OOC: Hentai Space Opera

[Othermoose]

OOC. Hey I'm new to this role play thing so I may be just stating something blatantly obvious but the actual role play isn't on this thread. It's on a second one here:

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=68051463#post68051463

The reason I posted that is because it took me a little bit to figure it out. So there's the link in case anyone needs it.

 

[BRIGHTWELL]

Rex Lionheart

Full Name:Rex Lionheart
Place of Birth:Anglo-American/Moon, third generation 'Moonie"(born on Terren moon)
Age:24
Height:6'2'
Weight:175
Hair:Curly Brown
Eyes:Hazel
Build:Standard Human build. No special features.
Distinguishing Features:Anglo-American
Occupation:Fighter Pilot
Educational Background:Inter Colonial School (Student),Tycho Star Base(Space Cadet) John Peterson School of Racing(Speed Flyer Student) 4thTactical Operational Base(Military Flight Training), John Peterson School of Racing(Advanced speed Flying Student), 334th Fighter Wing( Advanced Combat Flight training)
Employment Background:Age:16,Worked in a food center(moon),17: Xeri's Flying Circus(Bus boy and Ramp worker(Moon)),18,Space Cadet, 19.5 Interplanatary Engine Trainee,20.3 Military Flight Trainee, 20.9 Advanced Speed Trainee,21.5Fighter pilot Trainee.
Law Enforcement Background:trainee-(prisoner escape) hunter specalist
Military Background:18,Space Cadet,age 20.3 Military Flight Trainee, age21.5Fighter pilot Trainee,22.6 Fighter pilot-267th Light Fighters(Spider recon ships)23.6 Fighter Pilot-556th Heavy fighters( Tiger Shark heavy fighter(3 kills))
Marital Status/Family:single, Father/ Born on Earth New Jersey, Mother/human born moon colony 3
Significant Other:none
Hobbies:Interplanetary Racing two Second Places-Earth to Neptune
Skills:Flying-open space- interplanetary-combat, Navigation-open space-interplanetary
Weapons: Several hand blasters, Prefers Republic P-35 blaster, Pulse rifles, Spider guns-2 Trapian mini guns, Tiger Shark guns- four long range hyper thumpers,two forward blister packs of short range plasma launchers
History:Born on Terren (Earth)moon, Attended Colonial School #24 on Terren moon, At 16 got a job at Big Mike's food Center #3 as a stock boy,at 17 he worked at Xeri's Flying Circus Restaurant as a bus boy and ramp worker. At 18 he joins the Space Services and is assigned to Tycho Star Base for Space Sciences and Ground School. For the rest See military History and Employment.

 

[JawnKarTurr]

Two more for the crew...And Problems Little_Tease/Othermoose

1. I don't like badly written posts! I struggle with grammar and spelling, and the very least take time to read my posts before posting. If it's hard to understand for everyone. All I ask is people give them a check.

2. Pay attention to the story! Did anyone ask if there is slavery in the Empire? There isn't and taking someone prisoner in a public place who doesn't have a bounty on them is called kidnapping even if you think they'd make a good employee or sex slave! It's only gone on so long since I worked an extra shift that kept me away. Also I didn't do gear outfitting yet, and people ignored story aspects. The station wasn't built, the sneaking on part that was written was done badly and didn't make sense for the story. The bounty hunting was also a mistake.



This keeps up I'll ask you to leave the thread. I want people who can write!

 

[Othermoose]

When I captured her the park was (mostly) empty. She wasn't supposed to be on the ship so I figured it would be easier to capture her than someone who had records. And my character may not be a white knight but he isn't a rapist. At no point in this story do I plan on having a sex slave/ or raping anyone (unless someone wants me to do that). I'm sorry if I'm messing up the story that's not my intention at all, but this is my first role play so I haven't quite figured out the rules yet. Just tell me what you have in mind and I'll follow your lead.

 

[JawnKarTurr]

Yes and you're off to a bad start, but you're getting a second chance. How exactly did your character know she wasn't on the ship legally? You pretty much just grabbed a random woman from a park that happens to be on a navy base! The park has many people and you live in what is essentially a small city! I take it you haven't read the posts.

