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I have two stories here that I would appreciate comments on. Both were written for friends based on their specifications.

The first is a story of a masquerade ball and a romantic tryst for two following, set in old England (not strictly period, so if you are expecting exact historical detail, don't bother), entitled "Masquerade" which can be found at:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=501988

The second is a story of a catholic school girl, who goes to a friend's house on an errand and gets more than she bargained for from the man of the house and his friends and can be found here:

http://www.i.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=506596

I welcome constructive criticism and look forward to any and all comments you may have.

Anton
 
"Controlling Sarah" now posted

Please bare with me, new to this site and board. One of my latest, "Controlling Sarah," is now available here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=510526

It has been #1 for the month for the last couple of weeks at BDSMLibrary.Com, with over 23,000 unique readers there since it posted on 6 DEC 10, with three reviews and a 10/10 average rating.

Still trying to figure out the features of Literotica.Com, so I am a little slow figuring out the ratings, votes, etc. I hope this audience enjoys the new story.
JT
 
My first story

My first story was just approved, here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=510730

I don't think I'm a particularly great writer. However, I think in this story a muse has struck.. and this one is uncommonly good for me.

I'd love some feedback. Harsh feedback is always appreciated most .. I don't have an ego about my writing. (other things I do.. don't dis my pics!! LOL ;) )

It's a story about a forbidden love in a very religious community. The title is Miyudahi ... which is Hebrew for "my intimate"... which is something David calls Jonathan.. so I believe the title carries all of the saucy and forbidden yet tender tones of their relationship...

And so it was for ours...
 
M: An Exhibitionist Woman

M: An Exhibitionist Woman

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=506958

This story came out of two different preoccupations: 1. It's an experiment with a narrative form I'd been thinking about exploring for a while. 2. It's an attempt on my part to understand female exhibitionism, which is something that excites, intrigues and puzzles me - and probably intimidates me a little as well.

I will, of course, be grateful for any comments anyone cares to make. I'd be especially interested to hear how convincing - or not - people find the central female character and the situation I've imagined her in. Overall, however, I really want to know if - and perhaps how - the story worked for you.

- polynices
 
For your reading enjoyment...

Erotic Couplings: The Storage Room

For my 100th post, I figured I would post something in here to look for feedback on my stories. The latest posting is the Storage Room about coworkers who share an erotic birthday gift in a storage room at work.

The main link to my stories is here.

I have several more in various stages of completion, so check back periodically for new additions. I also have a story idea posted in the Author's Hangout that I would like feedback on. Check it out here and let me know your thoughts.

Thanks and enjoy!
Gator
 
Plagiarism the ultimate flattery?

If imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, then plagiarism has to be right up there also.
Not only did this woman steal my work (A Knight's Tale, chapters 1/4), she had the balls to put it in a book of other stolen work, pass it off as her own and sell it on Amazon.com.

I want to thank Alex for not only finding out about this twit but bring this to mine and other authors notice. Thanks Alex.

The following is what Alex has done to let people know.


{Alex Severin writes to let us know that he found his work being stolen on the Internet. That's not unusual. What outraged him more was that it was being sold:


My name is Alex Severin. I'm a writer. I've come across a Literary Kleptomaniac on the internet variously named as -

Rebecca Geissler
Rebekah Geissler
Becky Geissler
Rebecca Bick
Rebekah Bick
Ana Phylaxis
M. Ana Phylaxis
Mistress Ana Phylaxis
BizarreBettyXXX (she claims this is her publishing house.)
Byronee (this is actually a character from one of the stolen stories below.)

She steals stories (erotica, mind control, fetish and erotic horror,) puts them in book form and sells them on Amazon. So far, there are 7 books. Every story is plagiarized and copyright infringed.

I already had her store on LuLu.com shut down. She was using them to POD paperbacks and selling them at nearly $21 a pop.

If you have work on Literotica.com or ASSTR.org, please read through the list below and look for your name. If you don't see your name, I'm sure you will recognize plenty of other names listed. Please pass on this info to your fellow writers, post it on your blog, your social network sites etc.

