Sex & Shenanigans

[BrendaBear]

Question for the Shenanigang? I actually finished an erotica story for the first time in ages, but am not sure if I'm rusty or not. Would anyone be willing to do a test read?

I will be happy to read it, but I am brutally honest and will point out silly grammer errors and such… not to be mean, I figure if you want feedback, I will be supportive of your efforts and do what I can to help you.

 

[SherlockianMan]

Absolutely. Are you looking on feedback about grammar, spelling, etc.? Or content, flow, story?

More content flow.

 

[SherlockianMan]

I will be happy to read it, but I am brutally honest and will point out silly grammer errors and such… not to be mean, I figure if you want feedback, I will be supportive of your efforts and do what I can to help you.

As an English Major myself, I expect nothing less.

 

[BrendaBear]

As an English Major myself, I expect nothing less.

https://media1.tenor.com/m/pqTT_OTly_wAAAAd/umm-no-alexis.gif

 

[UnquietDreams]

Feel-good post for the day:
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And when he grew up?
"Pocket sand!"

 

[SherlockianMan]

I just realized that I can't attach a file through PM without a URL link. Does anyone know if a PM will support a full story (5k words or so)?

 

[UnquietDreams]

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I’ll see myself out

Okay, I legitimately laughed out loud a little bit.

 

[Bbl87]

Question for the Shenanigang? I actually finished an erotica story for the first time in ages, but am not sure if I'm rusty or not. Would anyone be willing to do a test read?

I have a feeling this group will be pretty good about it, especially compared to the general Lit population.

In one of my works, I used persay instead of per se in the tagline because I was stupid and tired when I finished it, and good lord the comments. Nothing about the actual story, I had to delete like 7-10 comments just being dickheads about it.

 

[BrendaBear]

I just realized that I can't attach a file through PM without a URL link. Does anyone know if a PM will support a full story (5k words or so)?

Only if you break it up into parts.

 

[MischiefMakerAlways]

I just realized that I can't attach a file through PM without a URL link. Does anyone know if a PM will support a full story (5k words or so)?

Multiple messages?
Or a restricted Google docs link?

 

[UnquietDreams]

I have a feeling this group will be pretty good about it, especially compared to the general Lit population.

In one of my works, I used persay instead of per se in the tagline because I was stupid and tired when I finished it, and good lord the comments. Nothing about the actual story, I had to delete like 7-10 comments just being dickheads about it.

Oh yes, been there. Well, not exactly there, persay...

 

[UnquietDreams]

Multiple messages?
Or a restricted Google docs link?

Google docs works really well, as you can give commenting rights.

 

[BrendaBear]

Oh yes, been there. Well, not exactly there, persay...

https://media1.tenor.com/m/OAZskzCLs1QAAAAd/10out-of10-candice-hutchings.gif

 

[MischiefMakerAlways]

I'm signing off for the night though. Toodles

 

[SherlockianMan]

Multiple messages?
Or a restricted Google docs link?

I saved it to my Dropbox. I'll send it here in a sec

 

[Bbl87]

Google docs works really well, as you can give commenting rights.

That's where I've written all of mine. I also have a collab story that never got finished because the other author left Lit as well as a couple I started and never finished. For the collab story in particular, Google Docs was great.

 

[Kitty_so_frisky]

Feel-good post for the day:
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May they never lose that optimism

And when he grew up?
"Pocket sand!"

 

[thefishfryer]

I have a feeling this group will be pretty good about it, especially compared to the general Lit population.

In one of my works, I used persay instead of per se in the tagline because I was stupid and tired when I finished it, and good lord the comments. Nothing about the actual story, I had to delete like 7-10 comments just being dickheads about it.

At least it wasn't Percy.

 

[Deadfreak]

Question for the Shenanigang? I actually finished an erotica story for the first time in ages, but am not sure if I'm rusty or not. Would anyone be willing to do a test read?

As I read this I thought "I should finish a story, been a while". Then I realized you were WRITING a story not reading.

 

[Deadfreak]

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I've been using Lit as a substitute for fakesbook during recovery from an injury, I hope nobody minds.
I am "Jerry Garcia" on fakesbook and use it exactly as I have used Lit these past several weeks, I find the content here mucho more interesting and/or fun.
Thank you for putting up with me citizens of Literotica

 

[LupineOne]

I’m a fan of all the women that share themselves on this site, moms or not

OMG yes! It isn’t easy to present oneself for “judgement”.

Not gonna deny… when I see anyone responding to someone’s photo of themselves (naughty or not) with just a “like”? It breaks my heart a little. Maybe it is just me, but… if I react, it is a LOVE, it is because they put themselves out there and are beautiful! And if I don’t feel that? I just don’t react because it can be very disheartening to put yourself out there and hear back “you’re okay, I guess”.

All. Of. This. It can be scary as hell putting yourself out there.
Those who do, get mad respect from me.

 

[MissRadiant]

I’m a fan of all the women that share themselves on this site, moms or not

Perfectly said!

 

[Trubbycat]

I just realized that I can't attach a file through PM without a URL link. Does anyone know if a PM will support a full story (5k words or so)?

I sent a story in a pm yesterday. I had to split it in two but it worked fine.

 

[dawn_of_night]

Good morning Fuckers

 

[vagrantx]

The Beekeeper? Are they just running out of nouns? I'm getting serious "Rob Schneider is... a banana!" vibes off of this.
Anyone seen it? I love me some Statham, but, come on.