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[CeasarBoobage]

Hey everyone, thanks for looking!

I just got my newest story submitted, and would love for you to tell me what you think of it.

This is titled "A Surprise Encounter" and is about what can happen with a simple (but sexy) mistake at a party. Especially when there is alcohol involved.

It's been an actual fantasy of mine, and this story is just one way it could possibly turn out... Hmmm....


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=448505

Thank You!

 

[Liliannasidhe]

Just read a story I liked, thought I would post it here. Its the Author's first work, I think, and for some reason the entire first page is underlined. Its about a half succubus and a vampire, and is Chapter one, though no others appear up yet. Its a fantasy story with S&M undertones, but I enjoyed it.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=448742

 

[Themoodyone]

Hot enough?

I have posted a link to the first few chapters of my latest work, SEND. Feedback and criticism sought to help me refine it. I would very much love for you to take a read and tell me what you think. Synopsis below. Hope you enjoy!


Predictable Tina has always been who she was expected to be and done what she is expected to do, until a slip of the finger reveals the irresistible allure of inappropriate behavior. Lines are blurred and boundaries are broken as she struggles to find love without losing herself.

 

[caprine]

New Sory Post & Holiday Contest Entry

Thirty-five year old widower leaves Chicago, headed for North Fort Myers and his parents for the Christmas holiday. He leaves in a snowstorm that fast becomes a blizzard. Our hero rescues a ditched, stranded motorist and... Well, you’ll just have to read the story to see what happened.

This is a Holiday Contest 2009 entry, so I'd very much appreciate your vote.

Again, thanks to all my fans who take the time to read, my works. Feedback is especially requested and double thanks to those who provide such.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=449421

 

[MarcusStrapp]

Well here is my first offering

Called "Dear Chloé, An Apology" I had trouble choosing the correct category, it's BDSM, it's kinky, it's got anal, it's got squirting, it's even got romance. But most of all, I hope it makes you giggle (and of course jealous ;-) ), so I have filed it under "Humour and Satire"

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=446947

It's a short smutty tale partly in verse and I hope it brightens your day.

Regards -- MarcusStrapp

 

[aussie_101]

Wow, hasn't this thread grown long?

I have a new series going up, at this point in time only chapter 1 is approved but they usually post my series one-per-day, so keep on checking back if you like it.

It's called "Unwilling but Able", which I'm sure is a totally original and never-been-used title but it gives an idea of the content. To whit: a young law intern has been using company IT equipment for, ahem, "less than savoury" purposes... and when his lady-boss catches him deep (and long and hard) in the act, her response is rather less than kind.

You'll find the link in my sig below. All feedback is welcome, thanks, pls do enjoy

 

[Tattered_warrior]

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[therealultimatedarkone]

Four stories...yes...four! I wrote the beginnings to another story that'll be coming along sometime later, but I had to actually fill in the blanks leading to the other stories, so here's what I've saved up for the month. I think I'm only going to do two more of the "first time" Mari and Henry stories before I get back to after the time of the first story. Then I'll try raunchier and raunchier things.

My entry for the Holiday Contest is one of new stories. My first contest entry on this site ever!

Coco and Ben at Xmas - Romance!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=450308

Mari and Henry 4 - Graduation!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=450327

Mari and Henry 5 - Buttsecks!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=450330

Mari and Henry 6 - Repairs!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=450336

Have fun everyone!

 

[empty_coffee_cup]

Wow! First time on the forum for me, and may I say that everyone here seems totally insane in the best possible way.

I've got five stories up so far, and of course I recommend them all whole-heartedly, but my most recent was the continuation of a lesbian romance I've been writing as "The Bethanie and Maddy Series"

The new one: The Bet http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=450147

Part one of that story: The Lipstick Test http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=439850

Part two: The Coffee Shop Girl http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=445476

Check out my profile for a cheesy sci-fi story and a BDSM piece that I'll be following up on too: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1131881&page=submissions

I've only been a member for a couple of months, looking forward to contributing a lot more.

 

[theforgottenart]

the art of longing

please check out my first ever attempt at writing. its not perfect and would love feedback on how to continue and make it better.

 

[heaven-whh]

Where is it?

please check out my first ever attempt at writing. its not perfect and would love feedback on how to continue and make it better.

If you would put a link in your message it would be easier to find!

