NaPoWriMo Chat, Comments, Commiseration

[Angeline]

Oh Remec, you know I love Beatles Girl. Beautiful tribute and who can argue with All You Need Is Love? Not me!

 

[Tzara]

Oh Remec, you know I love Beatles Girl. Beautiful tribute and who can argue with All You Need Is Love? Not me!

It's also a really good use of tritina form.

Excellent poem.

 

[Lyricalli]

Homebound

I'd been eyeing that set of words in 5 Senses off and one for a while, but couldn't quite make them come together. Now, I'm glad, because I love what you did with them.

 

[Lyricalli]

Just Like Riding a Bike

Your ride was so much better than mine. Less ouchy, too

Desperation, indeed...think of it as a STC hehehe

Semivariogram Textural Classifier?

I feel like I should know what an STC is, but I got nothin'

 

[Angeline]

Your ride was so much better than mine. Less ouchy, too





Semivariogram Textural Classifier?

I feel like I should know what an STC is, but I got nothin'

Same Title Challenge.

 

[Lyricalli]

Same Title Challenge.

Of coouuuuuuurse!

Maybe I knocked my head this morning too

 

[Angeline]

Of coouuuuuuurse!

Maybe I knocked my head this morning too

Some of those titles were enough to make you want to knock your head!

 

[butters]

Some of those titles were enough to make you want to knock your head!

*clams up*

 

[Angeline]

*clams up*

:caning:

 

[Lyricalli]

On Cady Road

Picking up the Paint Crew

Inspired by the same set of words, so very different, and both so very, very good.

 

[29wordsforsnow]

...that I'll go first

incredibly romantic, and sad at the same time

 

[Lyricalli]

incredibly romantic, and sad at the same time

I love that about the song I quoted... it's romantic, it's melancholy, and it's truth. It makes me tear up every single time I hear it, and touches me for so many reasons.

 

[Lyricalli]

Congratulations and well done, Tzara! I've really enjoyed your writing, and so glad you came along for this ride with us along with doing your thread in the Hangout

 

[29wordsforsnow]

I do remember, even though from weeks ago, some people being afraid of ending with poor poetry reaching the magic thirty...

...it's nice to see that all of you prove yourself so completely wrong:

Moochie's Somewhere in the middle...a calm, lovely moment...with a very subtle dark thought lurking in the shadows that we look inside an open coffin, probably I'm only seeing things here.

Remec's race to catch up might end in outdoing us all...Found several mushrooms in the last days in the garden, so Mushroom had a familar taste, even if April seems to be out of season. Just 11 more to go! And still three, four?, days left.

Piscator caught something as well, colorful bits and bites.

Mmh, Cheers, Champagne?! The smiles and grins were sparkling here.

To quote Meat Loaf, Tzara, "You took the words right out of my mouth."

...Angie would, maybe, add a mother's eye-rolling, in agreement with Mrs. Namusoke, "Kids these days..."

 

[Lyricalli]

Every Poem 24/30
without a certain thought. Ideas took flight before they formed;
phrases were lost before finding the page and that is the death of it.
Still birth of verse and I mourn as if the poem were viable.

You captured this so well. I've lost countless thoughts, and there can be such frustration and sadness when they refuse to be found again.

Yet Another Poem about Sex
With congratulations and apologies to Daniel Kaluuya for the inspiration.

I read the headline and wondered what on earth he could have said. But, it was so simple, and true, and nothing more intimate than his existence proves. Hopefully, his mom recovers from the immediate embarrassment she needn't have felt. Loved the poem

Top Shelf Liquor 25/30

As soon as I saw your title, this song started playing in my head, so I wanted to share. Not sure what your musical tastes are, but I hope you enjoy it.

Top Shelf - Logan Vath

given home a dirt hole
heading through rank and file of mice and men
she will stand upright in the roaring crowd
to crown herself[/CENTER]

I hope you share a picture when she has her coronation

 

[champagne1982]

Regard My Body as Your Mirror

Tzed, this is so gently masculine that I want to turn my lover into a poet and fuck his brains out.

 

[Tzara]

Tzed, this is so gently masculine that I want to turn my lover into a poet and fuck his brains out.

He's welcome.



Tell him to wear a beret and sip cappuccino.

 

[29wordsforsnow]

Dinner Time

I
am
now
very
oddly
hungry

 

[Angeline]

Lev, two thumbs way up for your rockin and rollickin Eight Beat Mack! Love it!

 

[todski28]

Lev, two thumbs way up for your rockin and rollickin Eight Beat Mack! Love it!

Make it 4 thumbs up, not that I have 4 thumbs, more that I’d be adding my thumbs to Angelines

Measuring you life in chunks of 12-6 is a killer line, especially for a former night club bouncer who was often 7pm-6am

 

[Lyricalli]

Big congrats to Snow and Todd for getting to their thirty!

 

[29wordsforsnow]

Big congrats to Snow and Todd for getting to their thirty!

Thanks, and good luck to all of you. Go, go, go! May your Muse be with you!

 

[29wordsforsnow]

...
azaleas in pinks and reds
...

Woohoo, more azalea poetry...

 

[Lyricalli]

Woohoo, more azalea poetry...

Azaleas are a big thing in my area of the world. We even have a festival for them.

 

[29wordsforsnow]

Azaleas are a big thing in my area of the world. We even have a festival for them.

Arrgh! I live in the wrong part of the world