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Hey Shanglan, disregard the e-mail feedback I sent you--I was so hot to give you a positive review that I sent it before I'd actually finished the story, which was why I thought you hadn't opted to permit public comment. As you'll see, I got to the end of the story, and submitted one. This was a story of unusually high quality. The dialect of the period sounded really authentic. Disregard that flaming first review. I don't know why people do stuff like that. Anyway, fantastic, outstanding story.
 
Thank you very much :) I wondered if that was your PM, as it seemed to follow your email's form closely ... but I sent thanks to both.

Shanglan
 
Sex Trek is up up and away

My latest quick witted dialogue is a fast read and will have you right back into whatever sexual position you were in prior to the reading. It doesn't get boggled down with things like "adjectives" (what are they?)...and you may lose focus on who's saying what (happens to us all), but if you don't mind some get sexual humor, you'll enjoy yourself fully.

Anyways it's a fun read and if it puts a smile on your face and makes you do something preverted it was worth the write.

Swallow your pride and maybe some other things and take it for a whirl.

P.S. I made "Bones" a lady doctor in case any of you have any ideas about the author

Sex Trek
http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...y.php?id=168364
 
Have two new stories accepted today if any one fancies a gander at them.

Both non human well sort of its hard to work out which is the best section to place them in. theyre sort of vampiric lesbian affairs, take a look and give me some feedback.


Please

HK

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=169501

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=169491

They both concern the same main character about which most my scribblings revolve one way or another! ENJOY I hope
 
Laura's Education

Greetings,

I've had my first story published; please let me know what you think of it, positive or negative, and where you'd like to see it go from here.

Thanks! The story, "Laura's Education", is a lesbian short story and can be found here.
 
Congrats on your first story Marius!

Just thought I'd post that I finally wrote/posted Chapter 2 of my NonConsent/Reluctance story - Willing Victim

If you would like to become a willing victim, or want one of your own, check it out ;) (please...)

Willing Victim - Ch. 2
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It helps if you read the first chapter, but it's not completely necessary.

THANX!!
 
My turn!

This is actually a repost of a story I had up before, but hopefully this one is better. For those of you who like those college fantasies of a student getting it on with the professor, you might like this.

However, you are warned that it's worth 2 Lit pages and hopefully has both plot and character development. :eek: At least, I tried.

Hopefully this works. Thanks for reading!

Click here
 
Re: gurly seeking feeback

dusty_gurly said:
Hi there,

This is the second story I have ever written. As i am relatively new to this writing business, your views on my story and constructive feedback would be appreciated.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=169991

Thanks,
dusty_gurly
Click to expand...

Wow! Great Story!

Anyone who likes erotica, masturbation, romance, or just a generally well written story should read yours! For a second story, it is extremely good! I can't wait to see your furture stories.
 
Looking for some constructive criticism please. I appreciate all the nice things everyone has sent me so far but i would really like to hear about any suggestions, complaints or ways to improve my story and or writing.
 
I have a new story posted. It's in the First Time category.

Goodbye, La La Land - Gary and Kathleen Discover 'Real Life' Together.

It's a hard story to advertise. It's 6 Lit. pages in length, so it's a bit longer than most. It's about two somewhat quirky high school seniors who come together through a series of events, both planned and unplanned. It's about awkwardness, perception, and misunderstandings. It's about anticipation, and uncertainty. It's my attempt to capture some of the magic of getting to know someone that you can't stop thinking about, and all the young emotions and self-conscious, conflicted feelings that go along with it.

It's filled with what I hope is sweet sexiness and awkward honesty.

If it sounds like this might be a story for you, please set aside a little time and give it a read. I've poured my soul into it, and I'd love to know what you think.

Thanks for listening.
 
Unusual Femdom Story

My latest offering: Vaughn's Journal.

A famous rock star is subdued and fucked senseless by his crazy fan.

This is my attempt to break away from what I normally do as a writer, and to put an uncomfortable twist on the femdom fantasy. If I got it right, you'll be creeped out AND turned on.

Varian
 
I wish to thank whom ever for bombing "Bittersweet Memories." Exactly one hour ago it was number 14 on the top list in Romance. It had less than 24 hours to accumulate another 6 votes, giving it a total of 50. My 47th vote, which just happened with no feedback whatsoever took this story from 4.88 to 4.64 and completely removed it from the first seven pages of that category.

'nuff said :rolleyes:
 
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