She has looted both Literotica and ASSTR. She stole 8 of my stories from my own website and a very old e-zine my work is in. Five of those she put into books. The other 3 she was earning per-1000-clicks payments via Yahoo! Associated Content.

I sent DMCA notices to Amazon.com regarding the two books my stories were in and they have have since been deleted from the site, so, if your story was in NECROLUST : IN THE FLESH or NECROPOLIS you don't need to take any action. 13 WOMEN has also been deleted after 'Phineas' whose story YAMARA was stolen from Literotica, sent Amazon a DMCA notice. Currently, four books remain available.

If your story/stories is/are in any of the other four books, I would recommend sending Amazon a DMCA notice. If you don't know how to do this, click on the link below, copy and paste the DMCA form and just fill in all the areas that contain UPPER CASE INSTRUCTIONS, like so, with your own details.

http://www.alexseverin.com/Blank-DMCA-Notice.txt
And send it to Amazon.com's Copyright & Trademark Agent at copyright@amazon.com

Use DMCA NOTICE - COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT as your e-mail subject line.

Any questions you might have or further help you may need with the DMCA notice, don't hesitate to contact me at Alex@NOSPAMAlexSeverin.com (Remove NOSPAM before sending e-mail, of course.)

I've listed the plagiarized and copyright infringed stories and writers, book by book. It's a long list. I've linked to all the Amazon buy pages that remain (of course, a few of them are gone now but I've uploaded a few screen-shots.)

Also, since Facebook doesn't seem to care that she is linking to buy illegal content (a contravention of their own Rights and Responsibilities for users,) feel free to send a note to Facebook requesting they shut down her 'fan' group. Just let them know that she's linking to illegal content in the form of copyright infringed / plagiarized stories and offering them for sale via her group page. I sent her a Cease & Desist Order, since she clearly wasn't going to stop and kept releasing books even after I had started taking her down, (including stealing more on my stories!) She closed her 'fan' page on Facebook and locked down her 'fan' group. She's now claiming 'her' stories have been 'stolen' and that she is working with the FBI on the matter.

Just as an aside, I wouldn't recommend interacting with her. She informed me I was affecting her PTSD, she is poor and innocent and that I am actually victimizing HER. She told me she has no money and that legal action against her will cost me more than it will her. I felt obliged to inform her when I mentioned 'legal action' that she misunderstood -- I am not suing her personally -- I am seeking her prosecution. I never heard back from her after that.

This is the URL of her Facebook group -

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_113466835387435


She also has another facebook page, 'Facebook.com/Becky.Geissler' (This is also her, but she claims it is her 'slave.' The display names she uses on her group are 'Mistress Ana Phylaxis' and 'Anaphylactic Shock.'

This person has made money off all of us -- perhaps not a fortune, but enough that she continues to do it even after she has been caught.

The reason I'm sending this to the individual websites involved is this -- I contacted all the writers in the first three books and only received one responses out of a dozen writers. Many of these stories have been online for ten years or more and some of the accounts haven't been modified for many years. I thought my best bet was to try and get the two main sites on board to send out this letter via their own newsletters, forums and social networks. Also, anybody reading this please feel free to disseminate it, or the information within, anywhere you deem appropriate. I would like this plagiarist publicly exposed.

I got a call on 21st December from the Copyright and Trademark Agent at Amazon, Adrian Garver and it would appear Mistress Ana Phylaxis is going to try and challenge my DMCA notices. She informed Mr. Garver that she started writing the book in 1993 and first published it in 1997. She didn't actually say which book she was talking about.

Here's the book and story list...

Title : NECROLUST : IN THE FLESH [I sent a DMCA notice regarding this book and it has now been deleted from the Amazon catalog.]

