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[lust4us]

First Story Posted

This is a real life story about my husband and I looking for a woman to play with. We end up with two of the kinkiest and most beautiful women on earth! We have the most amazing sexual experiences one could ever imagine, in one incredible weekend. If you like BDSM you will love this story. Even if your not into it, it will definitely make you cum, multiple times while reading it. Guaranteed!

 

[GratefulFred]

The Sexual Prisoner Story Continues

Breaking a man into confessing his deepest secrets has taken on a new identity as the second installment is up.

Chapter 1 - Arrival (The Adventure Starts Here)
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=243669

Chapter 2 - Escape to Wear?
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=244480

 

[hyulhyulhyul]

"We Have Your Daughter"

My new story "We Have Your Daughter" was just listed in Novels and Novellas yesterday. My purpose in writing it was to have a fun writing experience that will, hopefully, translate into a fun reading experience. I hope you will give it a look. Please read the author's caveat first.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=243384

 

[Falwith]

Well, my first story made it live, so now it's time to test the readers waters, so to speak. I encourage any comments on it, really, because by reading what readers think, authors have a better cahnce of finding their target.

Falls under "Romantic Couplings" and is the first bit of a 2 part tale. I'm currently working the 2nd piece, so everyone can see how the evening sorts for our "hero"?

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=244816

The Player Ch1.

 

[Lizzy_Beth_26]

Tossing my latest out there.

I just wanted to plug my third entry to Literotica. I am thinking that I am improving in my writing. What do you think?

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=241643

 

[ILCHANTILLY]

My new story submission

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=243615

This story allows us to see how self-exploration can lead to other things. This is the first of what might be many stories.

 

[Guest]

Yet Another Eager New Author

Plugging along with the rest of 'em. Comments are always welcome.

Unbroken Promises

 

[sirhugs]

my series, Nude Beach Bride, began one afternoon when I had two hours to spare and realized I hadn't submitted in a while. I planned to write a quick and dirty one scene 1000 word stroker on a shy bride opening up on her honeymoon. Four long chapters later, I'm still not done yet, but I get more "when's the next chapter?" feedback for this than any other series, so I keep going. Odd how writing goes sometimes.

Comments on the series, or ch 4 welcomed. I've tried to make each chapter self contained, but it has now reached the point where some knowledge of prior character revelations enhances the story, I think.

 

[hyulhyulhyul]

Re: feedback in whatever form

My new story "We Have Your Daughter" was just listed in Novels and Novellas yesterday. My purpose in writing it was to have a fun writing experience that will, hopefully, translate into a fun reading experience. I hope you will give it a look. Please read the author's caveat first.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=243384

One reader posted me a private email from which I have excerpted his comments about this story:

I'm in awe of anyone with the energy to write such a wonderful and long story-a masterpiece in the genre I think of as "compelled to do sex things, nobody is hurt, experience is actually liberating". My favorite.

Maybe if you read it, you'll like it too.

This is a part of my reply to him:

Thanks for reading "We have your Daughter" and taking the time to comment on it. For most writers of erotic literature, feedback is the only reward we receive for our work and the only measure of how well our work is received. I 'm glad that you enjoyed my story. I had so much fun writing it that I didn't want it to end.

 

[K-Kwik]

Hey. I've only just signed up here, and I'm pretty much in awe of the level of talent on display. Still, I've posted a couple of stories I wrote a while back, in the hope that you guys won't hate them and I'll get the confidence to write some more. Please give me any and all feedback you can. I need all the help I can get! :-/

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=246225

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=246228

Thanks for any feedback you can give, and even more thanks to all the other writers for setting an awesomely high standard, and for providing my with a few dirty thrills already!

 

[KewlBlueTiger]

New Story Posted

This is my latest fantasy, based on my fantasy seaside town of Mellowhale. I'm not sure where the inspiration came from for these characters, but it ended up a bit on the wierd side! It's getting alot of views but not many votes. Please let me know whatcha think, any support would be appreciated and reciprocated.

The Sewer Mermaid
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=246240

Thanks,
KewlBlueTiger

 

[janiexx]

Part 3 of "Love & Peace"

It took longer than I expected due to my laptop breaking down but I would appreciate any feedback on part 3. The ending took even me by surprise and I would love to know what readers think.

