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[Cruel2BKind]

Newish writer in Gay Male

Its hard to tell how many are fans of Gay male in here, but if there are any I would love to have my stories critiqued a bit. A lot of users comment on the subject matter of the story, and I love that, but I would also like a commentary on my writing and editing style, so pretty-please review my stories!
http://www.literotica.com/s/poor-simon-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/shy-jared-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-bottom-tier
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-boy-from-the-sea-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-new-world

 

[Fyrewing]

http://www.literotica.com/s/winging-it-01

Crazy - the first piece I get submitted officially is an article? It's a somewhat humorous look at this ordeal called "mid-life crisis."

 

[TNP_]

New Story Posted

As with my other 3, new to Literotica.

This is an Ashley Scott story and can be found at this link -

http://www.literotica.com/s/dance-lessons-4

Any feedback, good or bad, will be much appreciated. Thanks.

TNP

 

[LOAnnie2]

My first non non-consent/reluctance story!

http://www.literotica.com/s/in-kind

 

[Fyrewing]

Life & Love, Rebooted (chapter 01) posted.

As always, feedback and commentary welcomed!

 

[Megannnn]

http://www.literotica.com/s/late-night-loving
It's my first real attempt at erotic literature...at a request from my boyfriend. He likes it but I'd like to know what other people think too Any and all feedback is much appreciated as long as there's something you tell me that I can use to make my writing better.

 

[lovecraft68]

Siblings with Benefits Chapter 31 is up.

Personally my favorite chapter to date. Sex, incest, strippers, bikers and one hell of a bar room brawl!

As always feedback and comments both good and bad are always welcome.

http://www.literotica.com/s/siblings-with-benefits-ch-31

 

[Fyrewing]

Winging it! #02 is posted. As always, comments and critiques welcome!

 

[DagobahTomcat]

Night Moves, installment 1 is posted. It starts out with a stepdad sneaking in and feeling up his sleeping stepdaughter, then screwing his sleeping wife, fantasizing about it being the stepdaughter instead.

feedback welcomed!

 

[kromen]

Nude day contest entry about an interracial threesome on the beach. Thick plot, plenty of sex, and waiting for your eyes. Leave a vote and comment, if you wish.

http://www.literotica.com/s/key-west-hospitality

 

[indigogaia]

New stories

Hello everyone,

I'm just popping in to say hi. I just posted my first story submissions. This is pretty cool (and slightly nerve wracking!). I'm relatively new to the erotica genre and definitely to sharing my work with people. Hopefully I'll be able to learn from other readers and improve my craft.

Enjoy

 

[atul_ats]

Indian stories

hi.. i would like more Indian writers share their experiences and fantasies here..

 

[Guest]

Wolverine/Cyclops BDSM Fanfiction

Chapter one just went up. This is the first part of a longer series. Wolverine takes charge of a slightly adled Cyclops. BDSM, medical play, ageplay, corpral punishment....the list goes on and on. There is a plot in there amongst the kink, though.

http://www.literotica.com/s/just-crossed-my-mind-ch-01

 

[kromen]

Hello everyone,

I'm just popping in to say hi. I just posted my first story submissions. This is pretty cool (and slightly nerve wracking!). I'm relatively new to the erotica genre and definitely to sharing my work with people. Hopefully I'll be able to learn from other readers and improve my craft.

Enjoy

Welcome to Lit. We all have had our start somewhere and were just as, if not more, nervous as you are feeling right now. Hint: Post a link to any submissions to help people find it easier. WE are a lazy bunch.

 

[kromen]

Hey readers,
My latest entry into the 2011 Nude day contest is up, My next door neighbor is a tale of exhibitionism like no other. I would love your views, votes, and comments.

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-next-door-neighbor-3

 

[TNP_]

New Story Posted

One more new-to-here story posted today, this time with Denise Richards in the lead -

http://www.literotica.com/s/stud-service-1

As always feedback of any kind would be much appreciated.

Thanks,

TNP

 

[Guest]

x-men kink series updated

Chapter 3 of "Just Crossed My Mind" is up. It's an ongoing, bdsm oriented series. Wolverine takes charge of Cyclops, who is in the middle of a rather nasty nervous breakdown. This chapter features some pretty heavy medical play, so proceed with caution. Feedback would be appreciated.

 

[TheBigLove126]

http://www.literotica.com/s/carrie-gives-an-encore

Carrie Gives An Encore:

After a concert in Boston, Carrie Underwood goes backstage to relax. After taking a quick shower, she is surprised by what she finds in her dressing room.