The buy page is gone now, but here are some screen-shots :

http://www.alexseverin.com/Necrolus...om-Kindle-Edition-Mistress-Ana-Phylaxis-1.jpg

http://www.alexseverin.com/Necrolus...om-Kindle-Edition-Mistress-Ana-Phylaxis-2.jpg

http://www.alexseverin.com/Necrolus...Edition-Mistress-Ana-Phylaxis-2-Paperback.jpg

NECROLUST : IN THE FLESH PDF PURCHASED FROM LULU.COM -- If you would like a copy, please e-mail me. I don't want to host the content on my site since only a few of the stories are my own copyright and this would be an infringement of your copyright.

In the Flesh - Alex Severin (Alex Severin.com)

Bad Habit - Alex Severin (House of Pain e-Zine)

Bad Habit II : The Redemtion of Mary Magdalen -- Alex Severin (House of Pain e-Zine)

Frankenstein, the Lost Journals -- Red Ram (Literotica)

The Goblin Under the Bed -- Margin Walker (Literotica)

Wonderland in Alice -- TwistedPlayr (Literotica)

Lustful Summoning : Parts 1 - 13 -- mjm202036 (Literotica)



Title : THE COVEN

Buy Link : http://www.amazon.com/The-Coven-ebo...m=AG56TWVU5XWC2&s=books&qid=1292398348&sr=8-6 PDF COPY PURCHASED FROM LULU.COM - If you would like a copy, please e-mail me. I don't want to host this e-book on my site since none of the stories in it are mine and this would be an infringement of your copyright.

The Coven (Complete Serial) -- TheFlyingPen (Literotica)



Title : 13 WOMEN [This book has now been removed from the Amazon catalog after a DMCA notice was sent by 'Phineas' whose story YAMARA was used.]

PDF COPY PURCHASED FROM LULU.COM - If you would like a copy, please e-mail me. I don't want to host this e-book on my site since none of the stories in it are mine and this would be an infringement of your copyright.

The Julia Chronicles -- Sara H [AKA Cat's Sara] (Literotica)

Igrayne -- Uther Pendragon (ASSTR)

A Knight to Remember -- Souvie (Literotica)

Last Night Together -- Inkubus (ASSTR) (See note below about this story.)

The Gorgons Kiss -- Cobalt Jade (ASSTR)

Yamara -- Phineas (Literotica)

The Devil is Miss Jones (all parts) / The Devil is Still Miss Jones (all parts) / Hell's Belle : The Return of Lilibat (all parts) -- A Sinister Bent (ASSTR)

Dr. Fixit (all parts of the Dr. Kara Pendleton series) - A Sinister Bent (ASSTR)

The Adventures of Sam Spain, PI [Her title, THE ADVENTURES OF SAM SPAIN, PRIVATE DICK] -- masterdavid1965 (Literotica)

(NOTE: LAST NIGHT TOGETHER may also be the same LAST NIGHT TOGETHER that's on her NiteFlirt page where she's selling audio files. I didn't purchase these as the site requires setting up an account with them. So you might want to visit and check it out. There's lots of files -- she may have gotten the original material from Literotica and ASSTR too. You might recognize a title -- she doesn't change them often. Here's the link to her page -

http://www.niteflirt.com/BizarreBettyXXX)


Title : NECROPOLIS [I sent a DMCA notice regarding this book and it has now been deleted from the Amazon catalog.]

PDF COPY PURCHASED FROM LULU.COM - If you would like a copy, please e-mail me. I don't want to host this e-book on my site since only two of the stories in it are mine and this would be an infringement of your copyright.

Emma Eccentric -- CSC Monkey Girl (Literotica)

Illisa's Trials -- t'Sade (Literotica)

La Belle Dame Sans Merci -- Differently Dirty (Literotica)

Inside You -- Alex Severin (AlexSeverin.com)

Ladle Rat Rotten Hut -- Libertine (ASSTR)

Migration -- Bandyimo (ASSTR)

Pits & Spikes -- t'Sade (ASSTR)

Playmates -- Angel Michael (ASSTR)

Special Treats -- t'Sade (ASSTR)

The Summer Guest -- Evil Cow (ASSTR)

Winter Flesh -- Tabico (ASSTR)

Zombie Fucker -- Alex Severin & Hertzan Chimera (AlexSeverin.com)