Also having a character who is a violent drunk is your business, and you're perfectly allowed to do so. Just don't expect anyone to like you.

 

[silvertongue217]

I know its your first role play as well but make sure you read the material like Jawn said it didnt make a whole lot of sense why he kidnapped her or how he got away with it plus you pretty much captured her with out really giving her a chance to stop it or get away I mean the drunk part is okay it's just how you handled it

 

[Othermoose]

Ok. Sorry I thought I had left enough room for her to escape. And I have read the source material. Two peaceful alien species gave the human empire this space station that they captured from the enemy after a plague killed everyone onboard. Then the human empire gathered a crew of 500,000 to go fight the two evil alien races coming to kill us. My character joined the ship because he figured fighting the evil aliens would get him lots of money.

Another thing about my character is that he's a functioning alcoholic. He drinks so much it doesn't affect him as much. If it doesn't actually work that way then I'm sorry for the confusion. I'm 18 so I've never been drunk and I have no first hand experience with alcohol. I've seen drunk people but I've never actually had any myself. Sorry I'm messing everything up I'll try to do better.

If there's anything else that I'm messing up just tell me and I'll try to fix it. Also I know my character is an asshole but I'm not so I won't freak out over constructive critism.

 

[silvertongue217]

No ones saying your messing up every thing We're just trying to make sure this thing goes as smoothly as possible. There are a few grammer issues and I didnt like at all how you handled the kidnapping but your character is fine. I dont think you left enough room for her to escape but the rest of it was fine. Just so you know however Alcoholics may take more to get drunk but they do drink and get drunk as a matter of fact usually their drunken stupor is more heavy than say some on who isnt an Alcoholic. Since he is one if he drinks a lot he would actually be more of a drunk.

 

[Othermoose]

Ok. I didn't know that about drunks so I'll keep it in mind. Also no more kidnapping. Hopefully I won't step on anymore toes but my character is kind of chaotic. That being said I'll still do my best to respect everyone else's charters and not go over the top when I interact with them. Thanks for the advice.

 

[swm2486]

Richard Black, Bar Owner

Full Name: Richard Black
Place of Birth: San Francisco, CA Earth
Age: 34
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 270
Hair: Light brown slightly balding with receding hair line.
Eyes: Baby blue
Build: Slightly overweight
Distinguishing Features: RIP Jack tattoo on upper left shoulder.
Occupation: Bar Owner and Bartender(for now)

Educational Background: Graduated with honors from culinary school.
Employment Background: Took over family restaurant a year after graduating culinary school. Ran the business into the ground in 6 months. Opened a tavern style bar 2 years later and ran it successfully for 16 years. Mostly due to the income from renting rooms for "services".
Military Background: Father and grandfather served in USMC. Basic general knowledge of military principles.
Marital Status/Family: Married during culinary school. She divorced him after opening the bar after she found out that he was treating it like a brothel.
Significant Other: Whoever his favorite lady at the bar is.
Weapons: Basic knowledge of weapons from family military service.
History: See above

 

[such_a_bad_man]

"Captain" Dash Claynor

Full Name: Dash Claynor III
Place of Birth: (a space station within the Sol system or nearby star system, definitely not on Earth; we can have a chat about the infrastructure of the Empire to come up with)
Age: 37
Height: 6'1
Weight: 198 lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Hazel
Build: Wiry, even as he's nearly middle-aged
Distinguishing Features: No noticeable piercings, tattoos or scars. However, under his shirt is a "patchwork of pain" as he calls it: several bullet scars, energy weapon burn marks, knife wounds a plenty; all side effects of living a life on the edge of the Empire

Occupation: Current legal job title is Transport Ship captain.

Educational Background: Middle of the road all through K-12 equivalent schooling, always doing exactly enough to graduate and move on. 4 years spent at the Military Academy, however, no commendations or recommendations from any staff officers. In fact, his file was sealed upon graduation and any investigation simply leads back to a single line item: "Under Commandant's Orders".

