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Hello,

I'm pretty proud of the tale I've posted, and it is kind of the culmination of several previous attempts. Meaning, if you take all of my previous efforts and boil them down, this tale is the result.

The name of the tale is "The Road Home", and it is a romantic tale. here is the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=429815

I am interested in feedback as regards the characterizations, and story elements. I've gotten good, positive feedback, so I know people like it, but nobody has responded to my requests for input in these areas.

It took me a while to figure out that writing for an "Erotica" site didn't mean the other aspects need suffer, only that the sexual nature of the characters didn't need to be euphemism or metaphor.

Thanks in advance,

LitRiter
 
Kelly's Liberation Ch 06

Hi all,

After a long hiatus, Chapter 6 of my current serial "Kelly's Liberation" is finally up. I was struggling with its direction, but with a little help from my friends :) :heart: it's on its way to a conclusion. Chapter 7 -- the conclusion -- hopefully will follow.

If you've not seen any of this series: it's a follow-on to my earlier series "Libby's Lib" but it stands well on its own. Kelly is a regular housewife-type, and by chance she stumbles upon her husband's secret dealings on Literotica -- including his assistance in helping her best friend Libby become a star on Literotica's amateur photography boards, which at first concerns her... then intrigues her...

It's a great read for all who enjoy lit's ampics, and somewhat instructional for any who have toyed with the idea of taking saucy self-portraits themselves. Hope u enjoy :)
 
Another dip into the seas of taboo...

Hi all,

I've been quite amazed at the volume of downloads, votes, comments and feedback emails I received after I posted a mother-son story here, and I was equally shocked at the enthusiasm there was for this particular topic.

I had so many requests for more that I simply couldn't resist another little foray into this subject area, and I would be extremely grateful for some feedback for 'Full of Surprises'.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=430808

I hope you enjoy it!


Georgie
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Hi GeorgieH,

The story was very nice. I'm not certain if some of the things I ran into were errors, or just regional differences of language, but it was well written in either case. The humor went a long way toward defining their relationship. Well done.

I'm not much of a reader of the incest literature, not my cup of tea, but I can appreciate what you've done with this.

When I was younger, I would have blanched at making a woman in an erotic tale older than 35, but as I get older, it seems slightly ludicrous that Laura would still be so very young. Unless it is a story element, and it could well be in this case, I'd say don't be afraid to up the age of the woman. I've had a great time learning that 45 is the new 30.

Thanks,

LitRiter
 
I just put up my first story in.. forever. The first thing I've written in over two years.

Celeb category, but you don't have to know the movie to enjoy it. Heavy on the rough sex, het pairing, dark imagery and a dash of thwarted romance in the mix.

I'd love to hear what people think- please, feel free to read and publicly or privately shred it.

Link in my sig line, and the next part goes up tomorrow.
 
Recently I posted the first MatchMaker Bandits novel (The Great Hippocrates Robberies) in five separate parts. This is a re-edit of the original storyline. The plot hasn't changed so if you've already read the original story there's nothing new for you.

Should you decide to read any of my other works, please keep in mind that I have had problems keeping an editor and many of them were badly edited by me. Expect to find some errors that MS Word's spelling and grammar checker missed.

Also, most of my work has a plot-to-sex ratio of about 80/20 and, while I've been told the erotica in them is good, I wouldn't call them jerk stories (unless you skip to the juicy parts that is).

Anyway, please check them out and leave me some feedback.

Thanks,
Maximillian Excaliber
 
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All three sections of the current 21st Century Cure series are now live. Repo! fanfiction, and an end to my Literotica hiatus please, read and shred- I'm a sucker for feedback.

Anything you'd like to see in future installments, please, let me know- I love requests.

All links (and a brief description of the content) are in my sig line.
 
Alright, I took the plunge and posted my very first story here on Literotica. I've received one favorable comment back, and I was wondering what other folks thought of the story.

It's a fictional account of my wife "Melissa", and her adventures while teasing me in a grocery store. This leads to her continuing her tease in the car while exposing herself to a truck driver. It winds up with a happy ending for all involved.

