Newly 18 :D

Good God almighty all of a sudden I want to write a 10 page paper on the "Prettiest Pussy on Lit".
 
Your clit? Why yes, yes it is awesome and quite tasty I would wager as well.
 
Dont forget about the extended paper dealing with how hot she looks after she orgasms. Not to mention the 6 paragraphs describing, in detail, how awesome her juices look dripping off her toy. :D
 
HOD intro

How's this?

All throughout the world rules and laws are set in place in order to keep the public at large safe and in check. This has been around since the first civilizations so that humans can keep from falling into chaos and anarchy. These rules are needed because humans are innately self-interested and at the core are truly evil. So what happens when there are no rules? What happens when there are no restrictions, no order, and no consequences? Joseph Conrad's Heart Of Darkness answers this question. In Heart Of Darkness Conrad uses imagery to convey that humans, when left unchecked, will fall into the evil that lives in every person.


Oh and p.s. I really don't care if its not AMAZING, just decent. :]
 
How's this?

All throughout the world rules and laws are set in place in order to keep the public at large safe and in check. This has been around since the first civilizations so that humans can keep from falling into chaos and anarchy. These rules are needed because humans are innately self-interested and at the core are truly evil. So what happens when there are no rules? What happens when there are no restrictions, no order, and no consequences? Joseph Conrad's Heart Of Darkness answers this question. In Heart Of Darkness Conrad uses imagery to convey that humans, when left unchecked, will fall into the evil that lives in every person.


Oh and p.s. I really don't care if its not AMAZING, just decent. :]

Actually, I would say that it is a good start.
 
How's this?

All throughout the world rules and laws are set in place in order to keep the public at large safe and in check. This has been around since the first civilizations so that humans can keep from falling into chaos and anarchy. These rules are needed because humans are innately self-interested and at the core are truly evil. So what happens when there are no rules? What happens when there are no restrictions, no order, and no consequences? Joseph Conrad's Heart Of Darkness answers this question. In Heart Of Darkness Conrad uses imagery to convey that humans, when left unchecked, will fall into the evil that lives in every person.


Oh and p.s. I really don't care if its not AMAZING, just decent. :]

It's decent. mind if i tweak it a little? you dont have to use it.
 
How's this?

All throughout the world rules and laws are set in place in order to keep the public at large safe and in check. This has been around since the first civilizations so that humans can keep from falling into chaos and anarchy. These rules are needed because humans are innately self-interested and at the core are truly evil. So what happens when there are no rules? What happens when there are no restrictions, no order, and no consequences? Joseph Conrad's Heart Of Darkness answers this question. In Heart Of Darkness Conrad uses imagery to convey that humans, when left unchecked, will fall into the evil that lives in every person.


Oh and p.s. I really don't care if its not AMAZING, just decent. :]

To be a little more specific, the introduction grabs the attention of the reader well. Plus, there is no question what your opinion is. The question is what are you going to use to support the basic thesis. Of course, there is plenty there within the text, but it has been years since I read it, and I don't think that I could give you any specific examples, outside of the basic theme, that would help you at all.
 
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