Employment Background: Dishonorably discharged from the Imperial Navy after less than 2 years into his first tour as an officer. Discharge was the result of a court martial case brought by a superior citing insubordination.

Law Enforcement Background: Several counts of hijacking and theft over the years since leaving the Empire. All counts are either past their statute of limitations or expunged or dismissed due to lack of evidence or overturned on appeal.

Military Background: Did legitimately hold rank of Captain during limited time in the military.

Marital Status/Family: Mother and father both retired and moved to Earth. Brother is married with kids and working at a fabrication facility for the Empire's fleet. No known children at present, but not from a lack of trying.

Significant Other: Rumored to be "courtesan" to a princess of a border interstellar kingdom, but no evidence available to corroborate this information. No wife or long term partner.

Hobbies: In his words "a little of this, a little of that"

Skills: Very capable pilot, able to do very unorthodox maneuvers with ships that no sane ship captain would try. Handy with pistol sized weapons. Not a true technician, but very adept at "making do" with what he has on hand. For interpersonal skills, please see "Significant Other" section.

Weapons: Two heavily modified blaster pistols, various improvised weapons tucked inside his coat at all times, including but not limited to timed/remote explosives, shock darts, concussion grenades, etc.

History: ***Redacted by Imperial Command***

 

[JawnKarTurr]

Two new writers....welcome. I will outfit you shortly as now I will finally have some down time where I may do some writing. Any questions please feel free to asks.

Rex Lionheart...loved your first post and more is coming from me and for the others. As well as getting your outfitting complete.

Welcome to the Fleet Boys and Girls...

 

[victoria_cummings]

Waiting for love2rp to comeback so can continue out little meeting

 

[JudeRodney]

Okay, just to clear things up with that mass of posts: Did any of that happen, and how should we proceed?

 

[BRIGHTWELL]

fyi

I have told JKT what my plan is. I will be staying in his frame work but expanding on posts all ready on the site. My charactor is a bit of a loose cannon. If you wish to interact with my charactor feel free to do so. I will be following a slightly different path. I hope you all enjoy!

 

[swm2486]

Awesome. I can't wait to be outfitted and see where we can get things going. Looking forward to making things work here.

 

[JawnKarTurr]

We're at the beginning of a very busy first day and I will be posting what's going on very soon. Had a few emergency calls at my job which through off a day and night off. Still have time to work on it though. Just trying to catch up with some time sensitive stuff including my injury report. Thanks for all the interest people just try to hang with me.

 

[JawnKarTurr]

BRIGHTWELL suggestions John Carter Approved

Class of ships.


These were writer suggested names and I like them. I've made a few notes, but otherwise I'm happy and hope people develop such interesting ideas. Sex and violence are a lot more fun in a story with a rich background.

Scout Ships (Small, Medium, Large sizes used for Infiltration/Subversion/Escort)
The little work horses of the galaxy. Patrol, spy, survey, fighter support, bombers, infiltrators, and explorers. Endless configurations and always useful.
Small Scout: Spider, Praying Mantis, Grass Hopper
Medium Scout: Cobra, Rattler, Moccasin
Large Scout: Hammer head, Mako Shark, Bull


Take the fight to the enemy in this small combat craft. Generally light fighters have a crew of one, medium have two, and heavy have three or more. These are general rules though, but more hands more can be accomplished. Robots have also taken up roles in craft operations.

Fighter/Bomber (Attack)
Fighters,
Light Fighters: Sting Ray, Manta Ray
Medium Fighters: Hawk, Falcon, Eagle
Heavy Fighters: Tiger Shark, Thunder Chief, Tornado

Bombers,
Rain death down on your enemies. Hit their capital ships with all you've got and gather recon as you do it.
Light Bombers: Mosquito, Wasp, Hornet
Medium Bomber: Dart, Hustler, Dragon
Heavy Bomber: Intrepid, Repulse,Vengeur

Transporter (Resupply)
Freight has to be moved around the galaxy whether it's troops or commerce. Small transports start with 50 tons of cargo space and continue from there.
Transport Small: Cloud Rider, Whisper Jet, Hump Back
Transport medium: Star Lifter, Whirlwind , Camel Back,
Transport Large: Quazar Mover, Typhoon, Mountain Back

