Not that anybody cares

[Paintchips43]

But my 2¢ on the nonconsent blackmail/extortion stories such as Bosses hostile takeover of my wife and the the theft of our lives. These stories are very descriptive but they just sort of fizzle out. I would have liked to seen a finish where the blackmailers get their comeuppance.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

But my 2¢ on the nonconsent blackmail/extortion stories such as Bosses hostile takeover of my wife and the the theft of our lives. These stories are very descriptive but they just sort of fizzle out. I would have liked to seen a finish where the blackmailers get their comeuppance.

There are stories like that.

The odds that the authors of any particular story read this forum are low. Commenting on the story itself is more likely to get their attention.

SPOILER

In my "Pranked", the villain isn't very happy at the end. That's not blackmail, though.

--Annie

 

[darwin1859]

But my 2¢ on the nonconsent blackmail/extortion stories such as Bosses hostile takeover of my wife and the the theft of our lives. These stories are very descriptive but they just sort of fizzle out. I would have liked to seen a finish where the blackmailers get their comeuppance.

Elsewhere you asked about finishing other's stories. There are few novel ideas. I think you should write your own story using the whatever plot points you want, with your own style, and your preferred ending. I'd read that.