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pipercatt said:
*smooching you back*
I hate to leave you luv...but my eyelids are getting heavy...
Allright. Goodnight.
Take care.
One last thing....this was written earlier today, just before a class, looking for an opinion.
In a second, I was there,
In the next, no longer,
To be one moment, in the air,
Then, not allowed to linger,
To spend one night, held by a love,
To be a permanent part of their life,
This is what tears me up, a garlic clove,
This is what fills my heart with strife,
The urge to remain, to be forever,
Not temporary, not a part-time love,
This tears me apart, no longer clever,
Merely longing, for eteritie's clasped glove,
I felt so sad, in a lovers embrace,
I could not bring love to completion,
For I knew I would leave their face,
And journey on, whate'er the mission,
Maybe one day, I will find,
A love honest, decent, kind,
Who will keep me there with her,
That, indeed, will be my cure.
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Beautiful, Nathon...
That was so sweet...
If you like constructive criticism (I hope so, or I'm going to look like a jerk - but I write *a lot* of poems...so...I like to give input and always hope for the same...)...I'll just say this...
Don't sacrifice beauty for a rhyme. (ahem, "garlic clove") You may have put it there for a reason... if so... more beautiful than ever... if not... you may want to rethink it.
But, again... absolutely beautiful, sweetie.
Beautiful, Nathon...
That was so sweet...
If you like constructive criticism (I hope so, or I'm going to look like a jerk - but I write *a lot* of poems...so...I like to give input and always hope for the same...)...I'll just say this...
Don't sacrifice beauty for a rhyme. (ahem, "garlic clove") You may have put it there for a reason... if so... more beautiful than ever... if not... you may want to rethink it.
But, again... absolutely beautiful, sweetie.
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Rose tiptoes into the kitchen....smells something very nice..MMMMMMMm must have been the massage oil...you mean Nathon they got to see a pic and mom didn't?? Shame!!!!!
6 a.m. the coffee is on....up early have to be gone most of the day....just wanted to check in on the family...
hugs and morning
6 a.m. the coffee is on....up early have to be gone most of the day....just wanted to check in on the family...
hugs and morning
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Just one more little question here....how in the heck did I get such tall gals???? Mom is only 5-5..Woohooooooooo and all these lovely girls...must be something in the air...althou I have 2... 6-4 sons and one 6-2 and a daughter 5-9....
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Jewelz said:Making my morning rounds before I head out the door in about a minute!! Have another busy day ahead! ughh!! LOL......much love to my family!!
Glad you dropped in Jewelz...hope your feeling better....I'm geting ready to leave about 11 for most of the day.....it's raining a little here...I'll catch you later too....and hugs...have a good one...I know your really busy with all this moving stuff!
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Glad you dropped in Jewelz...hope your feeling better....I'm geting ready to leave about 11 for most of the day.....it's raining a little here...I'll catch you later too....and hugs...have a good one...I know your really busy with all this moving stuff!
Im up to about 75% .....so that feels good. but definately not as good as i could be! I love rainy days! But its almost 70 and sunny here today and it has me in good spirits for a change!
You have a wonderful and safe day too momma! Love you!
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Jewelz said:
Im up to about 75% .....so that feels good. but definately not as good as i could be! I love rainy days! But its almost 70 and sunny here today and it has me in good spirits for a change!
You have a wonderful and safe day too momma! Love you!
Well I'm glad to hear that...wow it's warm there already...cloudy and raining a little here...I love to be with someone listening to the rain...LOL...but all I get to do is take the ex!!!
God how romantic is that??? haha
luv u too
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pipercatt said:
Thanks hon....it's going to be tough for me too being gone from my *family*....be here for about an hr...looks like a little fog out there too...
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Nathon_88 said:
Morning Nathon...you sure did relax me last nite with that yummy back rub...slept like a baby!!!
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Nathon_88 said:
Coffee coming up...you mean I have to go search??? another coffee drinker in the kitchen!! started on mine at 5 this morn...
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Coffee no sleep???? I found it and you are a REDHEAD!!!! cute smile there too!!!!
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wildrose70 said:Coffee no sleep???? I found it and you are a REDHEAD!!!! cute smile there too!!!!
Ended up chatting with a very pleasant girl last night.......got to BED around 2 AM........Stupid roommate decided that 2 AM was the PERFECT time to watch TV.
Net result, I THINK I got to bed around 5:30.....and I had to get up at 8.
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Nathon_88 said:
*grinning* well at least u had a pleasant evening...whats with the roomie?? LOL....boy your "ass" will be dragging today...is this a slow day???/
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