ilovetolickyou
Literotica Guru
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To be a little more specific, the introduction grabs the attention of the reader well. Plus, there is no question what your opinion is. The question is what are you going to use to support the basic thesis. Of course, there is plenty there within the text, but it has been years since I read it, and I don't think that I could give you any specific examples, outside of the basic theme, that would help you at all.
I'm gonna use the image of the "whited sepulcher" in the first paragraph and then idk yet haha

