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It didn't work for me. I'm not sure why. I guess I'd ask, did it work for you? To the extent that it didn't, focus on that and record what works.
A pure diddley-squat, but these always catch me up short. Should be Caleb and me. Simple test. Remove the second person.
"came crying to Caleb and I."

I didn't comment or vote, because when something doesn't work for me, but doesn't stand out as terrific (not just competent) writing. I'm not sure if it's me or the story. Don't want to mess up your scores.
 
AG31 said:
It didn't work for me. I'm not sure why. I guess I'd ask, did it work for you? To the extent that it didn't, focus on that and record what works.
A pure diddley-squat, but these always catch me up short. Should be Caleb and me. Simple test. Remove the second person.
"came crying to Caleb and I."

I didn't comment or vote, because when something doesn't work for me, but doesn't stand out as terrific (not just competent) writing. I'm not sure if it's me or the story. Don't want to mess up your scores.
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Oops. You're right.
Thanks for the feedback. Yes, it did "work" for me ;)
 
Idyll, my first GM story, was published yesterday.

Comments here or in Lit. are appreciated, whether positive or negative.
 
Emma and Bobbie Like Anal Sex

Another Emma and Bobbie story, where two women indulge themselves with the same man.
Down at the pool, at the beach, those little girls in my youth, they'd look at me. Tall, tanned swimmer boy, that was me, lying stretched out on a brightly coloured towel, with pretty girls in black bikinis. Or Roberta, that summer, who wore white. Not many girls can do that, wear white.

Bobbie's bikini bottom matched her eyes too, a paler blue. I looked at those white strings at the side. She'd said, "They're not sewn on. Gotta tie 'em in bows, or they fall down." She stretched her leg out, running her toes over my shaft. Dancers, they've got strong toes, comes from gripping the floor. She gripped there for a while, and I grew.

She was lazy, stroking me with her toes.

"You ever been pegged," Bobbie asked, quite out of the blue. Her foot stopped moving, but my cock throbbed. Twice. It was thick and coiled, filling those briefs very full.
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The first Emma and Bobbie story is this one:

Honey Always Tastes Better From the Pot
 
Trying to push this story as it stands on 4.4
It is pretty much what the title says, and the opposite of a slowburn. It’s short, impatient and horny.
Enjoy!

https://www.literotica.com/s/training-their-daughter-for-prom

(But PLEASE don’t read it if you are not into Incest and Non-con, it is really rough and not for everyone.
I have enough men writing to me and with happiness telling me they gave it 1 star and what a horrible wife/mom/human being I am.)
 
I have a new story up: Too Cold Not to Fuck.

Brother-sister I/T stroker to pander to the masses explore ways to increase my readership.

ETA: Oh wow! It's been up for less than an hour and already it has more than 500 views and 15 ratings. With at least one 1. Who does that? They're in I/T, but they hate the idea of a brother and sister having sex? Or maybe it's the lack of typos.
 
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I have a new story up after many long months of absence. It's called 'Royal Escorts.' A case of mistaken identity leads to miscommunication, mischievousness, and passionate sex. It's not scary, even though it's Hollows Eve as of this posting. But it does have lots of dress-up, role-playing, and humor. So, if you enjoy light-hearted, fun, creative, funny, erotic stories, be sure to check it out. It already has a couple of praises under the comments. https://www.literotica.com/s/royal-escorts
 
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UnpublishedEroticaWriter said:
I have a new story up after many long months of absence. It's called 'Royal Escorts.' A case of mistaken identity leads to miscommunication, mischievousness, and passionate sex. It's not scary, even though it's Hollows Eve as of this posting. But it does have lots of dress-up, role-playing, and humor. So, if you enjoy light-hearted, creative, funny, erotic stories, be sure to check it out. It already has a couple of praises under the comments. https://www.literotica.com/s/royal-escorts
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Listed. (gonna be a lot of reading this weekend)
 
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-fishing-club
Eric discovers a club where fathers gather to secretly watch live streaming of their daughter's one night stands. But to join he has to put his beloved Robyn in the pot and risk her being picked by the hired stud. Join Eric as he's torn apart by his porn addiction and desire to protect his daughter.
 
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