New poem promotion

[simplyfemme1]

Hi!

I usually write erotic stories based on my real life experiences as a lesbian.

I have published a new poem. I will be happy to get comments of the constructive kind. Please read it when you can. Thank you.

https://www.literotica.com/p/her-wifes-choice

 

[SmilingLez]

Hi!

I usually write erotic stories based on my real life experiences as a lesbian.

I have published a new poem. I will be happy to get comments of the constructive kind. Please read it when you can. Thank you.

https://www.literotica.com/p/her-wifes-choice

I like the way you constructed your free verse. Even though it's not a rhyme it does have a rhyme quality.

Stanzas one and four are identical as are stanzas two and three as far as (line) construction