Thanks for all votes and feedback on the story so far.

janiexx

 

[sirhugs]

It took longer than I expected due to my laptop breaking down but I would appreciate any feedback on part 3. The ending took even me by surprise and I would love to know what readers think.

Thanks for all votes and feedback on the story so far.

janiexx

nicely written, good pace and intensity, but maybe a bit too intense for the Romance category?

 

[janiexx]

Hmmmm, you may be right...

Thank you for your feedback and it's much appreciated. As I said the ending took me by surprise and I did wonder whether I'd gone over the top a bit but I will rein it in when I write Chapter 4.

I wish I was one of those writers who know without a doubt how everything will work out in the end and stick to a plan without deviating madly.

Maybe one day I will develop the necessary discipline...

Thanks again
janiexx

 

[sirhugs]

Thank you for your feedback and it's much appreciated. As I said the ending took me by surprise and I did wonder whether I'd gone over the top a bit but I will rein it in when I write Chapter 4.

I wish I was one of those writers who know without a doubt how everything will work out in the end and stick to a plan without deviating madly.

Maybe one day I will develop the necessary discipline...

Thanks again
janiexx

I know the feeling. I start out with a general idea, but then the characters seem to become real, sand insist on doingit their way. *sigh*

 

[kbate]

Almost too embarrassed to do it, but this just posted.

Be kind. It is sweetsubsarah's fault.

 

[sirhugs]

Almost too embarrassed to do it, but this just posted.

Be kind. It is sweetsubsarah's fault.

not baaaaddddd.....

 

[kbate]

not baaaaddddd.....

Laughing. I had no choice. The pre-edit version was worse... I actually used "man-cooter".

 

[sirhugs]

Laughing. I had no choice. The pre-edit version was worse... I actually used "man-cooter".

never heard that term before...what does it mean?

 

[kbate]

never heard that term before...what does it mean?

I don't know. It was in the thread I stole my story idea from.

 

[sirhugs]

I don't know. It was in the thread I stole my story idea from.

stole????
stole????

don't you mean " got inspiration from"?????

 

[kbate]

stole????
stole????

don't you mean " got inspiration from"?????

It is in this forum.... we were discussing "bad cliche" and "ample breasts".. so I started writing.....

Stole is a harsh word, inspired though - is overstated for this story.

 

[Nigela Lamont]

New story

I'm afraid I don't get it! I have recently posted a new story called Hard Night at the Cosy Rest Motel 2 that to me was quite erotic and yet it seems it was about the only one that has not received a hot rating. How does that work? Am I missing something or is my writing really that bad?

Nigela

 

[Darkniciad]

I'm afraid I don't get it! I have recently posted a new story called Hard Night at the Cosy Rest Motel 2 that to me was quite erotic and yet it seems it was about the only one that has not received a hot rating. How does that work? Am I missing something or is my writing really that bad?

Nigela

Just in case you don't know the criteria that qualifies a story for an H, I'll relate that first. A story that has 10 or more votes and has a rating of 4.5 or better will get an H (once the server sweeps catch up and enter it into the database anyhow. Votes update immediately, but things like the top lists and H's happen on a regular schedule, sweeping the database for qualifications)

It may just not have found it's readership yet. Many authors have followings of readers who are on the constant lookout for new submissions, bringing vote totals up quickly. That may be what you see in the stories that are getting H's while you feel yours is not getting the attention you expect.

 

[dirtymindny]

My new story...characters needed!

Look for the name...

Sometimes you have to hit bottom... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

...before things start to look up !!!

Main character: Charles Ducan,Male,37 Handsome, athletic with neat dark brown hair with little graying and blue eyes. 6'2" tall, strong build with a slight belly. Well endowed and sexually submissive.


Wife recently left him, and just lost his job as a manager of a shipping company. Wife took the house and most the savings so he has to move back in with his mother.

{This can go any number of ways. He will/can look for another job and place to live. He can go back to school, He can do odd jobs for his mothers friends, or all of the above. Characters can come and go as they please.}