Roses are Red, Violets are blue... Part Deux

[badjanus]

Roses are red
Aw, shucks, I’d blush.
I know that I am
A bit of a lush.

Roses are red,
They don't bloom when it's colder
Hush my little lush,
You may rest on my shoulder

 

[EbersMoll]

Roses are red
The new week begins
I’m still in my bed
Contemplating the bins

 

[37_ttej]

(Jett is away this week tutoring at poetry summer camp)

So, welcome everyone.
We're going to start with a basic form.
It begins,

Roses are red,​

Violets are blue​

The first two lines are thus a couplet with four syllables each.
The final two lines are also a couplet with either four or five syllables each.
And the rhyming form is ABCB but can also be ABAB.

Remember this is a light-hearted poetic form in which you can infuse romantic emotion with a sense of fun.
So have a go and I'll provide you with feedback.

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

hay Gurl​

wanna fuck?​

Feedback:

OK, well it's a start.​

I can see the thought you've put into it.​

Let's try getting more syllables into lines three and four.​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

Dam gurl dem titties​

Wanna sex wit me?​

Feedback:

Yes, correct - and matching number of syllables, in lines three and four.​

Well done.​

Have a go at rhyming the second and fourth lines.​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

Yurr phat ass real fine​

i gotta fuck you​

Feedback:

Er, nicely done.​

And you've maintained the syllable count.​

Let's continue to work on the spelling.​

What about a more light-hearted approach to your romantic gesture?​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

​

Fuck yur​

romanse dickwad​

If'n i wanna bitch for​

sexy tim I'll pay da pimp at​

ta club.​

Feedback:

*sigh*​

I really didn't think it would be this hard.​

Just two lines!​

Wait ...​

Is that a cinquain?​

Unbelievable.​

I don't get paid enough for this shit.​

(PS: Jett is not a poetry tutor. Nor is he at summer camp. But he is on a short break.)

 

[Littlefox89]

Roses are red,
I’m going to bed,
Violets are blue,
Won’t you come too?

 

[badjanus]

Roses are beautiful,
Violets I love less,
The answer in my head,
Is a resounding yes!

 

[fsa52]

Roses are lovely!
Other flowers are too!
I’m on Bloody Mary three,
So let me buy a drink for you!

 

[Taegul]

(Jett is away this week tutoring at poetry summer camp)

So, welcome everyone.
We're going to start with a basic form.
It begins,

Roses are red,​

Violets are blue​

The first two lines are thus a couplet with four syllables each.
The final two lines are also a couplet with either four or five syllables each.
And the rhyming form is ABCB but can also be ABAB.

Remember this is a light-hearted poetic form in which you can infuse romantic emotion with a sense of fun.
So have a go and I'll provide you with feedback.

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

hay Gurl​

wanna fuck?​

Feedback:

OK, well it's a start.​

I can see the thought you've put into it.​

Let's try getting more syllables into lines three and four.​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

Dam gurl dem titties​

Wanna sex wit me?​

Feedback:

Yes, correct - and matching number of syllables, in lines three and four.​

Well done.​

Have a go at rhyming the second and fourth lines.​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

Yurr phat ass real fine​

i gotta fuck you​

Feedback:

Er, nicely done.​

And you've maintained the syllable count.​

Let's continue to work on the spelling.​

What about a more light-hearted approach to your romantic gesture?​

Your poem

Roses are red​

Violets are blue​

​

Fuck yur​

romanse dickwad​

If'n i wanna bitch for​

sexy tim I'll pay da pimp at​

ta club.​

Feedback:

*sigh*​

I really didn't think it would be this hard.​

Just two lines!​

Wait ...​

Is that a cinquain?​

Unbelievable.​

I don't get paid enough for this shit.​

(PS: Jett is not a poetry tutor. Nor is he at summer camp. But he is on a short break.)

Roses are red
Violets aren't orange
Your lesson is good
~What goes here again~?

 

[Cwtchseeker]

Roses are red?
What about these yellow ones?
Does it really matter what colour?
They’re all beautiful

 

[EbersMoll]

Roses are red
I’m going besark
This guy on TV
Is a complete jerk.

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Violets aren't orange
Your lesson is good
~What goes here again~?

Feedback:

Great start.
Your third line shows confidence and an understanding of the form.
Your fourth line has a correct syllable count but the rhyming could be improved. Perhaps ‘orange’ was not the best choice to end Line 2.
What about this?

Roses are red,
Violets impressed.
Your lesson is good,
Jett, you are the best!

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I’m too tired
To finish this poem properly.

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Pumpkins are orange
It’s spooky month
So no one gives a shit about soppy romance poems.

 

[beachbaby179]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'll tell you, Jett ..
I worry about you.

 

[ccs29745]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I've got a crush
On a certain you know who.

 

[Trubbycat]

Violets are blue
Roses are red
Last night a Lit friend
Gave me virtual head.

 

[Taegul]

Roses are red
They grow in dirt
Just mind the thorns
They fricking hurt.

 

[37_ttej]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'll tell you, Jett ..
I worry about you.

Roses are red
Aww, shucks, that you
Care so about Jett.
I worry me too!

 

[Kat73]

Roses are red
Whiskey is brown
Let's drink a whole bottle
And fuck all over town

 

[Taegul]

Violets are red
Roses are blue
I might be color blind
And bullshitting you.

 

[ccs29745]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I just don't think
I can keeping without you

 

[fisherfella]

Roses are red
violets are blue
Trump is a moron
what can we do?

 

[mnbreastluver]

Roses are red
Christmas Eve is over
I wonder with now some rest
Santa bent Mrs. Clause over

 

[Noor]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I started this thread
So long ago for you

 

[beachbaby179]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
If it's after midnight
Happy New Year to you!

 

[mnbreastluver]

Roses are red
New Years is near
Keep your blinds open while undressing
So I can still peer.