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[nerk]

songs about fucking

hoping for feedback on the new story.

story at: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=487772

thread at: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=722680

or feel free to PM or whatever.

 

[al_Ussa]

And my newest story - Celebrity Fame Whores - is up. It was inspired by the idea of Kate Gosselin and Nadya Suleman (aka the Octomom) getting into a catfight and just kind of developed from that into an 8 man orgy. Drifts a little into my pregnant fetish towards the end. If you like (or hate) either of these dubious celebrity MILFs then you should really read this story. Comments more than welcome.

 

[michchick98]

Okay, what the heck. I haven't been around (posting stories) in awhile and I seem to have lost a few readers. So I'm tossing out my latest for advertisment here.

It's a sequel to a couple of older stories that were posted here awhile back, but the story can be read as a standalone.

Jane's Addiction:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=486589

That's the link for the first chapter, there are 13 in all, and all posted already.

Thanks!

 

[sethp]

Okay, what the heck. I haven't been around (posting stories) in awhile and I seem to have lost a few readers. So I'm tossing out my latest for advertisment here.

It's a sequel to a couple of older stories that were posted here awhile back, but the story can be read as a standalone.

Jane's Addiction:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=486589

That's the link for the first chapter, there are 13 in all, and all posted already.

Thanks!

I can honestly say that you are one of the best writers on lit..read these now everyone else!

 

[Aussiescribe38]

more story

Hi Guys, new here. I posted my first story a couple of weeks ago, chapters 1 & 2, and I've just posted 3 & 4.
"Christina's Story", is about a young babe at Uni wrestling with her studies and her sex life. She is single minded about getting her degree, but suddenly her sexuality is unleashed, and she now has trouble keeping on track with her studies. She has found she needs to fuck, a lot, and does.
Thanks to those who read the first two chapters and voted, much appreciated.

 

[Salandra]

Hi..

Hi,
I'm new on here and I just submitted my first story. I would love to get as much feed back as I can whether good or bad, all is helpful. So if you have the time to stop and read my story I would greatly appreciate it.
Thank you so much.
Salandra​

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=490480​

 

[JeffLeigh]

I guess I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism on my first ever erotic fiction: Blackmail Confessional Ch 1
It's about a woman who is blackmailed by a dominating priest and features some twisted religious views that I don't think actually exist but have been haunting me ever since one of my characters in a non-erotic book decided to go all 'religious justice' on me. It's the start to a short series, broken up only because I didn't exactly know where I was taking it at the time I posted but I knew I'd like critiques before I finished Ch. 2.
Thanks!

 

[ellynei]

Moth

'Moth' is a largely non-erotic story. Yes, literotica has that category too

Lei, a young moth, is more interested in bowmaking than in discovering the mysteries of life. But life has more in store for her than bows. In another forest, Altwar, awaits great love, and great danger.

Lei is not the only one who stands before a different road.


('Moth' has been completed, one chapter is being submitted to literotica pr. day.)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=490518

 

[Submissive_Salena]

Hello all... looking for feedback on my story. BDSM so be forewarned.

Hello all! I would like to hear feed back on this story. This is my second story I have written, for some reason LIT did not put my first story on. I will give it a few weeks and put that one up as well. Looking for some constructive criticism if you don't mind...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=490148

 

[meathead96]

A Mature Tail: Mature Enough?

My story went up today and it is my first "anal" category story. I would appreciate some feedback on the story from "anal" readers LOL. Thank you for your time.

The story is about a couple who enjoyed anal sex in their early marriage, but because of her health complications, they were not able to anymore, until she had surgery to correct the problem, then she surprises hubby when he returns from being away on a fishing trip.

 

[EctoJohn]

I managed to write a 5th story!

A Slice of Heaven

 

[CuriosityCanKill]

I don't usually advertise my stories, but I'm especially proud of my newest one. Please read and let me know what you think of it.

Three Months in One Day in Loving Wives:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=492639

 

[FP37]

Comments Please - FP37 - The Foundation - BDSM

I would welcome comments on my series of postings entitled The Foundation. It is pretty raw BDSM and non - consent, so please steer clear if you are easily offended. I have had decent scores from viewers, above 4 for most postings, but very few comments.