Fast-Attack Assault Raider (Escort/Attack/Subversion)
A true warrior's vessel found somewhere between the fighters and the capital ship. With no real civilian role this is a warship in it's purest form.
Light AARs: Flash,Sprinter, Buccaneer
Medium AARs: Lighting, Mustang, Marauder
Heavy AARs:Hurricane, Stallion, Corsair

Destroyer (Infiltration/Subversion/Attack)
A fast maneuverable long-endurance warship intended to escort larger vessels in a fleet, convoy or battle group and defend them against smaller powerful short-range attackers. Not much has changed since the blue water navies of the past.
Light Destroyer: Buckley, Nicolas, Trinidy
Medium Destroyer: Dagger, Dirk, Stiletto
Heavy Destroyer:Neptune, Poseidon,Aegir

Escort Ship (highly-powered, heavily-armed warship)
A starship whose primary purpose is to accompany other vessels as a means of protection. Escorts typically protected lesser armed vessels, or vessels carrying an important cargo. Similar to a destroyer, but found in many civilian fleets.
NO light Escorts-
Medium Escorts:Lancers, Knights, Dragoons
Heavy Escorts:Gallions, Frigates, Brigantines

Battleship (Infiltration/Subversion/Attack/Escort)
The large armored warships of the galaxy with impressive weapons systems. It is the only type of ship that cannot fit inside the space station, but can be moored alongside.

No light Battleships-One of the Alien allies does manufacture "pocket battleships"
Medium Battleship: Cruiser, Little State
Heavy Battleship: Monster, Hyper, Super
Mega Heavy: Condor, Raptor

 

[JawnKarTurr]

James Venock

Occupation Asset: One heavy stun pistol, Three size changing manacles, One data slate that continuously updates Bounties inside the Empire, One pair of heavy duty assault boots, Three large heavy blades, One standard Empire Battle rifle with scope and 400 rounds of armor piercing ammunition, Four blasters 1 small, 2 medium, and 1 heavy.

Employment Assets: One contact on the mercenary network, One contact in the Empire's court system, One arms dealer contact.

Hobby Assets: One flax, One brothel scan pass (You don't get in for free, but they track your status, behavior etc...), A three month supply of whiskey in deep space storage containers, One recharge chamber (increased healing and improved sleep), A mini work station that produces "refresh shakes".

Skill Assets: One shipboard underground contact, One sniper blast rifle (with on extra power pact), One heavy duty machete, One set of basic swat armor, One double barrel shotgun (with 400 rounds of ammo and one ammunition belt that can hold 20 rounds.).


Ship: One medium Class Rattle scout ship with a modified weapon's package.

 

[Othermoose]

Yay! I got my toy box!

 

[JawnKarTurr]

Phoebe Kaylingta

Starting Package:

One multipurpose work tool, One small extreme cold weather survival blaster, one modified blaster recharge unit, one modified tech screwdriver, One good reinforced utility flight suit, One very sexy tight body suit, one small toolkit, One workbook laptop computer with cables and AI program, One travel backpack, Three throw knives.




No ship living in the shadows you don't get a lot of gear.

 

[Little_Tease]

dont need much i take what i need if i dont have it... Thank you...

 

[JawnKarTurr]

Richard Black

Educational Background Assets: One industrial cooking work station (complete with recipe computer and basic cooking equipment), One large razor sharp collection of alien cooking knives, Three Perfect pour drink taps (just attach to a keg/barrel to pour the perfect drink), One robot kitchen assistant, One five ton shipping crate in station storage filled with high end ingredients in special storage cells.

Employment Background Assets: (In station personnel storage) Nine tables complete with chairs and settings, One brewery workstation (capable of making beers with a small supply of ingredients), A four month supply of booze for a small bar, three restaurant grade cooking units, six sets of silk sheets, One good set of cookware, You have 270 pre-made "comfort food" meals, one case of 50 pure glazier water bottles, One contact in restaurant supply, One contact a former escort with connections to other working girls, one contact in military supplies.