Title : A... B... C... (THE A,B,C'S OF DISCIPLINE AND HORROR) [sic]

Buy Link : http://www.amazon.com/B-C-Disciplin...m=AG56TWVU5XWC2&s=books&qid=1292895170&sr=8-1

A Sanguine Romance for the Dying -- Unknown Pleasures (Literotica)

Blood Rose - Chapters 1 - 3 -- Icehead (Literotica)

Boston Halloween Massacre - Chapters 1 - 22 -- BostonFictionWriter (Literotica)

Call of the Wolf -- Chapters 1 - 8 -- Purpleguy1812 (Literotica)

Consumed -- Chapters 1 -- 3 -- NotWhatSheSeems (Literotica)

Captivity -- J. Percival (Literotica)

Plane of Lust -- limitless_lover (Literotica)

Title : D... E... F... (THE A,B,C'S OF DISCIPLINE AND HORROR Volume 2) [sic]

Buy Link : http://www.amazon.com/D-F-Disciplin...m=AG56TWVU5XWC2&s=books&qid=1292895809&sr=8-2

Detective Murphy -- Transfix (Literotica)

Detective Murphy Meets the Devil -- Transfix (Literotica)

Detective Murphy : The Lesson -- Transfix (Literotica)

Detective Murphy : The Prick -- Transfix (Literotica)

Descending -- Chapters 1 -- 2 -- missmetalhead (Literotica)

Englishman in New York -- Chapters 1 -- 13 -- velvetpie (Literotica)

Fresh from the Grave -- Days 1 -- 5 -- emap (Literotica)

Found -- Chapters 1 - 5 -- Cowboi (Literotica)

Fungi -- Master_Vyle (Literotica)

Full Moon Rut -- SolitaryHawk (Literotica)

Title : 12 DAYS OF CHRISTMAS

Buy Link : http://www.amazon.com/12-Days-of-Ch...m=AG56TWVU5XWC2&s=books&qid=1292895809&sr=8-3

12 Days of Christmas -- Days 1 -- 12 -- supersexy_alexa (Literotica)

Website : YAHOO! ASSOCIATED CONTENT

Mary Magdalene : The Beloved Disciple Actual Title : Mary Magdalene : Author of the Fourth Gospel? - Ramon K. Jusino

New Year's -- ScottishChieftan (ASSTR)

Jimmy's Fate - ScottishChieftan (ASSTR)

The Chieftain - ScottishChieftan (ASSTR)

Good Steward -- ScottishChieftan (ASSTR)

The Phoenix House -- Bandyimo (ASSTR)

Again, writers, please don't hesitate to contact me if you need any assistance with your DMCA notice, or have any other questions regarding this matter.

I would also like to express my thanks to the websites involved for assisting with disseminating this information.

Sincerest regards... /Alex Severin/}


As all can see Alex has done the hard work, I followed up with an immeadiate DMCA notice to Amazon and will be contacting a lawyer next week. So while imitation is flattering, outright theft is not.

Dom Woolf
 
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Hello I'm new

Hello I've been plodding out a story that screamed at me to do, and I'm nearly done and over with typing.

I just want people to know about the latest chapter of a series called 'The Champion's Companion. I would love for feedback.
 
Posted: First Part Of New Series

Just posted the first part of my "Celebrity Downfalls" series. The series will have different situations pertaining to the careers of some of our favorite celebrities. Some will show what happens after a career comes to a crashing halt, some will show an attempted restoration, and some will just feature celebrities doing things that they/you would never expect. The line between realism and crazy will be toyed with. These stories are an acquired taste, some will love them and some will hate them.

The first story documents the aftermath of Taylor Swift's fall from fame and struggling to find a way to acquire basic needs (food) and survive.

http://www.literotica.com/s/celebrity-downfalls-ch-01

In the next few days parts 2 & 3 will be posted. Part 2 will show Shania Twain going to desperate measures to revive her career. Part 3 shows Stacy Keibler take a new career path and encountering a issue.

