I may have created a hotel attached to the bar. I figured it could be some mystical concoction of this strange, in-between world so that only those inside see it as time and space shift around them to make this experience weird, dangerous, and creepy. If you hate me for it, let me know and I'll change it.
Still wakin up a bit, so I'm not quite sure I completely follow? If it's the bar making Riley's room a sort of hotel, that's fine, but I would like the world to remain those three main locations of: The Bar, The Broken Dreary Town outside the bar, and The Underground. I mean twist and bend those locations how you see fit of course, but it should stick to the character itself if that makes sense?
I haven't read the post yet, but the Dogskin bar technically has a hotel above it. If you go up the stairs, there are endless hallways and stairs that will eventually lead to your room. Time shifts the way it wants there, sometimes stretching hallways to keep someone walking endlessly. Once they get to their own room, the room itself is tailored to each individual. Darla's was a dorm room (now with a greenhouse), Toby's was a vacation cabin, and Zhaans was like a legit rainforest. So it's really up to your own imagination.
Ok yeah, that’s all I did. I had a guy show Riley and Jezebel to their rooms and Riley was confused because, from the outside she only seemed to see the much smaller bar - the idea that once inside, space and time bends and suddenly she has this place she can stay and has no idea what to make of it, because to her, everything is new and unexplained. I think I’m on the right track then. I’ll definitely keep with the main locations.
Ok yea, you're good then. I mean Jadeknights character will have to find her own room, but there's nothing stopping you guys from making the rooms connected somehow.