Chicklet
plays well with self
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- Apr 8, 2002
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Hi MsL,
I think that you should describe some more detail of the activities going on. I like the scene's, the knowledge of the characters going on, I just think that you could go more in depth. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to reading more.
Chicklet
I think that you should describe some more detail of the activities going on. I like the scene's, the knowledge of the characters going on, I just think that you could go more in depth. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to reading more.
Chicklet