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[NateKhyrivon]

Hi! I'm a new author on here and would like to get feedback on my first story. It seems to be doing well so far, but any helpful feedback is appreciated.

Scared Sister Pt. 01: Astraphobia

 

[Lumiere_Amie]

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-fishing-club
Eric discovers a club where fathers gather to secretly watch live streaming of their daughter's one night stands. But to join he has to put his beloved Robyn in the pot and risk her being picked by the hired stud. Join Eric as he's torn apart by his porn addiction and desire to protect his daughter.

Read, rated, and commented. Thoroughly enjoyed it!

 

[Lumiere_Amie]

Hi! I'm a new author on here and would like to get feedback on my first story. It seems to be doing well so far, but any helpful feedback is appreciated.

Scared Sister Pt. 01: Astraphobia

Sent you some private feedback. Good story!

 

[AchtungNight]

I took a brief journey into Erotic Horror-

Inspired by my recent dealings with a malicious narcissist, plus one of my recurring nightmares-

https://literotica.com/s/courtney-crowe

Courtney isn’t a sex worker or a demon, just a troublemaker taking her greed a bit too far.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I may have mentioned this story which came out last week.

https://classic.literotica.com/s/college-hooking-memories-ch-01

The building were Nora turns her trick was the Cohen Library at City College, which was built in 1957 and in recent years was completely rebuilt as the School of Architecture. This is how it looked in the 1970's when the story takes place.

https://image.slidesharecdn.com/ccn...ngs-of-city-college-23-2048.jpg?cb=1667676962

Chapter 2 will be submitted next week.

 

[ShiftedReality7]

A few days ago (Oct 28) my first story "Emily's changes" went up in the sci-fi/fantasy area (https://literotica.com/s/emilys-changes). I thank everyone who took the time to read it and especially those that rated it. Only one comment so far, if anyone would be willing to provide additional feedback this would be helpful. I am working on a second installment.

Thank you.

 

[LIDiver]

A few days ago (Oct 28) my first story "Emily's changes" went up in the sci-fi/fantasy area (https://literotica.com/s/emilys-changes). I thank everyone who took the time to read it and especially those that rated it. Only one comment so far, if anyone would be willing to provide additional feedback this would be helpful. I am working on a second installment.

Thank you.

Welcome Shifty! Will have a look soon.

 

[AchtungNight]

I have an entry in the wasteland of Loving Wives called “Fire Woman”. Readers who want to see old crushes grown up and hooking up, jealous unsatisfied spouses, and happy swingers should check it out. Courtney Crowe’s comeuppance from my last story is also summarized, I would have detailed it more fully but I’m no good at detective stuff. There’s a hot MF hookup and MFF threesome in Fire Woman too, for readers who care about such things.

https://literotica.com/s/fire-woman

Hope readers enjoy!

 

[LIDiver]

Look forward to this one. Reminds me of the real life crush story I wrote about.

Did you request LW or did they put it there against your wishes?

 

[countdowntolov3]

Short, silly, first chapter about a bratty social media obsessed girl who unwittingly signs a friend and herself up for a non-con "sex" experience.

https://literotica.com/s/rude-food-pt-01

I'll do some warning tags in the way kids do these days. Am I cool yet?
#it's-all-smut #non-con-treated-way-too-lightly #who-writes-in-first-person-anyway #no-actual-sex #bad-french-accents

 

[StillStunned]

Ben's Big Mistake is up. NC/R written in the first-person present tense.

I included a warning that some readers might not like the surprise twist. Even so, I expect it to go down in flames.

 

[AG31]

Ben's Big Mistake is up. NC/R written in the first-person present tense.

I included a warning that some readers might not like the surprise twist. Even so, I expect it to go down in flames.

The fun was in the dramatic tension in the first half. You should edit out this warning.

 

[StillStunned]

The fun was in the dramatic tension in the first half. You should edit out this warning.