Let me know what you think.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=434416

Thank you.

luvmymilf
 
Taking Cara's Business

I've tried to write about something that I actually don't understand. I know that's kind of a violation of the cardinal rule, "write about what you know," but I wanted to see if I could imagine what it would be like if I did understand... or what it might be like to explore something I don't yet understand.

Anyway, I would appreciate any feedback on writing style as well as on the content. What I really want to know is, have I written something that is completely ridonkulous? Is this the kind of thing that just makes people roll their eyes?

Taking Cara's Business

Thanks!
 
Thanks for post. It’s really imformative stuff.
I really like to read.Hope to learn a lot and have a nice experience here! my best regards guys!
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I'm thinking sami doesn't get a lot of positive feedback on his "erotic" stories?
 
New Modern Vampire Story Please take a look love feedback

Hi
My second crack at a series is Of Thorns and Pearls and chapter 1 just posted on Lit.


A sickly artist in New York City, Tabor Salome meets a handsome mysterious man at community college. Shy pushes all her buttons and challenges her like he could read her entire life by just looking at her. Little does she know, he holds the keys to her illness, has come between her thighs in the middle of night in the guise of a wonderful dream and is a vampire. Will he save her or use her?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=436709&page=1

I would love feedback.

Cheers,
Talyis
 
New Modern Vampire Story. Please take a look love feedback

Hello

My second crack at writing as series just posted. Of Thorns and Pearls

A sickly artist in New York City, Tabor Salome meets a handsome mysterious man at community college. Shy pushes all her buttons and challenges her like he could read her entire life by just looking at her. Little does she know, he holds the keys to her illness, has come between her thighs in the middle of night in the guise of a wonderful dream and is a vampire. Will he save her or use her?


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=436709&page=1

I would love feedback.

Cheers,
Talyis
 
Keeping on the Team Chapter 2

So, after just a little more than a 2 1/2 year delay, I'm proud to announce my latest story, and my first sequel, Keeping on the Team, Chapter 2, which can be found here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=437400

Just as an aside, yes, it is a non-consent story. Chapter 1 and my other stories can be found at http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=987911&page=submissions OR also more conveniently at *******.com/LOAnnie2

Hope you enjoy!
 
Hey everyone, got a couple of new ones out and one on the way. I have The Bonding of LanceGT and LittleMissJen in the BDSM category, the final chapter of Michelle's Education -Graduation in Lesbian and Payback's a Bitch coming out in Loving Wives. I thought I'd try a different approach with the latter as The Usual didn't fair as well. Seems happy endings in LW are furbotten. Thought it was a good effort. Try it and tell me if you thought it was any good:cool:
 
My first story "Awakening"

Hello everyone,

This is me, Auden James, an unknown writer at this place but I hope that somebody will read these lines and afterwards some of my writing, too, since I've just submitted my first story to Lit.

It's titled: "Awakening" [Erotic Couplings]

Here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=438770

The narrative focuses on two students, male and female, from Berlin (Germany) that awake in a summer morning after their first night together that was not quite what you think a first night would have been like in that case. They struggle about their inner feelings and emotions, explore sensuality and take steps into a direction that will change everything for both of them. . .

I'd be really grateful if somebody read my story and also gave some feedback about it because I put real effort into writing it. I hope to hear from you soon.

Greets
Auden James
 
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My first story!

So this is my first posting on the boards and fittingly its about my first story here on lit. Its called the Mage and the Weaver and is actually an excerpt from a fantasy novel I'm hoping to finish and get published.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=439450&page=1
I would love any and all feedback!
I also wanted to put a plug in for my very favorite author's latest audio story its from SomeAussieGuy and is called "The Train" If you haven't heard this guy (and even if you have) hurry on over, most of his other stories are sweet and romantic as well as sexy but this new one is a bit of a departure and I'm telling you it is volcanic hot!
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=439647
Thanks!
Deb
 
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