Feedback is welcome and encouraged to help improve future chapters (just dont be jerks or I'll ignore you). Requests are welcome as well.

UPDATE: Chapters 2 & 3 are up

http://www.literotica.com/s/celebrity-downfalls-ch-02

http://www.literotica.com/s/celebrity-downfalls-ch-03
 
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Domwoolf said:
If imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, then plagiarism has to be right up there also.
Not only did this woman steal my work (A Knight's Tale, chapters 1/4), she had the balls to put it in a book of other stolen work, pass it off as her own and sell it on Amazon.com.
...
As all can see Alex has done the hard work, I followed up with an immeadiate DMCA notice to Amazon and will be contacting a lawyer next week. So while imitation is flattering, outright theft is not.

Dom Woolf
Click to expand...

Has there been any update on this?

Frankly, this is part of the reason why I've been reluctant to post my stories online. You never know what kinda greedy people are out there who try to take advantage of other people's creative and intellectual property.
 
Valentine's Day: Home Sweet Home

Home Sweet Home is a quick read about the seduction of a traveling business man after which he realizes what a creative and sexy woman he is paired with.
 
Get him/her out of your system

Chicklet said:
Understanding is a letter by yours truly written after one of the more heart-shattering nights of my life. It's a real insight to my life, if you're interested, and so far has gotten mixed feedback. It's not too long, so if you're willing, take a peek.
Click to expand...

and this is as good a way as any. If it's hurting you and if s/he isn't kissing it to make it well, then get rid of him/her. I remember when my first marriage cratered and I wanted to die. Two weeks later I met The One--now it's 38 years and we're still together. Plus we won the first prize--two beautiful daughters. Now on to the grand prize. So write the letter, cry the tears, dry your eyes, and above all, as the 12-steppers say, "Don't leave five minutes before the miracle happens". (signed) estragon
 
Greetings folks,

My Entire Illustrated series, "Gift from Outer Space" with the prologue "A Union Consummated" has finally been completed and appears (barring any copyright violators on other websites) exclusively on Literotica.

Follow the link to find it all,
Also the links in my sigline go to the prologue and series. 8 chapters in all, with elements of lesbian romance and sci-fi, and plenty of crazy dickgirl and alien sex. If you're not sure you found what you're looking for give it a try. If you found what you're looking for, what are you waiting for? :devil:

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-union-consummated
http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-from-outer-space-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-from-outer-space-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-from-outer-space-ch-03 (Illustrated)
http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-from-outer-space-ch-04
http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-from-outer-space-ch-05 (Illustrated)
http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-from-outer-space-ch-06 (Illustrated)
http://www.literotica.com/s/gift-from-outer-space-ch-07 (Illustrated)
 
Dirty

This was an experiment - up yesterday. It's had a reasonable, though not universally ecstatic, reception so far. I'd guess it divides the readership.

I'd be grateful for reactions to it: both to the experiment (you'll know it when you see it) and to the fact that it's a lesbian story written by a man. Does that work on any level, or does it just make you think 'Typical male fantasy!'

The story's here:

http://www.literotica.com/s/dirty-31

- polynices
 
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New Story

My first ever published story that inadvertently caused quite a fuss on the boards. Alas, writing well is the best revenge.

http://www.literotica.com/s/community-service-pt-01

Margo is a beautiful, red haired college girl. She heads into the ghetto one morning for Sorority ordered charity work, but faulty directions lead her directly to a black gang's drug den. If Mar wants to leave alive, she will have to rely on an entirely different type of community service.
 
Again another first time story, written one night in a fit of passion, but corrected since then.

The Car http://www.literotica.com/s/the-car-8 lets your minds do the work! In this passionate encounter two strangers meet, and fall in lust, which leads them to the only near-by place available - his car! Enjoy

Its short, which I like, but wondering how others felt about it! First line is 'time and date didnt matter' so I'm trying to get straight into the story, I am more use to writing short stories, wondering should I change this!

As this is my first story, was wondering if it was believable/hot enough, please help!
 
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