Maybe I will. The NC/R crowd seem remarkably tolerant of it so far - mostly good scores, except one 1 and one 2, by my count.

Thanks for the comment and the 5 stars, by the way! Much appreciated.

 

[Theylo_Bleu]

I'm still working out the kinks with the Series pending Moderation, but my BlueLetterBooks stories are coming out.

Series #1 My New Roomy (MNR) has a few chapters already out this past week, Chapter 7 comes out tomorrow as well as...
Series #2 Art of Sex (AOS) has it's first chapter coming out tomorrow as well.

They are connected series with more coming. Happy for the feedback

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=7503822&page=submissions

 

[Rob_Royale]

A quick little mashup of ideas that I had some fun with. A voyeur husband with a bi-wife and her stepmother.
Yes, Ma'am

 

[AchtungNight]

“Pool Hustle”

Another sanctioned cheating story about a married lesbian couple finding a stag for the night. His point of view. Enjoy, y’all!

https://literotica.com/s/pool-hustle

 

[StillStunned]

Too Hot Not to Fuck is up. It's a sequel to my previous I/T story Too Cold Not to Fuck (as well as being my entry in the Winter Holiday contest).

 

[alohadave]

My latest,

Santa Gets Gifts

Is live now. My entry for the Holiday comp.

Four friends give a mall Santa gifts of their own during the Holiday season.

 

[alohadave]

My Daughter's Friend

This is something that came to me quickly. Nearly all internal narrative and feeling. Much different than how I normally write.

 

[BBlaketbv]

Hot night, Cold Winter Storm

My submission for the Winter Holidays story contest 2023.
A 14k word story about 5 students living together. A snow storm hits and causes problems. They end up having an intense night together.

 

[AchtungNight]

I’ve written another fanfic, this one featuring Danica Patrick and my Casanova character Doug Ramsay in his first sexual relationship with a celebrity. Hope readers enjoy.

https://literotica.com/s/off-track-hookup

I’ll get back to other categories in the future, fanfic was just the latest inspiration.

 

[AG31]

This story was actually published a couple of years ago and then disappeared. It's complicated. But I never announced it here, so am glad for the chance. I'd really be interested in feedback because, even though it's quite short, it has a fair amount of character and plot, unlike my other stories. I'd like to know what you "gotta have plot, gotta have character" folks think.

Naked Note: Even though I'm soliciting feedback for different things, be aware that this is explicit BDSM.

 

[Stimtheone]

Part seven of the descent is out and here we see the work of the previous chapters come to a conclusion. I'm at the moment proofreading part 8 and already thinking up what to come next, as chapter 9 plans to be the actual epic conclusion of the series with an epilogue after that.

Already I'm thinking up what to write in my next series, that will come "right after" that one (okay, 500 years after but it might as well be a continuation) and showcase a whole new story.

 

[gunhilltrain]

The second part of Nora Meara's memoirs have been published.

https://classic.literotica.com/s/college-hooking-memories-ch-02

I've never described what her house in Queens looks like, but it's mostly a neighborhood of older, often wooden, houses. This one is typical of Maspeth.

https://ap.rdcpix.com/5fbead599ee84a9100782369f68dfe2dl-m1195838630od-w480_h360_x2.webp?w=640&q=75

 

[PrinDY88]

I have visited Literotica many times over the years as a casual user but never got into writing, however I have recently gone through an awakening of sorts thanks to a end of a cycle of bad men and abusive relationships. I have a long piece that is based on my experiences and hopes for the future.. the first part is written but because it is so personal (names changed obviously) I am apprehensive about how the first chapter will come across, most of it is not positive sexually or otherwise. I will attach it in the feedback thread,

My second piece The Resident Advisor is based on real life experiences and shots I wish I had taken when I had the chance... the first chapter is pending release but has been submitted. I hope once it is released that anyone would give me some feedback as I am currently working on the second chapter now.