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[goro goro]

Re: Texas Two Step

Well, that was worth waiting. Fine story ! My favourite detail were the torn panties. It's the little things that make a good story great.

 

[Caroline Covington]

New story called, "The Mexican Stand-off"

A huband pesters his wife about her past, and she finally lets him have it.


http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=184906


Hope you enjoy.

 

[LuciousBi-Writes4U]

what do you think?

hi, how's everyone?
i would love for some of you to read my 3 new stories.... Not for a crituque.... but i'm really new here and i would like to get some people knowing my nake and my work.... so if your interested check it out!

 

[cookiejar]

Well, that was worth waiting. Fine story ! My favourite detail were the torn panties. It's the little things that make a good story great.

Thank you. I read your story, it was very good. I like the time he took with her, it seemed very believable.

 

[impressive]

I've a new story up in the "It's Just Sex!" chain. For those unfamiliar with the chain, it's about a fantasy fulfillment agency patterned after the "It's Just Lunch!" dating service. Each vignette stands alone as a snapshot of clients' arranged trysts.

Here's my chapter:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=186080

Hope you enjoy!

~ Imp

 

[trendyredhead]

My shameless plug....

College Coquette has debuted, and I've not received much in the way of feedback. Reads are high, votes are decent, but I'd like some real feedback - what you liked, what you didn't, if you'd like to see a sequel... That sort of thing.

Thanks much!

trendyredhead

 

[JRaven]

The Other Graduation Present

After many, many requests, I've finally put up a sequel to The Graduation Present. The new story, The Other Graduation Present is a bit long at five pages. (at least long for my writing)

Jenny

 

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[Hulder]

An enjoyable vacation started as a chat between a friend and myself, where we shared fantasies about some male online friends of ours. She later told me that i should take my fantasies and write them out as a story which i did. This is my first submission to the board, but will be followed by more soon.

The story is about a man and woman who have known each other online for a while, and who meet for the first time.

 

[Guest]

My latest, The Striped Shirt, went up a couple weeks ago. But it has very few reads so I thought I'd give it a plug over here.

It's actually a rewrite of a story I wrote a few years ago. Not one of my best but far from my worst.

Link is in my sig.

 

[herecomestherain]

Small, vignette style story -- Wander Lust

 

[angelicminx]

Don't have a new story (not back from editing yet) but I do have 4 new poems! Be honest y'all! They are in my siggie...

 

[herecomestherain]

Angelicminx I loved "MindFuck", well done!

 

[Bill Dada]

Hi, seems like this might good place to get some interest in my stories. I received a decent response to my first story, but the two I've submitted since have gotten very little response.

My latest story is The Vacation

I hope to hear what folks think and I see this is a good place to find out about new stories, so you will be hearing more from me.

Bill Dada

 

[Hulder]

My latest story , about a young pagan girl who participates in a sex rite, only to discover that hidden forces dwelling inside her comes to life during the ritual...

Enjoy

 

[Xploremyworld]

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I am Xploremyworld, and my latest story, 'Susi Learns to Submit,' was posted a couple of weeks ago (Interracial category). It's a story about a South African 'lady of privilege,' and the development of a relationship with a black American government employee, in Washington, D.C. It's a bit more than the usual 'wham, bam, thank you ma'am' story, in that it has character development, and tells a story of interaction between persons of two diametrical different cultures.
I enjoyed writing the story, and even now, I enjoy reading it. I hope you will read it, enjoy it, and provide some feedback. It has received a few 'hits' from persons with special agendas, meaning those who will sabotage any efforts to tell stories that they disagree with. I don't care about ratings, but I do hope for comments from fair and open-minded readers.


http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=185090

Enjoy!

Xploremyworld

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Dream Weaver ...<grin>

 

[hmmnmm]

Why not?
Fairly new at this and up til very recently had several stories out here, couple maybe okay, the others questionable, so I removed most everything and started over.
When people have offered constructive critique the common thread has been, Overwriting, Too Much Metaphor, Difficulty in understanding just what is happening. I'm sure there's a couple more I'm forgetting just now. Oh yeah, tendency towards purple prose.
In the last month or so I've tried to correct these tendencies and posted the results under Novel/Novellas, for no other reason than the series will likely consist of various ideas. It's more or less a sort of sex soap opera or something to that effect.

Look, I don't expect rave reviews. I'm sure there's grammatical flaws and some of that which I've tried to correct is certainly not so to the best degree it can be. I've already spotted a few places that I wince and 'ah crap'.
I also just realized that I should have left one of the earlier pieces so that the reader could have something to compare with the more recent - another oversight.
A warning: if anybody happens to check out Meanwhile Ch. 01, the beginning is admittedly somewhat tedious and... well... it will be something despicable or not. If votes are any way reliable, some really really did not care for it, yet others did. Oh well.
I'd just like to know if these efforts at least move in any encouraging direction at all. No hurry.
Thank you.

 

[Bob_Aganoush]

A new story for multiple categories

Well, I had a hard time figuring out where to put the first chapter of my new story, Weekend of Surprises. It could have gone in Group Sex, Novels and Novellas, or even First Time. But I decided that Loving Wives was the most relevant, but I'd be interested in hearing what others think. It's the story of a visit that a couple receives from another couple who they don't know that well. As with all of my stories, it's heavy on plot and character development, but there is plenty of sex there to satisfy most people.

Future installments will be coming. Please take a look, and don't forget to vote and send comments!

Thanks.

Bob

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=187495

 

[cookiejar]

Chapter 6 of Metamorphosis is up for anyone interested. The link is in my sigline.

 

[caligula215]

Here's the link to my second story:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=187813

As the description says, "Five girls, one vibrator." Enjoy.

 

[shadeeladee]

First Story

I just submitted my first story. Any feedback and pointers on what needs improvement is appreciated. I'm thick skinned so bring it on.

Kara Gets what she Wants

 

[Belegon]

A new character has been added and a big change is in store for the two main characters from our first chapter. Karen showing up really changes the dynamic between Andrew and Joanne. Even if you never read the first part, I think you will like this.

The New Neighbors: Ch. 2, A Dinner Invitation

by Biplaymate420 & Belegon.

This is the first story posted under Biplaymate420's profile and it would be great if there were some feedback to encourage her to post more of what she has already written as well as writing more. The story also features a small off-screen cameo by one of Lit's leading Lesbian Sex writers who also helped us edit. She approved of it by the way .

 

[sirhugs]

A Grain of Rice explores unexpected consequences, hidden lusts and other fun subjects, in a light manner.

 

[Bob_Aganoush]

Weekend of Surprises, Ch. 2

The next installment of my series "Weekend of Surprises" is now available. It involves primarily some D/s play between the two women in the couples.

Bob A.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=192240