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Thanks for all the views, my first story topped 20,000 hits the other day. It has been out for
a little over a month.

I'd like to pimp my wares one more time. I have just come out with Chapter 4 of my series,
"Gift from Outer Space" which is a continuation of my first story. My stories are short and
sweet, with a balance of story and sex! So I just want to thank everyone for checking it out
and to those that sent feedback.

I expect Chapter 5 of "Gift" to be the final chapter in the series. I want to make it a great read
so if you read my stories, be sure to include any and all feedback, especially criticisms.
Thanks!

Also, if you liked this drawing check out my others in my sketches thread!
 

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Ooh - Ok so I'm new and this is my first story accepted (two others awaiting approval and wayyyyyy more in my filthy little mind *grin* )...

All constructive critiscism gratefully received!
 
Angels, Demons and Alex

"Angels, Demons and Alex" Chapter 10 is now up: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=499449

I've been absolutely thrilled and flattered by the votes, comments and feedback I've received. However, my thirst for more readers and more feedback seems to be about as great as my thirst for smut.


This story is much more one of good humor & adventure (and, as I mentioned, smut) than horror despite all the supernatural elements. It's the first erotica I've written & actually shared with others apart from some naughty letters I've written to girlfriends in the past.


For those of you willing to give my silliness a shot, the first chapter (smut-free, as it happens) is here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=494612

Thank you for reading. I've written for smaller audiences made up of people I already know before, but my experience on Literotica has been a blast & I have no intention of stopping.
 
I have really enjoyed this series so far. It's creative, well written and a pleasure to read. Thank you for all the effort that has gone into producing them, and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.
 
bashfullyshameless said:
"Angels, Demons and Alex" Chapter 10 is now up: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=499449

I've been absolutely thrilled and flattered by the votes, comments and feedback I've received. However, my thirst for more readers and more feedback seems to be about as great as my thirst for smut.


This story is much more one of good humor & adventure (and, as I mentioned, smut) than horror despite all the supernatural elements. It's the first erotica I've written & actually shared with others apart from some naughty letters I've written to girlfriends in the past.


For those of you willing to give my silliness a shot, the first chapter (smut-free, as it happens) is here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=494612

Thank you for reading. I've written for smaller audiences made up of people I already know before, but my experience on Literotica has been a blast & I have no intention of stopping.
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Bashful is being humble here, folks. Angels, Demons, and Alex is a really fun read. Check it out. The rat bastard will probably be knocking me off my top list spot soon. Ah well, 'twas good while it lasted.

Keep going bashful!
 
Allonsy's work

These are a series of related stories (though not as tightly connected as a series) about Tony, Zenika and Amelie. Zenika and Tony are a well-off confident African-American married couple who invite Amelie -- a young woman in her second year of college -- to their bed. It's affectionate D/s (with the occasional hint of painplay) between the three of them and I hope to write more over time.

A Bath and Bed: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=499157

First Day of Spring http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=499272

Midsummer Madness http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=499681
 
Shadow School

This is my first attempt at literotic fiction after years of reading and I hope you guys enjoy it. It follows three girls as they attend a secret college that has something going on behind the scenes. There are many chapters to come, and though some will qualify for multiple categories, the whole series would probably go under Erotic Horror or NonHuman.

First three chapters of Shadow School:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1234618&page=submissions

PS I'm currently looking for an editor for these and everything to come
 
Maiden Flight of the Green Fairy

I posted my second submission - "The Green Fairy Adventure" - and I'd appreciate a read and some feedback.

It's in the Exhib/Voyeur section, but it could have been categorized in Loving Wives as well. But since the desire to show his wife off is the protagonist's main motivation, I thought I'd put it in Exh/Voy. It's also a submission to the Halloween contest.

Synopsis: First-person narrator, a guy who's dying to show off how sexy his wife is, but she always stops him just short of allowing him to do so. Halloween comes around, and he's able to engineer a situation in which his wife loses her inhibitions and she is finger-fucked by the host, then blows him in the middle of a party. Then she continues her startling behavior on the way home with her husband.

And yes, I saw that I have a typo only a few paragrapghs in. Forgive me - it was rather early in the morning when I posted it, and I could have sworn it was all set.

You can find it here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=500370

Cheers!
 
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After a good deal of thought about publishing my stories outside of my own private realm I've taken a chance and had my first story pubished on Literotica. Being very new to writing and publishing erotica I'd appreciate any comments you may care to make: Our Little Secret.
 
First story up...and it's a very simple and straightforward telling. Um.

Voici: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=501098

Embarrassingly, despite reading it over carefully before submission...I missed the tense-change, and there is one factual error which annoys me. But...

It's a start, yes? I have more stories and whatnot tucked away in my brain. Knowing if anyone wants to read them would be helpful :)
 
Well i've been around awhile...but I do have a new story....In the contest...go check it out The Day After
 
New story

I posted a new story today called Island Encounter.

John, on a tropical vacation after a tough stretch at work, meets Sofia, who can provide him some...direction.

It's under Erotic Couplings and has some dom/sub themes, although very light. More about two people agreeing to have some fun and fill certain roles. Enjoy!
 
Darkroom Series

I've never written erotica before (except for a single page fantasy I wrote when I was 18 and then I burned it because I was so afraid my mother would find it...)

I hope you'll enjoy the week of Darkroom stories that starts here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=502742

Five girls decide to appreciate five nice guys anonymously on successive days of the week. The encounters happen in a darkroom in the basement of the house the guys rent with the lights turned out. Even though the girls cannot be seen, they find creative ways to make their "appreciation" unique and personal.

Five of the six stories are posted and I am at work on the final piece now. They are classified roughly as Exhibitionist and Voyeur stories, but they don't share many of the staple elements of the genre. They revolve around themes of banter, creativity, expectation, frustration, and discovery.
 
Little add for first story: One Long Dream

Hi
It's a time for firsts - my first story "One Long Dream" and my first posts to Literotica Forums
Having finally got up the nerve to stop lurking and submit a story, I have been very pleasantly surprised by the great feedback I have received.
This first story is a test case. If the feedback is constructive and positive then I will certainly post the other novel length story I have in the works.
So thanks to all those who have left comments and feedback. I really do appreciate it.
If you haven't checked out my story please take a look.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=504847


The story itself arose from the simple thought: what would happen if my ex did want to come back into my life. My imagination then ran wild in what really was one long dream
Thanks to all those who have taken the time to contribute in some way and once again thanks to all those who have given me their positive feedback
 
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Angels, Demons and Alex 14

Chapter 14 is up! http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=505357

I would love any and all feedback. A couple things I'm thinking about, though:

*Is the Old West sequence in the beginning a little too brutal? Is the bit set in the end too cliche? (I mean, it's plainly a LITTLE cliche, obviously...)

*Do I need to be more explicit about how magic works? Politics among angels, demons, sorcerers, etc?
 
My first story was just approved. Thought I'd throw a link in here.

The Times That Lie In Between Ch. 1:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=505449

I tried to write a story with some strong characters and a relatively decent plot. An excerpt of one of the juicy bits:

Tess tried to scream. She tried to beg. But she just groaned and thrust her hips desperately against his hand.

"I'm going to watch the animal you become when I fuck you." With that he threw Tess down on the bed, face down.
 
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