Weapon Assets: One standard Empire Battle rifle (2 extra magazines and 700 rounds of standard ammunition), One shotgun (30 extra rounds), One set of 15 throwing knives and a target.

Three possible locations available throw the military commercial incentives program.....Don't like any of these wait a week and apply again.

MacLaren's Pub & Grub
One of the best known chain restaurants in the galaxy is looking for a manager. Typical bar food and drinks....the same at every location. Generic deep fried delights.

Location option #1...
A small space that could easily become a bar with kitchen space and room for dinning. It has two standard living spaces above the space just mentioned.

Location option #2...
A larger space someone will snap up soon. A good size restaurant space with a kitchen space with plenty of storage including an environmental room which could become a wine cellar or other specialty storage area. Also included is a lobby space and a 18 unit sleeping area (one large room and bathroom in each unit).

 

[JawnKarTurr]

Captain Dash Claynor III

Occupation Assets: One portable navigation computer, One small data tower filled with star chart information, One vibro-cutlass, One set of starship repair tools, two deep space space suits, One star explore workstation (includes research computer, maps, work tools and other office supplies), One light man-portable blaster cannon (heavy cable and power generator included), One refitted escape lifeboat that carries 5, but controls, engines, and life support improved for extended travel).

Latest Transport Ship you've been assigned too...
Swallowtail: Cargo Spaceship. The Swallowtail has a long triangular hull with four large engine nacelles. The ship is equipped with several large bulk cargo tanks and an advanced computer system.


Law Enforcement Background: One blaster carbine, Two sets of reinforced battle battle armor, One combat space suit, One heavy duty industrial welder, One Override computer (that allows a user to hack into ship computers from inside the ship only), One alien razor sharp boarding pike (light weight and deadly), One medical chamber (heals injuries and performs basic surgery as you sleep).



Skill Assets: Capital ship training simulator workstation, Five barrels of Fleet standard table wine, One heavy duty long life Fleet style data pad communicator unit, One chart creating computer, Four medium blasters, One blaster recharge unit, One alien trade coffee maker (has two cells in it each capable of 50,000 cups of coffee before exhaustion), One improved targeting computer which can be tied into any Fleet craft, One ship sleep system.


Weapons: Two heavily modified blaster pistols (jumbo magazines and double sights), One boot knife, two concussion grenades, Fleet Broadsword, Four explosives( that can be mounted and timer set), One dart gun (10 shock darts), One mini blaster.

 

[JawnKarTurr]

Flight Officer Rex Lionheart

Occupation Assets:
One improved targeting computer which can be tied into any Fleet craft, One heavy duty Fleet survival flight suit, Two fighter repair droids, One squadron data management slate, Helmet and flight suit with Star Dreamer stenciled on them.

Educational Background Assets: one set of Fleet Dorm room furnishings, Four cadet uniforms, One helmet with heads up display for racing, One heavy survival blaster, One standard Empire Battle rifle (5 extra magazines and 900 rounds of "classified" Flesh ripper ammunition.*Empire version of an alien big game hunting round), Leather Moon patrol jacket with American flag on the back, Advanced racing simulator training workstation, Navy server with flight data on all Fleet fighters, two hundred feet of computer cables, four work computers, One advanced officer's work station complete with star charts, files, and computer that updates the strategic situation.



Employment Background Assets: Five aprons, four cooking knives, One discount card for Big Mike's food Center, Four flight suits, One set of fighter repair tools, One storage crate with 30 tons of modified racing components for star ships.

Law Enforcement Background: One stun baton, One medium blaster with three magazines, One riot control thrower and backpack (two contains of a nonlethal but very nasty chemical agent), set of tracking binoculars.


Military Background Assets: One Fleet Broadsword, Advanced Medkit, One turbo hover bike, One computer filled with racing games, One fleet fighter combat simulator.

Hobby Assets:One bookcase of trophies, One modified Eagle fighter built for speed but standard otherwise.

Skills: One portable navigation computer

Weapon Assets: Three hand blasters, Empire P-25 blaster, One Marine Pulse rifle (3 magazines and 300 rounds of caseless ammunition), One blaster magazine recharge with eight slots.