 

[StrengthThruLove]

Power and Pleaure Chapter 3

HI folks. Its been awhile between chapters, but Power and Pleasure Chpt. 3 is up and ready to read.

This is a science fiction romance centering on a Royal family governing a intergalactic confederation and how they love, support and please each other as their nation fights to survive. The focus is on romance and the sex takes place among people who love and care for one an other.

The story is opened ended and will continue if I get enough readership and feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/s/power-and-pleasure

Feedback is, of course, ardently encouraged.



Thanks for reading.

 

[Trysten]

Jamie the Black Sheep

Hello all,
I've posted my first three submissions this week. Check them out:

Jamie the Black Sheep 1-3

http://www.literotica.com/s/jamie-the-black-sheep-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/jamie-the-black-sheep-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/jamie-the-black-sheep-ch-03

It's about a young professional who starts to release her wild side on a trip to the beach. Please vote, comment, and provide any suggestions you have for the series.

enjoy...

 

[Domwoolf]

ultimate experience

I have an idea for a story and i'd like you imput on possible scenes. Karen and Bill have been married for awhile and Karen is worried that their love life is getting a bit stale and repetitive. She decided to give her husband the ulitmate gift for his big 40 birthday, over a three day weekend she will do whatever he wants with no holds barred and no recriminations after.

I would love to hear from both ladies and men what they think should happen.

Suggestions so far are:
a three way with one of her girlfriends
a three way with her sister
he enters her in a amature stripping contest at a local bar
he takes her out to a local mall and photographs her flashing
having her strip and service him and his budddies at his weekly poker game

What else can you come up with? respond here or email me at domwoolf69@aol.com

 

[john-the-author]

If your tastes run that way, you might have her try anal or deep throating. Both are out of the typical ken for most women, but a percentage of them will do them with varying results. (FWIW, I find having a woman swallow me to the hilt is very nice, but it's not necessarily the be-all and end-all for a good blowjob. It's just one more nice thing that can happen when getting sucked off, but I've had dazzlingly good blowjobs that never got anywhere near that.)

I have an idea for a story and i'd like you imput on possible scenes. Karen and Bill have been married for awhile and Karen is worried that their love life is getting a bit stale and repetitive. She decided to give her husband the ulitmate gift for his big 40 birthday, over a three day weekend she will do whatever he wants with no holds barred and no recriminations after.

I would love to hear from both ladies and men what they think should happen.

Suggestions so far are:
a three way with one of her girlfriends
a three way with her sister
he enters her in a amature stripping contest at a local bar
he takes her out to a local mall and photographs her flashing
having her strip and service him and his budddies at his weekly poker game

What else can you come up with? respond here or email me at domwoolf69@aol.com

 

[JTCIII]

Katy Perry: Encore

Hi everyone,

This is my first time posting to the forum.

I just wanted to do a little advertising for my latest fic. It's called Katy Perry: Encore and it's a short story I wrote to showcase what my style is like, while at the same time experimenting with it a little by writing from a first-person perspective for the first time.

In it, Katy Perry arranges a VIP pass for a lucky guy to meet her beside the stage for some quick fun before performing her encore.

You can find it here;

http://www.literotica.com/s/katy-perry-encore

Voting and feedback is always appreciated. Thanks!

 

[Gus Aspar]

Commando weekend

Karen's wardrobe for the weekend will consist of front-buttoning blouses and shirts, knee-length skirts and hold-up stockings. No bras. No knickers. While they're out shopping, having lunch, visiting friends, Karen will:
flash her pussy and tits to Bill with little regard for whether others can see
talk to Bill about people around them - would he like to fuck the waitress? - would he like to watch Karen suck off the taxi driver?
talk to Bill in graphic terms about what they're going to do when they get home

I have an idea for a story and i'd like you imput on possible scenes. Karen and Bill have been married for awhile and Karen is worried that their love life is getting a bit stale and repetitive. She decided to give her husband the ulitmate gift for his big 40 birthday, over a three day weekend she will do whatever he wants with no holds barred and no recriminations after.

I would love to hear from both ladies and men what they think should happen.

Suggestions so far are:
a three way with one of her girlfriends
a three way with her sister
he enters her in a amature stripping contest at a local bar
he takes her out to a local mall and photographs her flashing
having her strip and service him and his budddies at his weekly poker game

What else can you come up with? respond here or email me at domwoolf69@aol.com

 

[lovecrafter11]

My first story attempt. It's an Aunt-Nephew incest, I would love to hear your feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/s/aunt-claudia