OOC: Hawkes of the Sea: a pirate fantasy
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MtnAngelWV
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All great ideas SW. I would be anxious to see Jeremiah teach Amanda a few fighting skills!! I need to kick Richard's butt!! I will go with the consensus in this! I, too, do not want the thread to fade away!!
Brat...can't wait to see what The Black Raven will reveal in the future!
Will Sister Therese have a brand new "habit?"
Still a lot to explore here!
<this time can I have the top bunk...I mean I am a noblewoman...unless of course Jeremiah wants to put me down in the brig again, shackle me and have his dastardly ways with me...hehehehe>
Brat...can't wait to see what The Black Raven will reveal in the future!
Will Sister Therese have a brand new "habit?"
Still a lot to explore here!
<this time can I have the top bunk...I mean I am a noblewoman...unless of course Jeremiah wants to put me down in the brig again, shackle me and have his dastardly ways with me...hehehehe>
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Husshhhh
Shhhhhhhh,
The lady from the west virginia mountains is sleeping...So let me answer that question for her...
Antonio is definately out of the thread, his soul now with his beloved Maria.....
Amanda may only dream of him, and the love they once shared.........
Let them all rest, dreaming sweet dreams....
Randy
Shhhhhhhh,
The lady from the west virginia mountains is sleeping...So let me answer that question for her...
Antonio is definately out of the thread, his soul now with his beloved Maria.....
Amanda may only dream of him, and the love they once shared.........
Let them all rest, dreaming sweet dreams....
Randy
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Sorry to confuse you Brat! The post is indeed a dream. Whenever I do a dream sequence I always use italics. She is having a nightmare. I didn't want to just lie around and wait to be rescued. So since the last thing she knew was that Antonio was angry with her, her fear is showing thru in her dream.
The ever turning thread
The thread is taking an interesting turn here. as far as who's ship, if Clarrissa is expected to build one keep in mind that is not an instantaneous affair and supplies are needed. Unless I missed a post The Fiend and Lady Hawke are both still sea worthy.
Carry on my friends this is so much fun.
The thread is taking an interesting turn here. as far as who's ship, if Clarrissa is expected to build one keep in mind that is not an instantaneous affair and supplies are needed. Unless I missed a post The Fiend and Lady Hawke are both still sea worthy.
Carry on my friends this is so much fun.
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Creeps
sorry sojournerwolf. So when does the note attached to the arrow pitch in?
sorry sojournerwolf. So when does the note attached to the arrow pitch in?
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no problem
actually, Jeremiah read and reacted to the note at the end of my last post at the Hawke's thread.
Actually, this scenario works well with the twists the plot takes at Hawke's. For one thing, Creeps being as good as he is, he should be able to make his way into the crowd without actually being captured maybe? Or else capture oneof the crew and come in with the hostage? Also, it gives a chance to incorporate Creeps into the future direction of the thread, when Hawke & company head toward England.
consider, Creeps has a mission. How much to tell Hawke, Black Raven, et. al.? Maybe not the whole truth, but enough to let them know he is on their side? Hawke would be more likely to recognize skills, and since his foster father isn't dead...and might even suggest to Hawke that Creeps has a purpose and should be included, this would give your character an even greater "in".
Just some thoughts there that would make it easier to incorporate Creeps as an interacting character with the rest.
actually, Jeremiah read and reacted to the note at the end of my last post at the Hawke's thread.
Actually, this scenario works well with the twists the plot takes at Hawke's. For one thing, Creeps being as good as he is, he should be able to make his way into the crowd without actually being captured maybe? Or else capture oneof the crew and come in with the hostage? Also, it gives a chance to incorporate Creeps into the future direction of the thread, when Hawke & company head toward England.
consider, Creeps has a mission. How much to tell Hawke, Black Raven, et. al.? Maybe not the whole truth, but enough to let them know he is on their side? Hawke would be more likely to recognize skills, and since his foster father isn't dead...and might even suggest to Hawke that Creeps has a purpose and should be included, this would give your character an even greater "in".
Just some thoughts there that would make it easier to incorporate Creeps as an interacting character with the rest.
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sorry
Excuse my final two sentences in the thread there. They made absolutely no sense at all.
Excuse my final two sentences in the thread there. They made absolutely no sense at all.
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WHAT THE HEY...CREEPY?
So now what? You shoot the Captains father, ignore my posting, and walk into our group as...what? a friend????
And what dead man did you stab???? I delivered my package unconcious....and asked of Jeremiahs fathers "well being?"