 

[christiankay]

My first story.

Adam Martin - The pupil, is the story for a eighteen year old, who starts a new life away from home, at a school for musicians. Along the way, he has many sexual adventures and becomes a sensation with the crowds, as his new found passion for life and sex flows into his music. Here is the first chapter.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=448425&page=1

 

[JBaggs]

New story from a new writer

Hey, first attempt at a story, I think it's alright but I'm hardly the best judge of my own work, would love some feedback and inspiration to write more.

For those who do wish to read it, it's a story of a guy who meets a stunning young woman and with his skills as a photographer convinces her to model for him, this leads to some fun for the couple.

Look forward to some feedback,

Cheers!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=451479

 

[primetime73]

This is a whole series I have been working on for awhile. The characters sort of split their story lines for now but come back together in the end after their paths evolve.

I have received high scores but not a whole lot of comments given the number of page views or votes so I thought I would advertise it a bit. I posted the link to chapter 1 below and just recently put up chapter 6 which is the longest chapter to date.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=335582

The categories are all over the place but I am never quite sure where to put them, exhibishionist, group, erotic, etc. Anyway hope people enjoy.

 

[sethp]

Christmas with the Cleaning Lady! Mature catagory! You'll love it!

 

[Mrtouf]

New story, new writer

So I've been working on this story on and off for a while. It's not finished yet, but I'm at that point where a bit of feedback would be handy.

The story follows Caroline and Isamura, who fly to an island to trade for some supplies. Their routine mission doesn't go as planned though, and in their travels they each meet new people whom they are attracted to.

There are a few places where it isn't clear that the scene has changed. The original has extra line breaks and I could use a pointer or two about how I should do those in my submission.

It needs more description in places. Don't worry, when I get to the end, I'm going to go back and add some where it's needed.

Although I usually work from an outline, this time I have an idea and I'm just seeing where it goes. So for that reason, tell me if there's something in particular that you liked, or I might not know to keep it in the story when I revise it.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=452173

 

[jeleane]

My 6th Story

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=452947

 

[jeleane]

My 6th Story

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=452947



Comments and votes are appreciated

 

[TalyisBagley]

My 3rd short story

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=452836&page=1

 

[Evolution20XX]

Personally, I would like anyone to read and give me feedback on any of the work I already have published. I've fallen on some hard times emotionally and just need a boost to get back to writing again.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=815916&page=submissions

 

[SeriLove]

Looking for Feedback

Hey all, my first story just got posted:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=453255

I would love feedback on the story...what's working, what's not, etc. I would like to think it's not a bad read about Sam and Seri's first meeting after an online relationship, but am sure there is plenty of room for improvement...or even suggestions for other encounters between the two of them!

Thanks to all!
Seri

 

[jsams]

hello
Let Vanessa feel the warmth of the Nile on her feet as the power of the spell overcomes her. Let her dress become wet from the river and from the gush between her legs. Let the description be slightly chaotic and not alltogether definite (a' la Gabriel Garcia Marquez). The reader will become as lost in the elements as she is. It would be an astonishing effect.

 

[Existencialisticism]

Hi peeps - just found this thread and I'd to advertise my first erotica story and hopefully recieve some feedback on it, good or bad.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=454884

Here is also the link to another thread I started in the 'story feedback' section: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=687005

Thanks.

 

[infiniteocean]

Spotlights, my first story ever

Hi All,

I'd love some feedback for my first ever story, Spotlights. It's in 8 chapters and now all are approved. It is in the BDSM category.

This link is to chapters 01 and 02 together.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=452711

I have had one public comment, pointing out a logical flaw in chapter 08, which is quite true but I had trouble ending the story. Anyone with an idea for a better ending, please let me know.

Also, I was trying to be funny.

Thanks to anyone who reads and comments on my story.

InfiniteOcean.

 

[Dixiedevil67]

My First Erotic Thriller

Hello everyone,

I hope you will check out my fifth story to this site, A Dangerous Obsession. It is in the Exhibitionist category, but I feel it's more of a thriller type story. While my other tales have been based partially on true experiences, this one is my first true fiction. I hope you enjoy it and will give me whatever feedback you feel it deserves. I would also welcome ideas as to what direction to take the story next.

Thank You
Dixiedevil67
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=455650