BooMerengue
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ya think it's something in the water?
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BooMerengue said:ya think it's something in the water?
Maybe so. He placed the wording on the picture and I think it was a matter of trying to fit it all onto what empty space was there.wildsweetone said:I wish I'd had the chance to know smithpeter. He sounds like an interesting person.
Eve, I like that poem but something about it kinda bugs me. Would it have been 'better' to put 'I wear them for you' up with the top wording, and just left the last 'I don't like them otherwise' by itself? Or is there a reason for it being the way you've got it?
wso - still learning.
ruminator said:Here's a whatever it is that I did a few years ago. The picture is one I captured on computer with a videocamera and altered with a filter.
I have no idea if it's any good as a work but it has some interesting appeal.
WickedEve said:Maybe so. He placed the wording on the picture and I think it was a matter of trying to fit it all onto what empty space was there.
I have another old poem that he did a drawing for (I'm not sure how many I have). The poem isn't very good, but the drawing is neat looking. I'll see if I can dig it up.
Edit: Here is a page I uploaded from Sexlacious (an old site I had before eve's habit) The poem inspired the drawing. Both are from 2002. The poem is about two women and some yellow flowers caught up in a tornado. Once again, remember the poem is much earlier work of mine, but the drawing is fabulous!
WickedEve said:I found this illustrated poem earlier tonight while sorting out tons of files. I wrote the poem in 2002 and smithpeter did the illustration for it. He was kind and generous, even when my early poetry was struggling.
ruminator said:Here's a whatever it is that I did a few years ago. The picture is one I captured on computer with a videocamera and altered with a filter.
I have no idea if it's any good as a work but it has some interesting appeal.
Angeline said:You're good. Do more, please.
ruminator said:Thanks.....you mean more than once in a blue moon?
Here's another....not sure of the quality of the writing. It's another of the early ones. The photo is also one I took. Even if the poetry is lacking, the overall effect of the combination is interesting. I'm still playing. The 'poetry' here is again a case of random sentences or phrases and not an attempt at anything structured.
ruminator said:Thanks.....you mean more than once in a blue moon?
Here's another....not sure of the quality of the writing. It's another of the early ones. The photo is also one I took. Even if the poetry is lacking, the overall effect of the combination is interesting. I'm still playing. The 'poetry' here is again a case of random sentences or phrases and not an attempt at anything structured.
BooMerengue said:That one's pretty good, Rummy. Had it been mine I think I would have faded out the whole picture a bit, and then just placed the text right on the pic, rather than on a sheet of paper. Just my humble opinion, ya know.
ruminator said:Thanks.
I'm sure I had that one saved too....
I do as many different combinations as possible and then have a hard time deciding which one to use.
If a picture like this one, has a high amount of contrast in the light/dark areas the image has to be washed way out to be able to see the text. I think that may be why I put it on a sheet.
BooMerengue said:Maybe you can trying fading the picture just a bit more so the text is stronger. The picture will still be there. I did one once just like this- it was a beautiful pic of galloping horses... I faded it a lot cuz it was a long poem on top of it, but it came out looking pretty cool. Just a thought... Actually I think it will work better... as it is theres too much for the eye to see. With just the faded pic and the text it makes the words stronger and the picture dreamier.
I'm sooo frustrated I cant get on my computer and show you what I mean. *sigh I'm not real good with words.
ruminator said:...great, now I'm hungry.
very nice
Angeline said:Yeah, it had that effect on me. I'm thinking of going out for a bagel.
hey this one turned out good without the bells and whistlesAngeline said:Here's an old one of my illustrated poems. I use photoshop now, but honestly I miss this crummy little program that came with a scanner I bought years ago. It didn't have photoshop's bells and whistles, but it was so user friendly.
I wrote it for the fabulous Judo.
neonurotic said:hey this one turned out good without the bells and whistles