MadeupName01
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Hi, I flatter myself that I am an aspiring author on this site. However, my recent 4 submissions have all been rejected as ‘AI generated’ which isn’t correct. I have used Grammarly to correct my poor punctuation and the use of a ‘passive’ voice, but other than that, it really is all my own work.
My work makes use of the world created by OneAgainst with his permission.
The rejection reply says to rewrite it or use a proofreader’s services.
I have added the first part of my story to this post, which is no more than where it is from, and a very brief overview of where it all started. I have run the attached document through a couple of free AI checking tools both of which say it is not AI written.
Is there any other way of approaching this other than a rewrite and/or a third party to check it?
Before posting this I checked my returned posts all 4 were rejected however today one has been posted....I am more confused than ever.
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I have been a 'lurker' on this site for several years, and, to my shame, I have never had the courtesy to write and thank some of the authors whose stories I have enjoyed. This changed recently.
Why my epiphany?
I have been following a story by Oneagainst. The story described the lives of Bea, Lotte, and Hector (who, in the stories, is always referred to as Hec) as they navigated their relationship with Hec, who became more and more submissive. It was a great story and my sole reason for being here.
So when the author ended the story after some 30+ episodes, I was deeply unhappy. I was unhappy because, as the author had created such a rich tapestry of characters and plot threads, I couldn't understand why he chose to finish the story when he did.
I was so unhappy that I contacted the author to enquire why he ended the story. Put simply, the author wanted to work on other stories, and since the Bea, Lotte and Hec story had taken up so much of his time, he wanted to close it down and begin work on others.
Still unhappy, I wrote a brief outline on how the story could proceed into a 4th ‘season’ as it were. I submitted it to the author and asked permission to continue the story and play in the world he created. To my surprise, he permitted me to do so.
The following stories continue from the last episode of One Against's story. Whilst I have tried to make this continuation of a larger story as standalone as possible, it is much richer if people have read the original work from which it follows on.
A very brief summary of the back story.
Hector signed a slave contract with his wife, Lotte, to become her 24/7 submissive in Tell Me What You Want. Lotte added to Hector's humiliation by bringing Bea, her best friend, into the arrangement to train him, but it didn't go as she planned. In Total Female Control, Lotte tightened her hold on her slave husband with Bea's help. The final part of the story, Total Power Exchange, ends with Bea asking Hec to marry her, and he agrees. My work continues with the actual wedding and continues from there.
Even if you decide my continuation stories aren't worth reading, I recommend reading Oneagainst's works; they read well and are believable.
My work makes use of the world created by OneAgainst with his permission.
The rejection reply says to rewrite it or use a proofreader’s services.
I have added the first part of my story to this post, which is no more than where it is from, and a very brief overview of where it all started. I have run the attached document through a couple of free AI checking tools both of which say it is not AI written.
Is there any other way of approaching this other than a rewrite and/or a third party to check it?
Before posting this I checked my returned posts all 4 were rejected however today one has been posted....I am more confused than ever.
Part 1 ***************************************************************************************************************************************************************
I have been a 'lurker' on this site for several years, and, to my shame, I have never had the courtesy to write and thank some of the authors whose stories I have enjoyed. This changed recently.
Why my epiphany?
I have been following a story by Oneagainst. The story described the lives of Bea, Lotte, and Hector (who, in the stories, is always referred to as Hec) as they navigated their relationship with Hec, who became more and more submissive. It was a great story and my sole reason for being here.
So when the author ended the story after some 30+ episodes, I was deeply unhappy. I was unhappy because, as the author had created such a rich tapestry of characters and plot threads, I couldn't understand why he chose to finish the story when he did.
I was so unhappy that I contacted the author to enquire why he ended the story. Put simply, the author wanted to work on other stories, and since the Bea, Lotte and Hec story had taken up so much of his time, he wanted to close it down and begin work on others.
Still unhappy, I wrote a brief outline on how the story could proceed into a 4th ‘season’ as it were. I submitted it to the author and asked permission to continue the story and play in the world he created. To my surprise, he permitted me to do so.
The following stories continue from the last episode of One Against's story. Whilst I have tried to make this continuation of a larger story as standalone as possible, it is much richer if people have read the original work from which it follows on.
A very brief summary of the back story.
Hector signed a slave contract with his wife, Lotte, to become her 24/7 submissive in Tell Me What You Want. Lotte added to Hector's humiliation by bringing Bea, her best friend, into the arrangement to train him, but it didn't go as she planned. In Total Female Control, Lotte tightened her hold on her slave husband with Bea's help. The final part of the story, Total Power Exchange, ends with Bea asking Hec to marry her, and he agrees. My work continues with the actual wedding and continues from there.
Even if you decide my continuation stories aren't worth reading, I recommend reading Oneagainst's works; they read well and are believable.
, I'm fairly convinced that about 95% of reports of being rejected for AI from writers who genuinely honestly don't believe they've used AI comes down to this exact situation.
