OOC: Idea without a Name

[Leopald]

I'm confused. Are we talking about drugs or gifts from Aunt Flo?

 

[Daisymell]

LOL! I think it was a drug reference for Cats and I just thought it was funny. It matters little. I know someone had questions about what could be started as a side conversation and I hope I answered them. If you have more...or hey someone wants to call me on my character's cell while my character is at the loony bin let me know.

 

[cats]

Life get addicted.



Disclaimer: Only use life if legal in your current location. You should not use life while nursing, if your pregnant or may become pregnant. Research shows life may cause cancer in the state of California.

 

[Daisymell]

OMFG LMAO. That is too hilarious.

 

[cats]

Sorry I am behind schedule. I ment to look up the posion I am using as I stole the idea from a real killer. But I don't have the time right now. Sorry.

Edit: I believe epinephrine is the medication. In many movies it is the injection given to those who flat line, usually after the defibrillator, (the shocker), doesn't work. Any how if I recall right an over dose causes heart failure which likely would end with some one putting more of this in, as a result of them putting it into your system they wouldn't think it odd to find in the dead body, after all they put it there.

Any how I leave it up Daisymell as to weather or not this assassination works. Samuel leaves the killing to his minions after all, makes it more of a challenge.

 

[Vampire_Neliel]

I know it might just be a personal annoyance, but I see a LOT of mixed up words (homonyms used wrong). Would anyone object to me correcting grammar or those such words (making a note of it here) for perhaps at least a learning opportunity.

I know this is supposed to be a writers site, and thusly one should have proper grammar and whatnot. However, as this isn't the "help me learn English" board, I figured I should ask first.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Wow, it is turning out to be a lot harder to write for an insane person than I thought it would be. I keep wanting to respond like a sane person would, but then I remember that my character isn't sane and thus cannot resond like a sane person would.

Vamp, the sad thing is, most of us here are natural born English speakers, so we know our grammar and whatnot, but some of us just are not very good at spelling and grammar when dealing with the written English language, especially when either drunk or otherwise distracted, which is quite common around here. So, I suggest that you just go with the flow and try not to let the odd grammatical error bug you.

 

[cats]

I know it might just be a personal annoyance, but I see a LOT of mixed up words (homonyms used wrong). Would anyone object to me correcting grammar or those such words (making a note of it here) for perhaps at least a learning opportunity.

I know this is supposed to be a writers site, and thusly one should have proper grammar and whatnot. However, as this isn't the "help me learn English" board, I figured I should ask first.

Lol, I am not at all surprised to see this after one of my posts. Homonyms are very much a weakness of mine as is spelling. I have to pay very close attention to use then instead of than.

Any ways I agree with jedi, it is best to simply focus on the substance of a post and not the errors there in. After all this is meant to be fun a relaxing if it isn't, people or more likely to stop playing.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

He was refering to your posts cats? Oh yeah...duh. I stopped noticing all of your errors long time ago. lol

 

[Vampire_Neliel]

He was refering to your posts cats? Oh yeah...duh. I stopped noticing all of your errors long time ago. lol

Firstly... I'm plenty female thanks

Yeh, I don't care about spelling too much, I know I fail at it too and just abuse the spell-checker whenever I can, built into Opera ftw (or just use dictionary.com) My most hated word is 'separate'.. which always starts out as 'seperate' till I see the red line and remember eaae (symmetric). Then there is 'benifit' which.. UHG 'benefit' (by thinking been). So yeh... I hear you on the spelling one! M$ Word raped American's ability to spell well.

and yeh.. the here/hear thing in his last post triggered that idea.

Just the editor and helpfulness in me wanting to help out, but I'll keep out of it if not desired.



P.S. I have no issues even when I'm drunk (which I have been all of once, and made a post with!!) so I can't fathom that as an excuse hehehe

 

[Vampire_Neliel]

So... this is sepArate for a reason..

I was wondering if anyone knew how hospitals deal with visitors. Do they log it with a sign-in sheet? If so, then Willow would get flagged on someone unknown trying to visit Donovan. Lemme know; if so, I can at least use that for a post :/

 

[Daisymell]

Kissa could have set it up that if anyone came to see Donovan she would be notified but he still gave a alias. She could try to hunt down the alias but I think Donovan should be the first victim...it would tie us all together against him.

 

[Daisymell]

Would someone be willing to keep this moving by calling Kissa's cell phone? We can discuss anything at this point...ideas for the op and the insane man.

 

[cats]

Is the name Donovan based on Donovan Deegan? I am quite curious.

Your welcome to flag the visitor. I don't think it will do much good, in game, however, in terms of writing it'll be fun.

I think Willow should call Kissa saying a random name popped up trying to visit Donovan. That will get us moving on the main plot.

As far as Sam goes, I think he is pretty well covered. He walked there so you can't track a car via plate. He used a fake name and a fake reason for knowing Donovan. Most importantly he isn't killing Donovan, a temp will. After all this murder hasn't happened yet.

Just a side note, since I have had stories go like this before. Please keep in mind Sam is extremely intelligent, and has a great deal of experience. I don't think this first act should be traced back to him, at least not this soon. 10, 15 pages down the road sure but not yet.

 

[Daisymell]

we are also experienced and intelligent but what fun would it be to recognize him right away? No Fun is my answer!

 

[cats]

I know the group is experienced and intelligent. But two masters playing chess still take a great deal of time figuring out what the other is doing. Identifying Sam from one henchmen, to return to analogy that is like understanding what a chess player plans after he moves his first pawn.

Any how I just threw that out there because I don't want Sam to be relieved as a bad guy just yet. Suspect of being a bad guy sure, known bad guy no. Beyond that like I said, I've had people cut short plot like that before.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Post is finally up. Although, I must say, L.J. seems kinda sane there at the end.

I cut the meeting short so Kissa can get on with other things. Plus, I think I gave enough info to give Kissa a place to start with recruiting L.J.

Have fun!

 

[Daisymell]

Switches between sane and insane I think are common for the insane...if that makes sense.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Still around Daisy?

 

[cats]

I've kind of been wondering too.

 

[Daisymell]

Yeah sorry...I went to Alaska and took my computer but the internet was crap. Sorry about the waiting.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Ah, that'll do it. Feels good to be back in civilization, doesn't it?

 

[cats]

Are you saying Alaskans are not civilized. Jedi that is prejudice.

 

[Daisymell]

Actually I loved Alaska. It was great!

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Are you saying Alaskans are not civilized. Jedi that is prejudice.

No, I'm saying that, geographically, most of Alaska is not civilized.

Anyways, shall I go ahead and post, Daisy, or would you like a second look at my last post?