The first episode is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=486105

PF

 

[mrsquelchy]

New story

If anyone's into M/F wet and messy sex, peeing in particular, then I'd love to hear your feedback on my latest story. If you're not, perhaps you could be persuaded after reading this? If not, then simply don't vote afterwards
Happy reading, if it's your sort of thing and any comments or PMs are always welcome!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=493681

 

[AmaiShokora]

First Story ^_^

Hi, new member here to LIT, just posted a story here if you're interested in the 'were' variety. Only have 2 chapters up that I have posted recently. Would like to have some feedback on it to help improve my writing style if need be

Also this story is based in the same world and same time line as another story that's posted here called "Howling Roar" by DarkWolfKnight7 and I have permission to use it . Thank you and enjoy!

Chapter 1: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=491899

Chapter 2: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=493379

 

[mokkelke]

First part

I'd like to add my two cents. This is the first part about three single brothers.
Just a warning, this particular alpha isn't the super overbearing dominant one as most would want too see them.
it's more a romance novel with werewolves. at the moment working on the story about the youngest brother.
Saint Ives - Whelan Chronicles Chapter 1 9 chapters in total.
would love the feedback and comments ;-)

 

[Michael_R_Crane]

The Changing

I would like some constructive feedback on my first story. It's a gender change Male --> Female. I am thinking of doing a sequel. This story is not erotic, but is very sexual, a "Sci-Fi/Fantasy" in nature... Written in first person telling about the experience of focused thought powerful enough to change the body. You can find it here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=493094

 

[Toqueme]

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[chenqin]

dr.M.

Aghhh! CW, somthing went terribly wrong! The story lurches into italics after a few paragraphs and remains in italics for the remainder, as far as I can tell.

I can't read italics for any length of time. My italics "reading voice" is a kind of exciting whisper; I just can't help it, it makes me read in a hurried undertone.

Did you intend for this to happen? Maybe you could fix it and resubmit?

---dr.M.
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nike air ninja
foot loocker ninja

 

[densegit]

Get Thee to a Nunnery

Just beginning.
Attempt at surrealism in a story.
Thoughts of Fellini's City of Women
Erotic Dreams,
Lost in time.
http://www.thebondageyellowpages.com/fiction/gullibles-travels-ch01-get-thee-to-a-nunnery.html

 

[sleeplessgurl]

New literotica writer seeking feedback

Hi all, I've been visiting literotica for many years, but only just recently got up the nerve to post my own stories. I've posted two. I'm enjoying the feedback I've been receiving on them.

"Story Time" is about a shy erotica writer, who is surprised when the object of her desire (and her stories) knocks oh her door.
Here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=484442

In chapter 2 of "Story Time", she let's him read a story and he responds quite favourably. ;-)
Here's the link for that one:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=495680

I'm working on more chapters of Story Time, and I have another new story that should be submitted soon.

Thank you in advance for taking the time to read my stories.

Hope you enjoy them.

 

[Guest]

Great Idea, can you help a newby

goodbye

 

[wet_special]

Perverted Sci-Fi

Thought I'd toot my own cliche, my stories are listed on the link here, they've been received well so far I reckon.. I had some trouble with the last one and went back.. revamped it, so if you read Gift from Outer Space Ch.03 before and it sucked, it's been fixed.

 

[Dual_Triode]

Salvation Achieved

The final installments of Salvation in the Sargasso Sea, a four part romantic series, is now up for your review.

Salvation in the Sargasso Sea Ch. 03 - A flaming three-way leaves Jon no leeway.

Salvation in the Sargasso Sea Ch. 04 - Attempted murder, erotic dessert, and a happy ending.

These chapters were written together during a recent month-long trip to China.
If you like your romance with a happy ending, this may be your cup of tea.

~Dual_Triode

 

[ZeroGravitas]

New Member First Story

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=497438

This my first attempt at Erotica AND first attempt at Romance.

All constructive feedback appreciated.

Zero Gravitas