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Hey you guys! My new story is up: Nobody's Fool. It's a departure from my usual. It's a down and dirty hard-boiled crime story. I would love to hear some feedback. I wrote it as kind of a warm-up for a novel I about to start, so any feedback would be really appreciated.
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I've got a new one out there too. It is a bit of a highland fantasy with some challenge to it. I wanted it to be hot sexually but also to write with a certain style. It is my first step into SF/Fantasy, my favorite thing to read but something I have never tried writing before this story.

The Interrogation
 
My first story in nearly two years!
A humourous farce, adapted from a screenplay I've had sitting around in 2nd draft:

I Married My Sister

I'd love to hear what you think of it, whther it's a simple liked/didn't like it, to critical grammar/style feedback.

Oh, and if you laughed, what particar letter or punctuation symbol was the one that did it for you.

Cheers,

Joe.
 
Three new ones and a rewite as you can see from my signature. But what I would really like feedback on is my lesbian story (Kelly Does Madison) which is a few months old. I enjoyed writing it, but not sure I captured the female essence. Ladies, what do you think?

Kelly Does Madison
 
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Some days ago, I posted my first story, "A Special Promise" , in the Anal category. It's very short (about 1,800 words / 1 page), but so far I received some good feedback (4,49 points). If you want, tell me what you liked about it so I can work it into my next and longer story.
 
My Missing New Story

Well, my new story went up today...in a way...sorta...kinda...if you can find it, anyway. You see, it didn't turn up (at least so far) on the "New" pages, nor is it accessible alphabetically in the "Erotic Couplings" category. My own STORIES page has had it appearing and disappearing all morning. The one way it always seems to turn up is in a "Search." Still, you'd kind of have to know it was there to search for it so this in itself is not conducive to increased readership. I've emailed Laurel about the glitch but so far it continues. I know its called SECRETS...but I really never intended for it to be kept as one! It's a good story, a slightly different story. The female character is based on the same woman who has acted as my muse off and on since the beginning, inspiring such diverse pieces as SUMMER MAGIC and my most recent PUTTING PANTS ON PAULA. This is intended to be my ultimate fantasy of her. Feedback, please. Here's a direct link. Give it a try. Today, at least, you'll be among the few who know it exists!
SECRETS KEPT AS WISHES
Barnaby
 
It's fixed!

Well, the problem I spoke of is fixed but my story was well into the "NEW" section by the time it was. Here's another request to give it a try! Thanx!
Barnaby
Secrets Kept as Wishes
 
I just wrote a story called Call Centre Confessions' in the Erotic Stories secrtion

Comments will be gratefully accepted...
 
My newest story is up...it's in my sigline. I'll go read a few of the people above me. :)
 
Having never done this before I'm not sure how to post links but I'm going to try. My first two stories have posted!

Have edited post now, sorry for the confusion... I figured it out y'all! lmao
 
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