If you want to write.....give us all a chance and READ our postings....FIRST....if you dont understand, ask, thats what the OOC is for......OK?
Now the first mistake is a freebie, for the newbie....
The second one gets the flat of my sword......
So now what? You shoot the Captains father, ignore my posting, and walk into our group as...what? a friend????
And what dead man did you stab???? I delivered my package unconcious....and asked of Jeremiahs fathers "well being?"
If you want to write.....give us all a chance and READ our postings....FIRST....if you dont understand, ask, thats what the OOC is for......OK?
Now the first mistake is a freebie, for the newbie....
The second one gets the flat of my sword......
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so what now
So how do you want me to correct my mistake. I'm totally stuck. My characters supposed to be a professional. i couldn't just let him be dragged down from a tree, and character knows you people cause he, 'knows people'. What kind of master thief dosn't research things that he should be aware of. All the information he knows now was provided to him by the Goldmoon thieves guild. I don't know what to say about the dead father, but if you think of something, let me know.
So how do you want me to correct my mistake. I'm totally stuck. My characters supposed to be a professional. i couldn't just let him be dragged down from a tree, and character knows you people cause he, 'knows people'. What kind of master thief dosn't research things that he should be aware of. All the information he knows now was provided to him by the Goldmoon thieves guild. I don't know what to say about the dead father, but if you think of something, let me know.
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yah, Brat, old pal.....
With you it was cute....and you never jumped in the middle....you at least TRIED to read the postings.....
Like I said, a freebie for the newbie....second time the flat of my sword......
Now gotta go pack...taking off for the weekend, will see you all later...Sunday nite maybe....
With you it was cute....and you never jumped in the middle....you at least TRIED to read the postings.....
Like I said, a freebie for the newbie....second time the flat of my sword......
Now gotta go pack...taking off for the weekend, will see you all later...Sunday nite maybe....
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Sorry to everyone
I'm sorry if I ruined your story. I take full responsiblity for that. I beg forgiveness. I'm serious about this to, cause I'm not putting in any of those faces. So please, if theres any way I can make it up to you guys I need to hear it. I'm also sorry if i am over apologetic. Its the way I am.
I'm sorry if I ruined your story. I take full responsiblity for that. I beg forgiveness. I'm serious about this to, cause I'm not putting in any of those faces. So please, if theres any way I can make it up to you guys I need to hear it. I'm also sorry if i am over apologetic. Its the way I am.
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Ok....one more time....if your character is soooooo good, at research, how about you...
Read others posts first....then write to them....if you ignore them, you're ignoring the person writing....Inventing responses to save your characters "image" at the cost of other writers is just pure bad manners...Have you read Hectate's rules yet? They're on the top of the threads.....
So you got pulled out of a tree, and dumped at our feet....pick yourself up, dust yourself off, and take the tongue lashing you deserve.....Black Bart has, several times.....
Now if you're truly serious...go back to your posts, and edit them to fit everyone elses....okay? Then we can all go back to playing together...
Read others posts first....then write to them....if you ignore them, you're ignoring the person writing....Inventing responses to save your characters "image" at the cost of other writers is just pure bad manners...Have you read Hectate's rules yet? They're on the top of the threads.....
So you got pulled out of a tree, and dumped at our feet....pick yourself up, dust yourself off, and take the tongue lashing you deserve.....Black Bart has, several times.....
Now if you're truly serious...go back to your posts, and edit them to fit everyone elses....okay? Then we can all go back to playing together...
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again, I'm sorry
What I did was not a good thing. It was down right bad manners. I know that now. How about this. Being the kind of people that you are, tie me up, until you can trust my character. This is to show that my character is not invincible, and god like. I then follow you people at sword point, how about that. I like the idea. This should also correct some mistakes I made.
What I did was not a good thing. It was down right bad manners. I know that now. How about this. Being the kind of people that you are, tie me up, until you can trust my character. This is to show that my character is not invincible, and god like. I then follow you people at sword point, how about that. I like the idea. This should also correct some mistakes I made.
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ahem
I think you made a mistake Bella. You called me...... ahem.... high king. My character's name is Creeps. Don't worry though, theres no harm done in getting the name wrong. I'm sure it was just a simple understandable mistake.
I think you made a mistake Bella. You called me...... ahem.... high king. My character's name is Creeps. Don't worry though, theres no harm done in getting the name wrong. I'm sure it was just a simple understandable mistake.
