]

by ramysamy7 on 9 hours ago

5 stars, if only because you are the first author in years I’ve found on this site that used “discreet” properly, as opposed to “discrete”

"I never realized they were spelled differently, but you can count on my discretion," She whispered discreetly, each discrete emotion playing on her face.

I hope I did that right. It's "discretion" that fouls it up in my head. CURSE YOU ENGLISH for having so many irregular forms.

 

[onehitwanda]

"I never realized they were spelled differently, but you can count on my discretion," She whispered discreetly, each discrete emotion playing on her face.

I hope I did that right. It's "discretion" that fouls it up in my head. CURSE YOU ENGLISH for having so many irregular forms.

Correct English takes a right wright a right rite to write it right.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Correct English takes a right wright a right rite to write it right.

Insert Buffalo buffalo counterpoint here.

 

[LIDiver]

Correct English takes a right wright a right rite to write it right.

Thanks Wand, I think I need therapy after that one.

 

[onehitwanda]

Thanks Wand, I think I need therapy after that one.

 

[NoTalentHack]

From my femdom MC entry for the AI Era event, Medusa’s Daughter:

“So Euryale–that’s the name of the AI–will keep you on the straight and narrow when I’m not around. It’s pretty rudimentary and not very bright, but that’s okay; neither are you.”

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Insert Buffalo buffalo counterpoint here.

Police police, police police police, police police.

 

[lovecraft68]

“My name is Abigail Lefay. Say my name! Sing my name!”
He forced his mouth open, and whimpered when his scorched flesh screamed in protest.
“A...” It emerged as a strangled gurgle.
“I said, sing my name!”
The blades in his palms grew hotter. He shrieked when they burned the flesh and bone of his hands.
“A...Abigaillllll!” he wailed in agony.
Smiling, she released the knives, leaving him hanging on the wall.
“Yessss,” she purred. “Abigail Lefay, and this is my fucking city!”

 

[MediocreAuthor]

“My name is Abigail Lefay. Say my name! Sing my name!”
He forced his mouth open, and whimpered when his scorched flesh screamed in protest.
“A...” It emerged as a strangled gurgle.
“I said, sing my name!”
The blades in his palms grew hotter. He shrieked when they burned the flesh and bone of his hands.
“A...Abigaillllll!” he wailed in agony.
Smiling, she released the knives, leaving him hanging on the wall.
“Yessss,” she purred. “Abigail Lefay, and this is my fucking city!”

Sir, this is a Wendy's erotica website.

 

[lovecraft68]

Sir, this is a Wendy's erotica website.

Maybe I find scumbags being tortured erotic.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Hum, that's just so oddish.

Maybe I find scumbags being tortured erotic.

 

[lovecraft68]

Hum, that's just so oddish.

Let's face it, if I gender swapped that it would be a great BTB story and all the hyenas would be so hard they'd actually need an entire hand rather than just two fingers to jack off to it.

 

[MillieDynamite]

"Tall frame and curves in all the right places — enough to catch your eye but not so much you don’t notice the rest of the package. Her hair cascaded down to her shoulders like strands of crimson silk."

Two sentences so shoot me.

 

[lovecraft68]

"Tall frame and curves in all the right places — enough to catch your eye but not so much you don’t notice the rest of the package. Her hair cascaded down to her shoulders like strands of crimson silk."

Two sentences so shoot me.

We don't sentence shame here.
But we could probably find other things to shame you for

 

[MillieDynamite]

I've so much to be shamed for that it wouldn't be a challenge for you a'tall.

We don't sentence shame here.
But we could probably find other things to shame you for

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Let's face it, if I gender swapped that it would be a great BTB story and all the hyenas would be so hard they'd actually need an entire hand rather than just two fingers to jack off to it.

I don't even disagree... But if it was gender swapped, you'd be calling it degenerate filth (I'd agree, but then again, I don't find either erotic)

 

[lovecraft68]

I don't even disagree... But if it was gender swapped, you'd be calling it degenerate filth (I'd agree, but then again, I don't find either erotic)

Maybe, but I'd be drowned out by all the praise.

Violence against women is the accepted norm here, do it to a guy its a problem.

The big difference between me and the LW incels is they think they know what hate is. I can teach them how wrong they are.

 

[Constories]

Maybe, but I'd be drowned out by all the praise.

Violence against women is the accepted norm here, do it to a guy its a problem.

The big difference between me and the LW incels is they think they know what hate is. I can teach them how wrong they are.

"We're all hypocrites here, truly."

From Range Cold

 

[lovecraft68]

"We're all hypocrites here, truly."

From Range Cold

Takers Take until they're Taken....from the book series my excerpt is from...and the only mantra that works in life.

I think since I posted those few lines we see how differently something nasty happening to a man here is perceived as opposed to it being a woman. Even women here are conditioned to accept it as the norm.

For context the guy being tortured is a mob lieutenant who kidnapped four teenage girls with plans to gang rape them then sell them to sex traffickers.

In other words an LW or NC hero here on lit.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

Takers Take until they're Taken....from the book series my excerpt is from...and the only mantra that works in life.

I think since I posted those few lines we see how differently something nasty happening to a man here is perceived as opposed to it being a woman. Even women here are conditioned to accept it as the norm.

For context the guy being tortured is a mob lieutenant who kidnapped four teenage girls with plans to gang rape them then sell them to sex traffickers.

In other words an LW or NC hero here on lit.

Alright, I rescind my critiques. The wicked must pay.

I write almost exclusively noncon, but even I can't enjoy stories which glamorize gang-rape or human trafficking.

 

[lovecraft68]

Alright, I rescind my critiques. The wicked must pay.

I write almost exclusively noncon, but even I can enjoy stories which glamorize gang-rape or human trafficking.

I think you meant can't. (Or hope so LOL)

Its not glamorized in my story, its erotic horror, but the erotic parts are separate. Its written to be what it is, disgusting, appalling, and for the reader to enjoy every moment of the mobster's torment.

But FWIW? There are plenty of BTB stories where the wife is raped and sold into trafficking, and to them it is erotic.

There was a story here some time ago someone started a thread about and I'm not sure if its still around or the site was shamed into removing it, but a woman had her nipples burned off while being tortured. That was cleared in LW....an erotic category and the section has gotten far worse since then.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

I think you meant can't. (Or hope so LOL)

Its not glamorized in my story, its erotic horror, but the erotic parts are separate. Its written to be what it is, disgusting, appalling, and for the reader to enjoy every moment of the mobster's torment.

But FWIW? There are plenty of BTB stories where the wife is raped and sold into trafficking, and to them it is erotic.

There was a story here some time ago someone started a thread about and I'm not sure if its still around or the site was shamed into removing it, but a woman had her nipples burned off while being tortured. That was cleared in LW....an erotic category and the section has gotten far worse since then.

I said "can't" (I certainly didn't go back and correct my typo afterwards! )

But I would make the argument that just because evil men enjoy evil stories about women being tortured, doesn't make it okay to write evil stories where men are tortured.

Now in the proper context (when the torture isn't eroticized) I don't mind horror stories that include torture, but I'm gender-neutral on the topic.

As for posting any torture in the LW category (or any section other than non-erotic) I don't think that's problematic, but I do think that putting torture in a story automatically eroticizes the torture in question.

Case in point? Your aforementioned Erotic Horror story which separates the sex from the violence. As long as it truly is separate, I'd be okay matter of the category you placed it in.